高考英语复习写作第19讲如何写发言稿牛津译林版

第19讲怎样写讲话稿第1页一、魔法导航讲话稿在近几年高考作文中一直占有一席之地,它是一个口语化应用

文。它要求内容完整,关键点齐全,语言含有感染力、号召力。一篇完整讲话稿

写作步骤主要包含以下四步:第一步:IntroducingYourself/StartingtheMeeting/OpeningRemarksWehaven'tmetbefore,soI'dliketo/Iwanttointroducemyself.I'mfrom...第二步:PreparingtheAudienceI'llstartwith...andthenmoveonto...Finally,I'mgoingto.../I'llbeginbydescrib-

ing...thengoonto...andI'llendwith...第三步:DeliveringtheMessageImustemphasize/stress/makeitclear...——胸有成竹,出口成章第2页I'dliketoturnto/I'dliketostress...第四步:WindingUpFinally,I'dliketosummarizethemainpoint...二、惯用句式 开头惯用语:(1)Thetopicofmyspeechis...(2)It'snice/wonderful/exciting/inspiringtospeak/talkabout...(3)Asweallknow,.../It'sknowntousallthat...(4)Everyonedesiresto...andsodoI.Butwhatisthesecretto...AsfarasI'mconcerned,thereare...factors.(5)...suggestthat...Ithinkthat...第3页

结尾惯用语:(1)Tosumup/Toconclude/Allinall/Inconclusion/Inaword...(2)WhatIwanttostress/emphasizeis...(3)Personally,Ithinkitnecessary/important/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital/a

goodideaforsb.to...(4)Asformyself,Iwill/must/should...(5)Dear...,let'stryourbest/doourbest/sparenoeffort/dowhatwecanto...(6)Asformysuggestion,Ithink...(7)As...,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof...Solongas...第4页三、典题示例

真题在线(江西)假定你是星光中学高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举行主题为“What

tolearninseniorhighschool?”英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合本身经历谈谈

自己体会。请依据以下提要准备一份英语讲话稿。1.学会学习:方法、习惯等;2.学会做人:真诚、友善等;3.其它方面:考生自拟。注意:1.词数120左右;2.讲话稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。第5页Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinions

onwhattolearninseniorhighschool.

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审题谋篇体裁讲话稿中心人称第一人称主体时态普通现在时普经过去时关键点布局第一段:引入话题(已给出)。第二段:从学习方法、学习习惯等角度阐释怎样学会学习。主题句:概述未来三年面临挑战。扩展句1:提升学习效率(注意结合个人经历)。扩展句2:养成良好学习习惯,如提前预习和及时复习等。第三段:详细说明怎样学会做人。主题句:学会和他人相处。扩展句1:要尊重老师,关爱同学(注意结合个人经历)。扩展句2:说明真诚意义。第四段:依据本身情况选择其它方面说明未来应注意事情。主题句:我们应该主动锻炼身体、参加课外活动等。扩展句:说明这么做好处。第五段:总结上文,展望未来生活。第7页考场作文:Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Ourschoollifeinseniorhighschoolisdifferentfromwhatwelivedinthejuniormiddleschool.Inordertostudywell,weshouldformgoodhabitssuchas①previewbeforelessonsand②reviewlessonsintime.What'smore,weshouldlearnsomeusefulwaystostudy,likeusingsomereferencebooks.Besides,weshouldbe-come③usefulperson.Weshouldbesincere

andfriendly.Inthisway,wecangetalongwellwithothersandwintruefriendship.Ofcourse,weshoulddoexerciseandkeep④health.Ifwedoallthethingswell,wecanspendahappytimeinseniorhighschool.Thankyou!文章提升:1.修改错误:1)suchas是介词短语,故应将①和②分别改为

和

。2)person是可数名词,useful发音以辅音音素开

头,故应在③useful前加冠词

。3)keep作“保持”讲时是系动词,后接形容词

作表语,故应将④health改为

。2.提升提议:将画线部分改为倒装句:

阅卷现场第8页参考范文:Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearn

inseniorhighschool.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.Firstly,weshouldlearntolearneffi-

ciently.Personally,Iusedtotryeffectivemethodstoachievemyacademicgoals.Developinga

goodhabitisalsoofimportance.Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyin-

volvedinclass,andreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass.Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inschool,Irespectedteachersand

wasfriendlywithclassmates.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmonious

atmosphere.Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.Notonlyaretheyhelpfulin

buildingupourbody,buttheycanalsoenrichourschoollife.Nopains,nogains.Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullife

here.Thankyou!第9页

答案1.修改错误:1)previewing;reviewing2)a3)healthy2.提升提议:Onlyinthiswaycanwegetalongwellwithothersandwintrue

friendship.四、高分秀场(山西高三第三次四校联考)假如你是星光中学学生李华,将参加主题为“MyChineseDream”英语演

讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,主要内容包含:1.梦想成为一名山村教师,帮助山村孩子;2.山区偏僻,教育落后;第10页3.父母和朋友都反对;4.我会……注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好。Goodmorning,everyone!

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答案Onepossibleversion:Goodmorning,everyone!I'mLiHuafromXingguangM