《CET写作技巧讲练》PPT课件.ppt

1、CET4 Writing Skills fate is in the hands of a person.,2. 作文测试现场示范,C段：拓展句：A. There is no necessary connection between numbers and luck. a. Numbers are only designed to distinguish things. b. The connection between numbers and luck is sheer coincidence. B. Good luck depends on some factors such as har

2、d work and strong determination. 结尾句：I believe there are lucks sometimes, but I simply dont relate luck to numbers.,2. 作文测试现场示范,第三步：行文。根据框架和要点，连字成句，连句成段，连段成章。（10分钟） （注意适当辅以连接词或转承语） 第四步：收笔。 通读全文，修改和润色（3分钟）。 写好作文的关键因素 语篇结构、套语、句型、用词、条理、语法。,CET4作文结构示意图,题目： 段落I. 主题句 。 推展句1.（论据或例证，下同） 。推展句2. 。推展句3 。 结尾句1.

3、 （根据需要而定，可有可无） 段落II. 主题句 。推展句1. 。推展句2. 。推展句3. 。 结尾句1. （根据需要而定，可有可无） 段落III. 主题句 。推展句1. 。推展句2. 。推展句3. 结尾句1. （统揽全文，呼应中心）,CET4作文常用词汇或套语,一. 转承语： Besides, in addition, moreover, however, nevertheless, despite of +noun ( the fact that), in spite of. 二. 列举要点： for one thing, for another,On the one hand, on t

4、he other hand, Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally,CET4作文常用词汇或套语,三.罗列观点用词： argue, insist that, consider, think, maintain that, recommend that, suggest that. 四.描述趋势、动态用词（主要用于图表作文）： increase, decrease, drop, fall, rise, decline, fluctuate, sharply, dramatically, slightly, greatly, moderately.,CET4作文常用

5、词汇或套语,五.时间词： in recent years, in the past few decades, nowadays, today, in modern times, in our times (age). 六.引述个人观点用词： As far as I am concerned, As for me, In my part, speaking from my own experience. 七.引述原因用词： Why is that? Its probably because, What has caused the problem? The reason whyis that,C

6、ET4作文常用词汇或套语,八.总结论点用词： To sum up, In conclusion, All in all. 九.表述明确观点用词： It goes without saying that Undoubtedly; No doubt 十.引述结果用词： As a result, As a consequence, As a matter of the fact.,3.怎样写好英语段落,主题句的位置主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用

7、，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。,写作中常用的经典句型,1. the + est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard, etc),大多数人都承认，在所有有助于人成功的因素中，努力和机会是最重要的因素。 Of all the factors that contribute to ones success, hard work and opportunity are the most important ones that most people

8、have acknowledged.,2. Nothing is + er than to + Vor: Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V,没有什么比接受良好教育重要的了。 Nothing is more important than to receive good education. 在人的一生中，没有什么比同时在家庭生活和个人职业上成功更难的了。 Nothing is more difficult than to be successful both in family life and personal career in ones life.

9、,3. There is no denying that + S + V . (不可否认，.),不可否认，我们的生活质量已经由坏转好。 There is no denying that the qualities of our life have gone from bad to good. 不可否认，我们的地球正在被环境污染所威胁着。 There is no denying that our globe is being threatened by environmental pollution.,4. It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世

10、界都知道.),全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道经济全球化对我们的生活影响越来越大。 It is universally acknowledged that the economic globalization is having more and more influence on our lives.,5. There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问, .),毫无疑问，我们的教育制度令人不满意。 There is no

11、 doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问，和平与发展已经成为当今时代的主流。 There is no doubt that peace and development have become the essential aspects in our modern times.,6. An advantage of is that + 句子 (.的优点是.),使用太阳能的优点是：它不会制造任何污染。 An advantage of using the solar energy is that i

12、t wont create (produce) any pollution. 养宠物的优点是：宠物可以成为人们的好伴侣。 An advantage of keeping pets is that pets can become peoples good companions.,7. The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 (.的原因是.),我们不得不种树的原因是：他们可以为我们提供新鲜的空气。 The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 人们选择上网交

13、友的原因可能是他们想通过网络来拓展他们的社交圈。 The reason why people choose to make friends online is probably that they want to broaden their social circles through Internet.,8. So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (.是如此.以致于.),时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。 So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 大学生活是如此有益，什么我都不愿用它来交换。 So rew

14、arding is college life that there is nothing that I will trade for it.,9. Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然.),虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不,10. The + er + S + V, the + er +

15、S + V 越是越是,越是努力，你就会越进步。 The harder you work, the more progress you make. 我们书读越多，我们就越有学问。 The more books we read, the more learned we become.,11. By +Ving, can (凭借.，能够.),凭借运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 凭借着对他人友好，我们到哪里都能够交各种各样的朋友。 By being friendly to others, we will ma

16、ke all kinds of friends wherever we go.,12. enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (.使.能够.),听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 大量阅读使我们能够从书上获取各种各样的知识。 Reading extensively will enable us to acquire all kinds of knowledge from books.,13. On no account can we + V (我们绝对不能.),我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 O

17、n no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不应该忽视他人的存在和尊严。 On no account shall we disregard the existence and dignity of others.,14. It is time + S + 过去式 (该是.的时候了),该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 是时候我们该意识到学生们在

18、课上玩电脑游戏的消极作用了。 It is high time that we realized the negative effects of students playing PC games in class hours.,15. It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的) It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的),可想而知，知识在我们的生活中起着重要作用。 It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our

19、life. 很明显，国家的发展相当依赖人才，而人才的培养依靠教育。 It is obvious that the development of a nation relies much on talents and the cultivation of talents depends on education.,16. It pays to + V (.是值得的。),有句话说得好“给人玫瑰，手有余香”。因此，帮助别人是值得的。 Just as a saying goes “give someone a rose and the fragrance remains in your hand.”

