外研 九年级 下册 英语 Module 6《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

Module6Eatingtogether模块主题写作一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“饮食习惯差异”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群，涉及子主题“世界主要国家的文化习俗”。常见的写作任务是描述饮食习惯、介绍餐桌礼仪、对比中西方不同的文化习俗等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇custom//tablemanners//allow//knife//fork//watch//forexample//chopstick//host//guest//dish//ontime//Western//culture(2)重点句式1.WheninRome,______________________(入乡随俗).2.Chinesetablehabits_________________________________(与……不同)thoseintheUSA.3.Youare________________________(应该)usechopstickstopickupthedishes.doastheRomansdoaredifferentfrom/arenotthesameassupposed/expectedto4.____________(是礼貌的)talkwithyourhostsafterdinner.5.______________(你最好……)arriveearlier.6.Thereare___________________(多种多样的)dishesinaChinesemeal.7.__________(我希望)youwillenjoytheChinesefood.It’spolitetoYou’dbettervariouskindsofIhopeTimeWhatyou

shoulddoBeforedinnerArrivethreetofiveminutesearlier.AtdinnerTheoldpeoplebegintoeatfirst.AfterdinnerDon’tleaveatonce.三、写作示例假如你是刘明，你的美国笔友John想利用假期来中国度假，他想了解一下中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据以下表格提示的内容，给他写一封电子邮件。要求：1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：80-100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。DearJohn,WelcometoChina!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing谋篇布局1.审题立意①主题：餐桌礼仪；②人称：第一人称、第二人称；③时态：一般现在时。2.写作提纲餐桌礼仪开篇点题ChinesetablehabitsarenotthesameasthoseintheUSA.展开描述Don’tbelate.Arrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.You’renotsupposedtostarteatingfirst...It’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.表达祝福I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimehereinChina.基础篇DearJohn,WelcometoChina!LetmetellyousomethingaboutChinesetablemanners.Don’tbelate.You’dbetterarrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyoushouldn’tstarteatingfirst.Youshouldlettheoldbegintoeatfirst.Anddon’tstickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.What’smore,youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks,either.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.Youcanhavesometeaandchatwithpeople.Followingtheserules,I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing名师点评本文结构层次清晰，包含了题干中所给的全部要点。第一步，表明写作意图。第二步，具体描述写作内容。第三步，书写结语。本文在描写进餐过程中的注意事项时进行了必要的补充，但是在话题引入方面稍显生硬，具体描写的过程中高级句型的运用也稍显不足。提升篇DearJohn,WelcometoChina!Chinesetablehabitsarenotthesameas①thoseintheUSA.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Don’tbelate.You’dbetter②arrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyou’renotsupposedto②starteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable③.Theoldpeoplebegintoeatfirst.Andit’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood③.What’smore②,youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks,either.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.Youcanhavesometeaandchatwithpeople.Ifyoudon’tknowhowtobehave②atthetable,youcanjustseewhattheothersdoandfollowthem③.I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing名师点评本文内容全面，结构清晰，在文章的衔接和内容的补充方面更加详尽。①使用thesameas引入话题，过渡自然。②具体描写过程中运用了丰富的短语。如：hadbetter;benotsupposedtodosth.;What’smore;howtobehave等。③使用复杂句式InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyou’renotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.(表语从句中含有条件状语从句)；Andit’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.(It’s+形容词+todosth.固定句型)；...youcanjustseewhattheothersdoandfollowthem(what引导的宾语从句)让文章的内容更加丰富，可读性更强。四、写作练笔假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Anna来信说她对中国的食物十分感兴趣，并向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪，请用英语给她回信，80词左右。要点：1.用筷子吃饭夹菜；2.所有人到齐，长辈先吃；3.不能用筷子敲碗；4.筷子不能插在米饭碗里；5.……提示词：tap敲________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAnna,I’mgladtohearfromyou.IknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningaboutChinesetablemanners.Now,I’dliketointroducethemtoyou.InChina,thehostandthehostessdon’tstarttoeatuntilallthepeoplesitdownandthentheeldestonebeginsfirst.Youcan’ttapatyourbowlswithchopsticksorputyourchopsticksupstraightintoyourrice.Theyareveryrudemanners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________