求助信课件-高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

应用文写作求助信1.写作思维导图求助信第一段：问候语+（自我介绍）＋背景呈现(写信的目的)1.问候语：Howiseverythinggettingalongwithyourecently2.自我介绍：I'mLiHua,aseniorthreestudentwhoisplanningtostudyabroad.I'mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromYunnanprovince,China.3.背景呈现（写作目的）：近来一切可好？一名打算留学的高三学生一名来自中国云南的交换生2.语言框架【例】最近，我在英语学习上遇到一些问题，这使我很苦恼。Recently,IhavemetsomeproblemsinstudyingEnglish,whichmakesmeveryupset.句式

1：Ihavemetsomeproblemsin...,whichmakesme...开头：求助背景(基础句式)句式

2：Ihavenochoicebutto...【例】我遇到的问题使我很苦恼。因此，我别无选择，只能向您求助。TheproblemsIhaveencountered_________________________________.Therefore,I____________________________________.makemeveryupset/bothermealothavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp知道你喜欢/对...感兴趣，我写信来寻求你的帮助。Knowingthatyouareinto/interestedin....Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp/todomeafavour.知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。Knowingthatyouareexpertin/haveagoodcommandof/haveexperiencein....,Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour/helpmewith...开头：求助背景(高级句式)典型例句1）Ihavetrouble/difficultyingettingalongwellwithmyclassmates,soIamwritingsincerelytoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor/lendmeahand.

我在与同学相处方面有困难，所以诚挚地写信来请求你能伸出援助之手。2）IamencounteringsomeproblemsinlearningEnglish,whichtroublemealot.KnowingthatyouarespecializedinEnglish,Ican'twaittowritetoyouinthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我在英语方面遇到一些麻烦，这很困扰我。知道您专攻英语，我迫不及待写信给你，希望你能好心地帮助我。3）I'mbusyinpreparingforgoingabroadforvacation,butunfortunately,I

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meafavour.我正忙于准备出国度假，但不幸的是，我发现它很难处理，所以我在想您能否帮我一下【拓展】亮点句式：1.Ihavesomedifficulty/troublein(doing)sth.2.I’mwritingtoyoutoask/seekforsomehelp.3.Ifinditquitedifficultto...4.Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoaskforyourhelp/Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.5.Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.首段：背景介绍＋写作目的knowingthatyouareanexpertinEnglishpoetry,I'mwritingyoutheletterinthehopethatyoucouldoffermesomeprofessionalguidanceformyEnglishpoetryreading［非谓语动词，宾语从句，介词短语，同位语从句］*knowing=Havingknowninthehopethat=hopingthat

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1：Whatpuzzles/troubles/bothersmemostis...【例1】最令我烦恼的是，我学得越多，得分反而越少。

，thelessscoresIget.Whattroubles/bothersmemostisthatthemoreIlearn主体：求助内容(基础句式)句式

2：Iwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceon.../Iamwonderingwhetheryoucouldhelpmewith…【例1】我想知道您是否可以就如何提高英语技能给我提一

些建议。IwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceonhowtoimprovemyEnglishskills.句式

3：Itwouldbeofgreathelpifyoucan…【例】如果您给我提供一些关于如何做好英语演讲的宝贵建议，那将会是很大的帮助。ItwouldbeofgreathelpifyoucanoffermesomevaluablesuggestionsonhowtomakeawonderfulEnglishspeech.第二段-求助内容-描述出现困难的背景我打算做/正在准备做...,该（活动）致力于...Iintendtodo/ampreparingtodo/for...,whichaimsto...句1.我正在为音乐会做准备，该音乐会致力于帮助外国学生更多地了解中国传统音乐。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Iampreparingforaconcert,whichaimstohelpforeignstudentsknowmoreabouttraditionalChinesemusic.主体：求助内容(高级句式)求助信

第二段-求助内容-遇到的困难然而，困扰我的事情是我...However,whatbothersmeisthat...我在做某事方面有困难。Ihavemuchdifficulty/troublein...句2.然而，困扰我的事情是我没有任何组织过音乐会的经验。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————However,whatbothersmeisthatIdon’thaveanyexperienceinorganizingaconcert/Iamatotalstrangertoorganizingaconcert.求助信

