英语人教版八年级下册写作课.ppt

1、,全椒三中,王宏霞,HowtoBetteraPieceofWriting,HowtoBetteraPieceofWriting,Betterthelayout(布局)Betterthegrammar（语法）Betterthevocabulary(词汇)Betterthesentences（句子）Betterthelogic(逻辑),Howcanwemakethewritingbetter?,Betterthelayout(布局),Howtomakethewritingbetter,Step1,Abetterlayoutcanmakethewritingmoreclear.,Basiclayou

2、t基本结构,Paragraph1,Paragraph2,Paragraph3,introduction引入,details细节,conclusion总结,为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。要点提示:1.阅读的重要性。2.你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地介绍好书等）,要求：1.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。,书面表达,Apieceofwritingfromastudent(学生作文）,Hello,mydea

3、rfriends.Asweallknow,readingisveryimportanttous.Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld,anditcanmakesusfeelrelaxing.Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading,soIhavesomegoodsuggestion.Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity.Iftherearemorenewbooks,peoplewillbemoreinterestedinreading.Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietlyan

4、dclean.Itisapublicplace.Youcantmakesoundorputrubbishontheground.Ihopemyadvicescouldbegood.Morepeoplewilllikereading.,Doyouthinkitisagoodpieceofwriting?Whyorwhynot?,Para.3conclusion,Para.2details,Putthewritingintoabetterlayout.,Para.1introduction,Hello,mydearfriends.Asweallknow,readingisveryimportant

5、tous.Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld,anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxing.,Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading,soIhavesomegoodsuggestion.Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity.Iftherearemorenewbooks,peoplearemoreinterestedinreading.Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietandclean.Itispublicplace.Youcantmakesoundorputrubb

6、ishontheground.,Iwishmyadvicescouldbegood.Morepeoplewilllikereading.,Betterthegrammar,Step2,GrammarplaysaveryimportantroleinEnglishwriting!,Howtomakethewritingbetter,Commonmistakesingrammar常见语法错误,Partsofspeech词性,Formsofwords词的形式,Tensesofverbs动词时态,Example,XiaoMingisamiddleschoolstudent.HedoesntlearnE

7、nglishcarefulatall.Athome,heenjoyswatchTV.HealwaysforgottogooverhisEnglishlessons.,carefully,watching,forgets,Partsofspeech词性,Formsofwords词的形式,Tensesofverbs动词时态,Hello,mydearfriends.Asweallknow,readingisveryimportanttous.Itcanmakesusunderstandtheworld,anditcanmakeusfeelrelaxing.Iwanttomakemorepeoplel

8、ikereading,soIhavesomegoodsuggestion.Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity.Iftherearemorenewbooks,peoplewillbemoreinterestedinreading.Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietlyandclean.Itisapublicplace.Youcantmakesoundorputrubbishontheground.Ihopemyadvicescouldbegood.Morepeoplewilllikereading.,Findthegramm

9、aticalmistakes,make,relaxed,suggestions,advice,quiet,Betterthevocabulary(词汇),Step3,Bettervocabularycanmakethewritingmorevivid(生动的)andmeaningful.,Howtomakethewritingbetter,1.我希望你能帮助我。,A.Ihopeyoucanhelpme.B.Ilookforwardtoyourhelp.,2.他们冲出教室去吃饭。,A.Theyrushedoutoftheclassroomforlunch.B.Theywalkedoutofthe

10、classroomforlunch.,Howcanwebetterthevocabulary?,Wonderfulphrases(短语)canbeusedinsteadofcommonwords.,Moresuitablewordscanalsobeusedaccordingtothecontext(上下文).,1.Weshouldkeepthereadingroomquietandclean.2.Youcantmakesoundorputrubbishontheground.3.Ihopemyadvicecanbegood.Morepeoplewilllikereading.,noise,t

11、hrow/drop,aresupposedto,useful,enjoy,Turntheunderlinedwordsintobetterones.,Betterthesentences,Step4,Bettersentencescanmakethewritingmoreattractive(有吸引力的).,Howtomakethewritingbetter,1.他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。,Hewonthefirstplace.Hewassurprised.B.Hewassurprisedtowinthefirstplace.,A.Ifinditreallyinterestingtolearn

12、English.B.LearningEnglishisinteresting,Ithink.,2.我认为学英语很有趣。,Howcanwebetterthesentences?,Simplesentencescanbeputintocomplexsentences(复合句)forbetter.,Bettersentencepatterns（句型)canbeusedtoimprovethewriting.,1.Iwanttomakemorepeoplelikereading.Ihavesomegoodsuggestions._makemorepeoplelikereading,Ihavesomeg

13、oodsuggestions.Wecanbuildlotsofsmalllibrariesinthecity.Lotsofsmalllibrariescan_inthecity.3.Youcantmakenoise,andyoucantthrowrubbishontheground.Youarenot_makeanynoise_throwrubbishontheground.,Inorderto,bebuilt,allowedto,Turnthesentencesbelowintobetterones.,or,Betterthelogic(逻辑),Step5,Abetterlogiccanma

14、kereadershaveabetterunderstandingofthewriting.,Howtomakethewritingbetter,表并列：and,bothand;aswellas表转折：but,yet,however,though表因果：because,so,asaresult表递进：notonlybutalso;besides表结果：sothat;suchthat;表先后：First,Second,Third,Finally表时间：when,after,before,assoonas,Linkingwords(连接词),Howcanwebetterthelogic?,Ilik

15、eLiuQian.,Heisacreativemagician.,IlikeLiuQian_heisacreativemagician.,because,Makesentenceswithlinkingwords.,Hedidmagicshows_well_everyonewassurprised.,sothat,CCTVSpringFestivalGala,_heisveryyoung,hehaswonmanyprizes.,Although,Hello,mydearfriends.Asweallknow,readingisveryimportantforus.Itcan_makeusund

16、erstandtheworld,_makeusfeelrelaxed.Inordertomakemorepeoplelikereading,Ihavesomegoodsuggestions._,lotsofsmalllibrariescanbebuiltinthecity._,iftherearemorenewbooks,peoplewillbemoreinterestedinreading._,wearesupposedtokeepthereadingroomquietandclean.Itisapublicplace,_youarenotallowedtomakenoiseorthrowr

17、ubbishontheground.Ihopemyadvicecouldbeuseful,_morepeoplewillenjoyreading.,notonly,butalso,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Finally/lastly,so,and,Fillintheblankswithsuitablelinkingwords.,layout(布局)2.grammar（语法）3.vocabulary(词汇)4.sentences（句子）5.logic(逻辑),Whatisagoodpieceofwriting?,threeparagraphs,fewornomistak

18、es,suitable(phrases),complexsentences,suitablelinkingwordsaccordingtorelations,WritingTask,英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“HowtoGetonWellwithOthers”为题，写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1.与人友好相处的重要性。2.如何与人友好相处的建议。要求：1.词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。,Asweallknow,itsveryimportantforustogetonwellwithothers._