20、So it pays to help others. 从长远看，投资教育是值得的。 It pays to invest on education in the long run.,17. be based on (以.为基础，建立在之上),社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 The progress of the society is based on harmony. 众所周知，两国关系是建立在平等和相互利益的基础上的。 As is known to all, the relationship between two countries is based on equality and mutua

21、l interests.,18. Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力地去),我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 尽管还有很长的路要走，我们必须不遗余力得来让我们的社会更和谐更发达。 Although it is still a long way to go, we must spare no efforts to make our society more harmonious and developed.,19. Have a great influence o

22、n (对.有很大的影响),网络对我们的生活有很大的影响。 Internet is having greater influences on our lives. 不可忽视的是：我们的饮食对我们的健康有越来越多的影响。 It cannot be ignored that our diets are having more significant influences on our health.,20. do good to (对.有益) do harm to (对.有害),读书对心灵有益。 Reading does good to our mind. 工作过度对健康有害。 Overwork d

23、oes harm to health.,21. Pose a great threat to (对.造成一大威胁),污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。 Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 恐怖主义对世界的和平和稳定造成一大威胁。 Terrorism has been posing a great threat to the peace and stability of the world.,22. do ones utmost to + V = do ones best (尽全力去.),我们应尽全力去实现我们的人生目标。 We shou

24、ld do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.,写作中常用的句式,1.复合句：,定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句,2. 非谓语动词短语,不定式短语 现在分词短语 过去分词短语,3. 虚拟句式,If Without/But for (that) It is high time that Suggest/advocate/proposethat,4. 强调句式“It bethat”,用于表达对某种因素的强调。 e.g. It is out of remarkable benefits that many manufacturers produce fake

25、 or poor-quality products.,5. 倒装句式,By no means/On no account/Never引导的部分倒装结构，用以加强观点。 e.g. By no means shall we see less of the negative effects that chatting online might have on our lives.,6. 并列句式,常见由 not onlybut also, as well as, in addition, moreover, on the contrary, therefore, as a result 等连接的并列

26、句式。,7. 对比或比照句式,Just as, e.g. Just as every coin has two sides, has its advantages and disadvantages. Like/Unlike, Like most countries in the world, China is also faced with the social problems of aging population.,作文练习题,CET作文练习题,Keeping Pets 随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人喜欢养宠物。 分析潜在的原因。 养宠物对动物是祸是福？,Model:,In rece

27、nt years, with the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more Chinese people choose to keep all kinds of pets, such as dogs, cats, parrots and the like. Why do so many people like keeping pets? On the one hand, some people pursue mental satisfaction on basis of material enjoyment by keepi

28、ng pets; on the other hand, people keep pets in hope of relieving their work pressure. In addition, some old or single people keep company with their pets to ease their loneliness. Last but not least, keeping pets is also a reflection of peoples growing awareness of animal protection.,Is keeping pet

29、s a blessing or misfortune for animals? Just as every coin has two sides, keeping pets has its positive and negative senses. On the one hand, keeping pets helps to enhance peoples awareness of animal protection and to develop human affections for animals. On the other hand, living in human communiti

30、es will deprive animals of their wild nature together with their freedom and abilities to survive, which will turn out to be a misfortune for animals. If we human beings can treat our pets in more proper ways, maybe we can balance between the good and bad sides of keeping pets. 提示：勿提及传播疾病、玩物丧志等，以免离题

31、。,CET作文练习题,Making Friends Online 为什么许多人热衷于网上交友？ 网上交友的利与弊。 我的看法。,Model:,With the rapid development of IT technology, Internet has become a most advanced means of communication for people. As a result, more and more people enjoy making friends online. Just as every coin has two sides, making friends o

32、nline has become a double-edged sword for people. On the one hand, Internet provides us with wider social circles in which we can meet and make friends with people in all parts of the world, and we can broaden our horizon by making friends of different races, sexes, cultures and professions. On the

33、other hand, since Internet is a virtual world, we can easily fall into the traps hidden behind it.,Moreover, addictions to the virtual space may, in the long run, deprive us of the normal social abilities and further isolate us from the real society. As far as I am concerned, since men are the holde

34、rs of the double-edged sword, its all up to us to make good use of this new way of making friends. For one thing, we should stay alert when making friends online. Never be readily dependent on others before confirmation. For another, we should never rely too much on making friends online, instead, we should keep touch with people around in the real society in case we end nowhere in the virtual world of Internet.