第二段-请求建议/征求帮助因此,我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceon....此外，我希望你能...以便...。What’smore/Moreover,Ihopeyoucan...sothat句3.因此,我想知道你是否能就音乐会宣传方面给我一些实用的指导。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceonadvertisingtheconcert.求助信

第二段-请求建议/征求帮助因此,我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceon....此外，我会很感激如果你能...以便...。What’smore/Moreover,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan...sothat..句4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-———————Moreover,lackingsomeequipment,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucancontacttheschoolmusicclubsothattheycanprovidesomeforus.求助信

第二段-请求帮助-约定时间地点最后，我想知道你是否方便（在某个时间/地点）帮助我们。Last,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutohelpusin...on...句5.最后，我想知道你是否方便明天下午在我们教室和我们一起讨论一下。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Last,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutohaveadiscussionwithusinourclassroomontomorrowafternoon..【拓展】亮点句式：1.Iwouldliketoinquire（询问）aboutanyeffectivemethodsyoumayhaveto…2.Iwouldliketoaskforsometipsonhowto…3.Ibelievethatyourexpertise[ˌekspɜːˈtiːz]（专业知识）andexperiencein…wouldbeofgreathelptome.主体：说明困难＋请求帮助遇到：have=meet=encounter=comeacross=runacross困难：problems=trouble=difficulties做某事有困难：havesometrouble(in)doingsth［非谓语作主语］Doingsthisaheadacheforme.

［主语从句］Whatpuzzles/troublesmemostis[that＋句子）［定语从句］I'mencountering…problemswhichtroublemealot.主体：说明困难＋请求帮助遇到：have=meet=encounter=comeacross=runacross困难：problems=trouble=difficulties做某事有困难：havesometrouble(in)doingsth［非谓语作主语］Doingsthisaheadacheforme.

［主语从句］Whatpuzzles/troublesmemostis[that＋句子）［定语从句］I'mencountering…problemswhichtroublemealot.三大求助原因（选一个）第一次

Asthisismyfirsttime/experiencetodosth.Idon'tknowifthere‘ssomethingIshouldpayattentionto.有挑战Therearesomechallengesstoppingmefromlearning(moreandbetter).好机会Ihopetomakegooduseofthisopportunitytodosth.soIwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesothat（这样一来）Icantgetmyselfbetterpreparedinadvance.两者／两方面1.Foronething,…Foranother，…2.

Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand.三者／三方面首先：

First,…Tobeginwith…Tostartwith.其次：

What'smore,…Inaddition,Moreover最后：Finally,…EventuallyAtlast.…,Lastbutnotleast【基础句】Ontheonehand.ItotallyhavenoideawhichpoemIshouldchose我不知道…

［升级1]Ontheotherhand,I'mdesperatelyinneedofsomeskillsofrecitation([ˌresɪˈteɪʃn]朗诵),includingpronunciationandintonation（语调）,whichwillperfectmyperformance.

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need=bedesperatelyinneedof=beindesperateneedof［升级2]:Ontheotherhand,someskillsofrecitationaredesperatelyneeded,includingpronunciationandintonation,whichwillperfectmyperformance您能给我一些帮助吗？［升级1]Facedwiththeaboveproblems/Facingtheaboveproblems,Iamanxiousto（急于）getyourhelp.Couldyougivemesomeadvice［升级2]Ifyouarefacedwiththeseproblems,whatwouldyoudoAnyinformationwillbeabighelpforme.结尾：表示感谢，期盼回复(基础句式)句式

1：I’dappreciateitif…【例】如果您能考虑我的请求我将不胜感激。I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration句式

2：…wouldbehighlyappreciated.【例】敬盼早日回复。Anyearlyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated第三段-表达感谢与期待“求人型”结尾：如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。Withyourgeneroushelp,Ibelieveourconcertwillbeunforgettable.期待你早日回信。Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.结尾：表示感谢，期盼回复(高级句式)【拓展】亮点句式：1.Thankyouforyourtimeandpatience,andI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.2.Iwouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelpinthiscase.3.I’dappreciateitifyou’dliketooffermeahelpinghand.4.Iamtrulygratefulforanyassistancethatyoucanprovide.5.Yourinsightsandadvicewouldbegreatlyappreciated.6.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.7.Thanksinadvanceforyourtimeandadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.8.I’mfirmlyconvincedthatIcanmakegreatprogressunderyourguidance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.尾段：表达感激＋期待回信表达感谢［升级1］Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand/dosbafavor.appreciateit=begraretul=bethankful［升级2]Anyinformation「youcanprovide]willbehighlyappreciated.I‘mlookingforwardtoafavorablereply（满意的答复）atyourearliestconvenience（期待回信）

