专题08高级句式升级（修辞手法）-2023年高考英语书面表达升级高级句式精讲课件

高级句式升级修辞手法PARTONE用like作喻词simile1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.（情感描写）我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描写)沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(景物描写)寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。5.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.(景物描写)繁星像珊珊发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。1.这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。（用like作喻词）Thebookhasaccompaniedmeforquitealongtimelikeanoldfriend.陪伴

：很久：一位我的老朋友：accompaniedforquitealongtimeanoldfriend2.他茫然地看着我就像一个傻子。（用like作喻词）Helookedatmeblanklylikeafool.茫然地：看着：一个傻子：blanklylookedatafool3.他就像一头疯牛一样冲我吼。（用like作喻词）Heshoutedatmelikeamadcow.一头疯牛：冲我吼：amadcowshoutedatme4.他非常着急就像热锅上的蚂蚁一样。（用like作喻词）Heisanxiouslikeanantonahotpan.着急：热锅上的：anxiousonahotpan5.他僵在那里一动不动就像一块石头。（用like作喻词）Hestoodstilllikeastone.僵在那里：一块石头：stoodstillastonePARTONE用as..as作喻词simile1.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday（情感描写）她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。2.Fatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflataspancake.(景物描写)父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。3.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.(人物描写)我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。更多搭配：asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌ashungryasawolf饥肠辘辘asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀asbraveasalion勇猛如狮asprettyasapicture美如画1.我的心和蜂蜜一样甜。（用as..as作喻词）Myheartisassweetashoney.蜂蜜：甜：honeysweet2.他的心和石头一样硬。（用as..as作喻词）Hisheartisashardasastone.石头：硬：astonehard3.他的身体和牛一样壮实。（用as..as作喻词）Hisbodyisasstrongasacow.牛：壮实：acowstrong4.我们面前的景色美如一幅画。（用as..as作喻词）Thescenerybeforeusisasbeautifulasapicture.一幅画：我们面前的：apicturebeforeus5.这辆公交车走的像蜗牛一样慢。（用as..as作喻词）Thebuswentasslowlyasasnail.蜗牛：慢：asnailslowlyPARTONE用asif作喻词simile1.MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.（动作描写）Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。2.Sheswepthersonintoherarmswithhereyeswetasifshewantedtosqueezethebreathoutofhim.（动作描写）她眼睛湿润，把儿子拥进怀里，仿佛想把他的呼吸挤出来。3.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描写）他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。4.Shefeltasifherhearthadbeenrippedfromherbody.（情感描写）她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。1.他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。（用asif作喻词）Hefeltasifthewholeworldhadfallenapartonhim.整个世界：崩塌：thewholeworldfallenapart2.他在操场上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快乐的小鸟。（用asif作喻词）Hewasrunningonthesoprtsfieldasifhewasahappybird.在操场上：一只快乐的小鸟：onthesoprtsfieldahappybird3.他无辜地看着我好像他什么都不知道似的。（用asif作喻词）Helookedatmeinnocentlyasifhedidn'tknowanything.无辜地：什么都不知道：innocentlydidn'tknowanything4.他感觉他的心脏被刀子捅了一刀。（用asif作喻词）Hefeltasifhishearthadbeenstabbedbyaknife.刀子：捅了一刀：aknifestabbedbyPARTTWO通过be动词联系metaphor1.她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。（通过be动词联系）Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.流淌在：金色河流：streamingdownaflowinggoldenriver2.美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。（通过be动词联系）Thebeatutifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.芬芳的：彩色地毯：scentedcarpetofcolor3.别这么幼稚好不好。（通过be动词联系）Stopbeingsuchababy.幼稚：beingsuchababy4.生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。（通过be动词联系）Lifeisanunexploredriver.fulloftwistsandturns.未被涉足的：曲折：unexploredtwistsandturnsPARTTWO通过动词联系metaphor1.我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。（通过动词联系）Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.如鲠在喉：湿润了眼眶：alumpinmythroatwellingupinmyeyes.2.他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。（通过动词联系）Hedoesn'thaveanideaofhisown.Hejustparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.自己的观点：鹦鹉学舌：anideaofhisownparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.3.整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。（通过动词联系）Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.沉浸在：一片寂寞：blanketedAheavysilence4.小男孩狼吞虎咽。（通过动词联系）Theboywolfeddownthefood.狼吞虎咽：wolfeddownthefoodPARTTHREE把自然现象当作人来描写personification1.大风凛冽，发出怒吼。（自然现象）Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.凛冽：发出怒吼：stoodupgaveashout2.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。（自然现象）Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.微风：轻柔地亲吻：Thebreezegentlykissed3.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。（自然现象）Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鹅毛般的雪花：在空中飞舞：Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair4.薄雾把他包围起来。（自然现象）Themistswallowedhimup.薄雾：包围：Themistswallowed5.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。（自然现象）Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风：刺痛了我的脸：Theicywindstingingmyface6.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。（自然现象）Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.眨眼睛：夜空中：winkedatmeinadarkeningsky7.顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。（自然现象）Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.顷刻间：统治：ImmediatelyruledPARTTHREE把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写personification1.恐惧把他吞噬了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Fearseized/swallowedhim.恐惧：吞噬：Fearseized/swallowed2.我气得说不出话来。（含蓄抽象的概念）Angerchokedmywords.说不出话来：chokedmywords.3.我突然想到一个好主意。（含蓄抽象的概念）Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.突然想到：struck4.他笑容满面。（含蓄抽象的概念）Smiletookholdofhim.满面：tookholdof5.她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。（含蓄抽象的概念）Anxietytornhimintopieces.焦虑：Anxiety6.他没信心了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.没：deserted7.我兴奋的啥也说不出来了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.啥也说不出来：deprivedmeofallpowerofspeechPARTTHREE把动物当作人来描写personification1.Inthedeadofnight,thecricketsplayedontheterraceofthehouse.寂静的夜，蟋蟀旁若无人地在房子的阳台上玩。(景物描写)2.Birdsonthetreearesingingabeatifulsong.(景物描写)树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。3.Thefrogsaregivingaconcert---mixedchorus.(景物描写)青蛙在举办音乐会---混声大合唱。4.Firefliespatrolthegrasswithsmalllanterns(景物描写)萤火虫提着小灯笼在草丛中巡逻。1.夏天的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的脸。（动物）Thesummerbreezetouchedmyfacegently.抚摸着：touched2.细雨轻轻地亲吻着我的脸颊。（动物）Thedrizzlekissedmeonmycheekgently.细雨：Thedrizzle3.我能听到到处都是鸟儿在歌唱。（动物）Icouldhearbirdssingingeverywhere.到处：everywhere4.这个教堂目睹了这个城市20年的变化。（动物）Thechurchhaswitnessedthecity'schangesinthepast20years.目睹：witnessedPARTFOUR使用数词或量词hyperbole1.我的心成了碎片。（使用数词或量词）Myheartbrokeinaboutamillionpieces.碎片：amillionpieces2.她吓得半死。（使用数词或量词）Shewashalfdeadwithfear.半死：halfdead3.非常感谢你。（使用数词或量词）Thanksamillion.非常：amillion4.我都告诉你多少次了。（使用数词或量词）I‘vetoldyouamilliontimes.多少次：amilliontimes5.背包很重。（使用数词或量词）Thebackpackweighsaton.重：weighsatonPARTFOUR使用动词hyperbole1.这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。（使用动词）Theyounggirlbroughtthehousedownwithherperfomance.博得了满堂喝彩：broughtthehousedown2.吓得我魂不附体。（使用动词）Itmademejumpout