四级写作日常高频用法.ppt

1、四级辅导-写作专题,刘燕 2011年5月,得分要点,1. 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 2. 作文结构层次是否清晰 3. 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误。 4. 是否能恰当的使用过度性语言 5. 作文字数是否达到要求 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮,四级作文模式,1. 观点类 2. 批驳类 3. 办法类 4. 原因类 5. 谚语类 6. 应用类 7. 图标类 8. 记叙类,观点类,对立观点 My View on opportunity 1. 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。 2. 你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并且适当举例。 3.在你的文章处不要

2、忘记写出你的结论。,Different people have different views on. Some people think that, while others argue that. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe. For another,. taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that

3、 Only ifcan we., just as the saying goes,.,My view on job-hopping 1. 有的人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为。 2. 有的人喜欢经常换工作，因为。 3. 我的看法,Peoples opinions are always different once they talk aboutThose whomaintain thatThey also firmly believe that Many people think otherwise. On the one hand,On the other hand, My own opinio

4、n is thatIf we want to we have to So, why not?,My view on college students taking part-time jobs 1.有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有益的 2. 有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有害的 3. 我的看法,Nowadays more and more people voice growing concern overSome people argue thatin that, while others firmly hold that Personally, I think this question sho

5、uld be probed in depth. On the one hand, the first group is not totally correct becauseOn the other hand,the second opinion seems not so satisfactory because. From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the key lies in Otherwise,事物性质 My view on double BA degree 1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见 2.

6、我对这一现象的看法,Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students.In this way, Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, Moreover,In the third place, Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend,

7、we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not onlybut also,The past decade witnessed the process ofOn the whole, this strategic shift is beneficial in many respects. First and foremost,In the second place,Third,Last but not least, Consequently, we can

8、 see clearly that,Advantages and disadvantages of internet 1. 有些人认为因特网利大于弊 2. 有些人认为弊大于利 我的看法,Nowadays,is playing a more and more important role in peoples daily life. However, peoples opinions are still divided on this piont. Those who are in favor ofclaim that it has a lot of advatages. Firstly,Sec

9、ondly,Last but not least, Those who are opposed tohold that disadvantages are many. In the first place,In the second placeFinally, All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past years witnessed the fast development ofA brighter future is awaiting us if we

10、make good use of,批驳类,批驳做法my view on putting work until the last minute 1. 现在有些人主张将工作留到最后来做 2. 我不同意他们的观点，理由是。,Today more and more peopleThey argue this practice has several advantages. First, Second,For example, I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion. To begin with,In the second place, Finally

11、, From the above analysis, we may arrive at the conclusion that is not a wise choice.,办法类,How to improve our urban environment 1. 改善环境很重要 2. 改善环境的方法,has always been important toAlthough this issue has long been discussed and examined, it would not be true to say that unanimous agreement has been rea

12、ched. In my belief, the more beneficial steps inare as follows. First and foremost,In the second place,Last but not least, In an era when economy develops at such a high speed,is connected with and vital to every citizen in the city. We can never wish to realize our dream of a. Until all of us take

13、actions to,How to eliminate cheating on campus 1. 当前校园中存在很多作弊的现象 2. 解决这一问题的办法是。,Nowadays,It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society. To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind, calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all,Moreover,Last

14、but not least, How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from?only when all of us join in the efforts of at all levels ca we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.,Nowadays we have heard too much about Undoubtedly,are extremely harmful to our society in

15、that When we , we always dream of improving our ability in an efficient way. I hope the following methods, based on my personal experience, can be helpful to all of you. On one hand,On the other hand, From the above analysis, the best way to improve our ability is to combine and ,In recent years, th

16、e problem ofhas become increasingly serious on university campuses, and more and more people voice growing concern over it. Such a phenomenon has brought many unfavorable consequences. To begin with,. Second,Last but not least, It is more then necessary that all of us joined in the efforts to fight

17、against this notorious phenomenon. As to me, I am determined to Moreover, I will try toOnly when every one of us realizes that can we put an end to the phenomenon.,原因类,When asked about, I will not hesitate a moment to say The reasons, in my mind, can be summed up in three respects. All that has been