.写作亮点①物作主语：人作主语化为名词，动名词作主语②介词短语：eg（1）withspecialemphasis（重点强调）on+n/doingsth.(2)inthehopethat（希望）＋句子(3)withregardto（关于）+n/doingsthDear

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Hua3.模板写作亮点③并列逻辑：活用and并列doing,todo④细化举例基础：nsuchasA,BandC

升级nindudingA,BandCnrangingfromAtoB/A,BtoC优秀作文展示一Nextweek,thethemeoftheclassmeetingis"TraditionalChineseCulture,withspecialemphasis

onpresentingcolorfulclassmeetingontheEnglishwebsite,I'mwritingtoyouhopingthatyoucouldoffermesomesuggestions.I'mencounteringtwoproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Foronething,differenttraditionalChineseculture,rangingfromarts,sportstopainting,presentsparticularaspectsofournation.SoIhavenoideawhichoneIshouldchoose.Foranother,itmayseemchallengingformetopresentthepattern(模式)andtitleontheEnglishwebsite.优秀作文展示一

ConsideringthatyouhavegreatpassionforChina,Iwonderifyoucouldprovidemewithsomeadvicewithregardtotheaboveproblem.Anyinformationyoucanprovidewillbehighlyappreciated.I'mlookingforwardtoafavorableresponseatyourearliestconvenience.优秀作文展示二主题是向老师求助如何提高英语成绩

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Iamwritingthislettertoseekyourhelp.IhavebeenworkinghardtoimprovemyEnglish,butIstillfindmyselfstrugglingandnotachievingthedesiredresults.Ihavedifficultyinrememberingnewwordsandphrases.NomatterhowmanytimesIrepeatthem,Ioftenforgetthemwhenitcomestousingtheminwritingorspeaking.Also,Ihaveproblemsunderstandinggrammarrules.Igetconfusedwithtensesandsentencestructures,whichgreatlyaffectsmycomprehensionandexpression.优秀作文展示二Inaddition,mylisteningandspeakingskillsarenotgood.IhavetroublecatchingthekeypointswhenlisteningtoEnglishmaterials,andIfeelnervousandunabletoexpressmyselfclearlywhenhavingEnglishconversations.IreallywanttoimprovemyEnglishandIknowyouhaverichexperienceandprofessionalknowledge.CouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceandguidanceonhowtoovercomethesedifficultiesIwouldbeextremelygratefulforyourhelp.Thankyouverymuch.

假定你热衷集邮，但你的父母并不支持这一爱好，于是你向一个名为“学生心声”的专栏写信咨询解决的办法。内容包括：

1.你的意见：增长知识，减压；

2.父母的意见：浪费钱，占用学习时间。注意：

1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSir,I’masenior3studentinhighschool.Recently,myparentsandIhavetakenadifferentviewonmyhobby.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskyouforsomehelp.CollectingstampshasalwaysbeenmygreatpassionsinceIwasachild,whichnotonlybringsmeknowledgebutalsohelpsmerelaxunderthegreatpressureofstudies.However,myparentsarestronglyagainstit,fortheyconsiderit(as)awasteofmoney.Theyalsothinkthatsortingoutstampsmaytakeuptoomuchtime,whichshouldbespentonmystudies.Itseemsimpossibleforthemtobeinfavorofmyhobby.CouldyouhelpmeoutI’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.DearMarcus,IamLiHua,astudentofyourclass.Confronted/Facedwiththechallengeofreadingforeignjournals,I’mwritingforyourgeneroushelpandinstructive(有益的)guidance.

Myprimaryconcern（我最关心的问题）wasthatwhilereadingforeignjournals,Iencountered

numerous（许多）unfamiliarwordsandunwillinglyreferredtoadictionaryfrequetly.SofrequentlydidIlookupwordsinthedictionarythatInearlylostmydesiretocarryon.Moreover,whattroubledmemostwasthatduetolackofculuralbackgrounds,Isimplycouldn’tmakesenseofsomearticles.

I’mfirmlyconvincedthatIcanmakegreatprogressunderyourguidance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

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