2025年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破专题17 读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练（原卷版）

专题17读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练句式1：With+复合结构”又称为“with结构”Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxious

withherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightly

withtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie

激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。1.那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+adj.open)2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+分词)3.

他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）4.那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（ontheground,tremble）Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox

withhermouthwideopen.Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox

withherheartbeatingwildly.Hiswifewasextremelysad,

witheyesfulloftears

/

withtearsrollingdownherface句式2

：并列谓语，细化动作

A,BandCWhentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodie

took

adeepbreath

andwalked

tothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。句式3

：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,

waitingfor

herturn

nervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。句式4

巧用生动的无灵主语：

Astrong/intensesenseof

delight

tookholdof

me

themoment

Iheardthenews.Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),

Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,helpiscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口气，向那个人表示感谢，并将频率调回，“麦克，救命来了！”但没有回应。句式5

：情感形容词+句子Thrilledandjoyful,

Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie

激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！句式7：.“一……就……”的表达法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,themoment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

当播音员宣布“11号，JodieNymble，为RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了

HiddenPark.句式8：巧用“某人想到”:Atthethoughtofthefactthat

shedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。句式9

：主句，which从句（定语从句）格式：_______主句________，which第二句话；例句：玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl，whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.结构2：格式：_______主句________，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；_______主句________，whichmade/forced/allowedsb

感情词例句：就在这时，我们听到了UnclePaul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,

whichallowedusto

lightthehopereturninghome.句式10

：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+fill+地点）Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。句式11：关于情感句子的积累：(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写)，用so…thatJodiewas

so

excitedandrefreshed

that

sheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常兴奋，神清气爽，她大叫“我的幸运钉”。1.兴奋：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我动得跳了起来2.开心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高兴得上跑下跳3.感动：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感动得一句话也说不出来4.悲伤：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我难受得用手捂住了脸。5.(生气)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我气得一句话也说不出。6.（害怕）

Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，心怦怦直跳。7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。升级：倒装

SoshockedwasI

thatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(当我听到消息时候，我太震惊了以至于呆在原地)句式12：副词修饰动词或句子（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,

waitingfor

herturn

nervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartingline

slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammates

tightly

withtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。句式13：倒装或强调NotuntilthendidJodierealizethat

luckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。呼应主题常用句式直到...才.…(1)倒装句:notuntil+时间状语didsbrealizethat+主题从句(2)强调句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主颖从句还记得某人的话，某人的话还在脑海中One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone'searsthat+主题Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/beamofhope.Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度。Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是爱让/使这个世界运转起来Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedherconfidence.(她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心）句式14：独立主格结构Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,

tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名词性从句主语从句结构1：Itis+adjforsbthat…结构2：whatIcoulddo/say/…istowhat(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat

…

=itisimportantthat…Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>功能：用于突出某个动作的重要或必须应用位置：不限例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.句式16：毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth【例句】1.在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.2.我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.对点精练一、对点精练--汉译英句式1：With+复合结构那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.女孩心怦怦直跳，打开了她的礼物盒。______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.句式2：并列谓语，细化动作1.他看到包里的外套后，非常惊讶，然后叫他妈妈出来。Seeingthecoatinthebag,he______________________________hismothertocomeout.2.他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。Hiswife,extremelysad,______________________________.句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子他躺在地上，双手颤抖着。______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.句式4：巧用生动的无灵主语1.一想到即将到来的考试，他就感到无比焦虑。__________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.2.一股激动的情绪在人群中蔓延，因为乐队的主唱宣布了演唱会的日期。_____________________________amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcertdate.一种宁静的感觉笼罩了整个图书馆，每个人都在专心致志地学习。__________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedontheirstudies.句式5：情感形容词+句子兴奋和精神焕发，朱迪大叫“我的幸运钉鞋”。_____________________________,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！_____________________________,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!句式7：“一……就……”的表达法当播音员宣布“11号，JodieNymble，为RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻，雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了HiddenPark._____________________________"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.句式8：巧用“某人想到”一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。_____________________________didn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.句式9：主句，从句（定语从句）玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,_____________________________.句式10：描写气氛或者氛围的句子空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。_____________________________.句式11：关于情感句子的积累我动得跳了起来。_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.句式12：副词修饰动词或句子Jodie穿着她崭新的钉鞋，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,_____________________________.句式13：倒装或强调直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。_____________________________thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.句式14：独立主格结构她手里颤抖着拿钱，眼里泪水涌起。Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,_____________________________.句式15：名词性从句我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。_____________________________wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.句式16：毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver_____________________________,reachingformyson.二、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

______________________________________________________________________________________Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

______________________________________________________________________________________WhenIsawnoone

noticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna’sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.

______________________________________________________________________________________

He

looked

at

meandbit

his

lips,

as

if

hewasthinking.

______________________________________________________________________________________ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.

______________________________________________________________________________________7.

Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

______________________________________________________________________________________

‘Here,’hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

______________________________________________________________________________________

Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkingintheschoolcafé.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

______________________________________________________________________________________三、请使用独立结构改写下列句子1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.______________________________________________________________________________________2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________3.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.______________________________________________________________________________________4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.______________________________________________________________________________________5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.______________________________________________________________________________________6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.______________________________________________________________________________________7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.______________________________________________________________________________________10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.______________________________________________________________________________________四、请用过去分词或形容词改写下列句子或小段落

ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iwasconfused.______________________________________________________________________________________

Theywereveryfrightened.Theyalljumpedback.______________________________________________________________________________________

Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome.Theyweretiredandhungry.______________________________________________________________________________________

Hewasexhausted.