18、 discussed above points out an undeniable fact that has long been and will always be a national virtue, which all of us should learn by heart and practice with extreme care, because,Nowadays, every one of us has been confronted with aoo many instances ofeither through the mass media or in daily life

19、. We cant help asking ourselves: what is wrong with our society? Is going out of style?,谚语类,The well-known proverbhas long been accepted by all of us. It tells us that Lets takeas an example. Another good case in point is Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion th

20、atSo why not?,There is a famous saying, which means A case in point is From what has been discussed above, we should understand the meaning ofmore clearly. On the one hand,On the other hand,The best way is to,应用类,公开信 Dear, Im writing to you to . its high time that Thank you for kindness! Yours since

21、rely, Li Ming Chairman of the Student Union,演讲辞 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! First Id like to extend my thanks tofor offering me this opportunity to. Im sure I well satify the condition for working as. Since Ive. More importantly, . In addition, if I were elected, I wouldMoreover, To sum up,

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25、for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, xxx,图表作文,一步曲,尽量用一句话把图表反映的问题或现象或趋势归纳出来，放在开头表达清楚。,二步曲,挑选有代表意义的数据点进行详细描述,三步曲,回归传统作文,尽量用一句话把图表反映的问题或现象或趋势归纳出来，放在开头表达清楚。,一步曲,一步曲 尽量用一句话把图表反映的问题或现象或趋势归纳出来，放在开头表达清楚。 The chart reveals that The graph indicates

26、 that The table shows that According to the chart/graph, As can be seen from the table , As shown in the diagram,From the statistics given in the table , we can estimate (conclude) that,Why People Buy Mobile Phones The chart reveals the main reasons why more and more people use mobile phones.,The ch

27、art reveals the main reasons why mobile phones appeal to more and more people.,The chart reveals the main reasons why mobile phone users are increasingly growing.,二步 挑选有代表意义的数据点进行详细描述,From the statistics given in the table , we can conclude that people purchase and use mobile phones primarily for th

28、e sake of communication and dealing with emergency.,Because as is shown in the chart 65%of people think its convenient to communicate with others by using mobile phones. About (approximately) 30% of people hold that a mobile phone is extremely helpful in an emergent situation.,三步 回归传统作文,However, the

29、re still exists problems . Take the service charge as an example, whether one is making a call or answering a call, he has to pay the fee which is much higher than that of fixed phones. Some measures have to be taken in this regard.,Why People Buy Mobile Phones The chart reveals the main reasons why

30、 mobile phones appeal to more and more people.,From the statistics given in the table , we can conclude that people purchase and use mobile phones primarily for the sake of communication and dealing with emergency. Because as is shown in the chart 65%of people think its convenient to communicate wit

31、h others by using mobile phones. About (approximately) 30% of people hold that a mobile phone is extremely helpful in an emergent situation.,However, there still exist problems . Take the service charge as an example, whether one is making a call or answering a call, he has to pay the fee which is m

32、uch higher than that of fixed phones. Some measures have to be taken in this regard.,From the chart we can see clearly that In my mind, the reasons whyare as follows. First,Second, The negative effects ofare also clear. To begin with,. Second, All in all, I should say the advatages outweigh the disa

33、dvatages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhane work and study.,From the chart, we can clearly see that declined from. To and then to,whilerose from to and then toduring the same period. two reasons, in my mind, can account for the fundamental changes. On one hand, On the othe

34、r hand, Such changes have a significant impact onFor one thing, For another, In a word,is beneficial to,记叙类,4.4. 四级作文可能会出现的题目,1）考试的命题作文大都是议论文结构，一般来说题目内容应该是考生所熟悉的，能够有话可说的，如那些社会热点问题就是经常出的题目。 2）但不是所有的热点问题都会成为考试题目。考试题目还要和考试对象的文化背景，年龄特点相一致，所以有关大学生生活，学习，理想等的题目经常出现。 3）作文题目会考虑到考生的语言水平，也就是说学生要求掌握的词汇和结构能否足够表达所考的题目。,.,总的来说，根据学生要求掌握的词汇，根据学生的知识结构，年龄特点和文化背景，出题的范围可大致如下： 科学技术：计算机，克隆，电视，小汽车