新人教版高中英语必修第一册新人教版高中英语必修第一册：Reading for Writing 写作实践

ReadingforWritingUnit1

TeenagelifeTeachingObjectives1.Masterthestructureandthelanguagesofaletterofadvice.2.Masterthemethodofwritingaletterofadvice.3.Practisewritingaletterofadvice.目标一文本深度理解Activity1

细节把握1.WhatiswrongwithChenLei?A.Heisabsentfromschool.B.Heisaddictedtocomputergames.C.Hefallsinlove.D.Hecan’tconcentrateonhisstudy.√2.MsLuorecommendstheWorriedFriendto

.A.talktoChenLeiB.talktoChenLei’sparentsC.leaveChenLeialoneD.setanexampletoChenLei√3.WhichofthefollowingisNOTthedisadvantageofspendingtoomuchtimeonline?A.Unhealthy.B.Difficulttofocusonotherthings.C.Morefun.D.AddictedtotheInternet.√Activity2

文章架构1.Readthetextandputthefollowingpartsofaletterofadviceinorder.①Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.②Explainyourreasons.③Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.④Closeandsigntheletter.⑤Writethedateandgreeting.⑥Tellthereaderyouknow/understandhowhe/shefeels.⑦Tellthereaderyouknowwhattheproblemis.答案⑤⑦⑥②①③④2.Accordingtotheletterofadvice，whenwewritealetterofadvice，wecanlearntousethefollowingoutline.(写作模板)(Greeting)DearMrWorried，(Tellthereaderyouknowwhattheproblemis.)Ihavereceivedyourletteraskingmeforadviceabout

.(Tellthereaderyouknow/understandhowhe/shefeels.)Icanwellunderstandthatyouarefeeling

.(Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.)Irecommendthatyoushould

.Besides，itisagoodideato

.Whynot

？(Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.)Iamsurethat

.(Closeandsigntheletter.)Allthebest.Yours，_______Activity3

增分靓句1.Readthetextandfindoutthesentenceswithwhichtheauthorbeginsanadviceletter.(读文章并找出作者开始写建议信的句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________(1)Youwrotethatyouareworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.(2)Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.2.Readthetextandfindoutthesentenceswithwhichtheauthorgivesadvice.(读文章并找出作者给出建议的句子)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(1)Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.(2)Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.(3)Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?写作技法指导目标二建议信本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来针对存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议，从而达到解决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。注意建议信的语气一定要委婉。常用表达1.首段常用句式Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend.你在信中写道，你十分担心你的朋友。Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.我完全理解你的焦虑和担忧。YouhaveaskedformyadviceabouttheproblemandIwilltrytomakesomeadvice/suggestions.你问我关于这个问题的建议，我将尽力提些建议。Learning/Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends，Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice.得知你在交友方面有困难，我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinese.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高兴收到你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议的来信，下面是我的一些建议。Now，I’dliketosharemystudytipswithyou.现在，我想和你分享我的学习秘诀。Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.我的建议如下。2.中段常用句式Whynottakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities？何不参加一些课外活动？Istronglyrecommend/suggest/advisethatyou(should)listentoEnglisheveryday.我强烈建议你每天听英语。You’dbettertakeexerciseregularlysothatyoucanbuildupyourbody.你最好经常锻炼身体，如此你可以增强体质。Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucouldjoininclassdiscussions.如果你参加课堂讨论，这会是个好主意。Howaboutjoiningavolunteerclubsothatyoucanimproveyourability？参加志愿者俱乐部怎么样呀？这样的话，你能够提高你的能力。Ithinkthemostsuitablesolutionforyouistocombineyourstudieswithrelaxation.我认为对你来说最合适的解决方法是把学习和放松结合起来。IfIwereyou，IwouldsignupfortheSummerCamp.如果我是你，我就会报名参加夏令营。3.尾段常用句式Isincerely/dohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful./Isincerely/dohopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefit/usetoyou.我真的希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。/我真的希望我的建议对你有益。Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作顺利！典例展示假设你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久去了英国留学。她写信告诉你她不适应英国的高中生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括：1.努力提高英语水平；2.广交朋友；3.多参加各种活动。注意：写作词数应为80左右。范文赏读DearMary，Hearingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtoyournewschoolandmeetsomechallenges，Ifeelsorry.I’mwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly，IrecommendthatyousignupforadvancedEnglishclasses，whichcanhelpyouspeakEnglishfluently.Secondly，whynotmakemorefriends？Theycanhelpyouforgetyourloneliness.Thirdly，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoutakeanactivepartinafter-classactivities.Ireallyhopethatthesesuggestionsareofgreathelptoyou.Yours，LiHua习作分步演练目标三徐婷，留守儿童，今年十四岁，因为父母常年在外地工作而时常感到孤独。假定你是SusanLuo，请你写信给她提供一些建议并说明原因。参考词汇：留守儿童left-behindchildren注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步审题谋篇第二步遣词造句核心词汇(含本单元词汇)1.满意________2.建议____________3.志愿者_________4.青少年_________5.事实上________6.专心于_________7.迷惑的_________contentrecommendvolunteerteenageractuallyfocusonconfused连词成句(含本单元句型)1.你写信说你对现在的生活不满意因为你的父母在另外一个城市工作。Youwrotethatyouare

becauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.2.我建议你去参加一个志愿者组织去帮助其他人。Irecommendyouto

tohelpothers.3.事实上，有很多需要你帮助的人。

，therearemanypeoplewhoneedyourhelp.notcontentwithyourpresentlifejoinavolunteerorganizationActually4.你全神贯注于一些有意义的事情，以便你能够使自己感觉好些。Youfocusonsomemeaningfulthingssothat______________

.youcanmakeyourselffeelbetter第三步句式升级把第2句改为含有宾语从句的复合句。Irecommend___________________________________________

.thatyoushouldjoinavolunteerorganizationtohelpothers第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。参考范文DearXuTing，Youwrotethatyouarenotcontentwithyourpresentlifebecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareconfusedandanxious.Itisnotunusualforteenagerslikeyoutofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Irecommendthatyoushouldjoinavolunteerorganizationtohelpothers.Actually，therea