高考英语作文复习 集合（附评分标准）

应用文

1.2020年8月，安徽省多地遭受特大洪水袭击，无数孩子失去家园。为此，

校学生会号召大家本周日上午9：00在主教学楼前面为灾区孩子捐款。假定

你是学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义写一则书面通知。词数80左右。

范例

Dearfellowstudents,

InAugustthisyear,catastrophicfloodshitlargeareasofAnhuiProvince.Theflood

destroyedpeople'shomesandvillages,leavingtensofthousandsofpeoplehomeless,

includinglittlechildren.

ItwasagreatsorrowfbreveryChinesepeople.Therefore,wecallonallthe

studentstodonatemoneytothechildrenindisasterareaswhoaredesperatefbrhelp.

ThedonationactivityisscheduledtobeheldinfrontoftheMainBuildingat9:00on

Sundaya.m.

Wearelookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipationandyourlove!

TheStudents'Union

2.假定你是李华，你校将举办英文电影影评大赛，你有意参加。请你给外教

Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，希望得到他的指导。内容包括：

1.比赛介绍；2.希望得到哪些指导；3.期待回复。

DearMr.Smith,

Facingatoughproblemofhowtomakeafilmreview,Iamwritingtoaskyoufor

afavour.

Nextmonth,ourschoolisgoingtohaveanEnglishfilmreviewcompetition,where

competitorsaresupposedtocommentonacertainEnglishfilm.Iintendtoparticipate

init,butIhavenoclearknowledgeofhowtomakeafilmreview,likewhataspects

shouldbeinvolved.Iwaswonderingifyoucouldgivemeabriefexplanationand

recommendmesomerelevantbooksandarticles.

Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.

Yours,

LiHua

3.假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友jack在你因病住院期间经常在网上帮你辅导

英语，鼓励你积极面对病情、学习和生活。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包

括：回顾帮助并感谢；邀请来中国游玩；表达期待。

DearJack,

I'mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelpandencouragementduringmystay

inhospital.

Undoubtedly,withoutyourhelpwithmyEnglishonlineeveryday,Icouldn'thavemademy

Englishstudygosmoothlyasusual.Andit'syourfrequentencouragementandpositiveattitudes

towardslifethatguidemeoutoflowspiritstodealwithmyillness,studyandlifeinsuchasound

way.

Manythankstoyouagain.IhopeyouwillcometoChinatohaveanicetripwhereyoucan

eyewitnessinpersontheperfectcombinationofcultureandnature.Kmrightherewaitingfor

you.

Yours,

LiHua

4.假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战

在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于

投稿。

表达谢

意；个人

感受；

表达信心。参考词汇：流行病epidemic疫情epidemicsituation新型冠状病毒

novelcoronavirus

DearMedicalworkers,

IamLiHua,ahighmiddleschoolstudentinShanxi.I'mwritingtoexpresssincere

gratitudetoyouallforyourdevotionandsacrificeinthisbattleagainsttheNovel

CoronaVirus.

Inthisepidemic,itisyouwho,despitethelackofequipmentandthepotentialof

infection,desperatelyrescuethoseinfectedbutstrivingforlife.Itisalsoyouwhohave

shednewlightontheviruswithexpertisetobuildupourconfidencetodefeatit.Itis

youwhodeservealltheadmirationandlove!

Icanneverexpressourthankfulnesstoomuchforyourselflesscontribution.It's

widelybelievedthatourjointeffortsChinawillwinthebattleandmakeaquick

recovery.

Goodluckandstaywell!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

假如你是李华，你的英国好友Kate在中国参加交换生学习，在所在学校为交换生举

办的剪纸比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封书信。内容包括：表达你的

愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺；3.询问她是怎么会对中国的剪纸艺术感兴趣的。

Possibleversion:

DearKate,

KnowingthatyouhavewonfirstprizeinthePaperCuttingContestfortheexchangestudents,

I'mwritingtogivemysincerecongratulations.

Youdon'tknowhowexcitedIwaswhen1heardthegoodnews.Asyourbestfriend,Iamproud

ofyou!YourloveandtalentforChinesefolkartsleftmewithdeepimpression.Couldyoushare

withmehowyougotinterestedinChinesepapercutting?

Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

第一节：应用文写作（满分15分）

假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Rose对于中国饮食文化很感兴趣，发邮件让你介绍

一道中国传统美

食。请你恢复邮件，内容包括：

1.美食名称；2.美食的意义；3.美食做法。

Possibleversion:

DearJerry,

KnowingthatyouareasenthusiasticaboutChineseClassicsasme,Fmdelighted

topurchasesomebookswithyou.Somedetailsregardingtheplanareasfollows.

Tomakegooduseoftime,we'Hassembleattheschoolgateat8o'clockon

Sunday.Wecantakethesubwaythere,whichcanhelpusnotonlyavoidthetraffic

peakhours,butalsoreachthedestinationeffectively.What'smore,Iamfamiliar

withahistoryteacherwhoseknowledgeabout

Chinesecultureismorethanprofound.Wecangotovisitherifyouhaveinterest.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

假定你是李华，你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈，经常发照片

分享生活中的所

有细节，请根据以下要点提示，给Jim写一封信：

（1）对分享行为表示理解；（2）

阐述过度分享的危害；（3）提出

建议。

One

possible

version:

DearJim,

I'mworriedthatyou'vebeenaddictedtosharingallsortsofphotosinWeChat

circlerecently.Undeniably,WeChatmakescommunicationconvenientandleisuretime

colorful.However,thereexistsomepotentialrisksifweovershareOnesevereproblem

isleakingprivacy,whichmaycauseeconomiclosses.Besides,oversharingcanmake

othersuncomfortable,fortheythinkyouareshowingoff.

Thus,nevershouldwepostourpersonalinformation,norshouldwerashlyadd

strangerstothelistoffriends.It'swisertosetasidesometimetoaccompanyparentsor

dosomethingmoremeaningful.

Bestwishes!

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读后续写

1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Chesterwasborninacardboardboxwithfourothercats.Hewasinasmaller

cardboardboxmarkedi4freekittens^whenSashamethimandtookhimhome.From

thatmomenton,helovedboxes.Inthemorningshesat,licking（舔）hispawsand

furwithhistongueintherainbow-coloredsunlight.Thenhewouldlookaroundfbr

aboxtosleepin.

Hesleptinhatboxesandshippingboxes,giftboxesandtakeoutfoodboxes.He

sleptinSasha'ssockdrawer,ifsheleftitopen.Whenhewasakitten,thesizeofasmall

loadofbread,hehadsleptinshoeboxes.Buthegrewandgrew,andnowhewasalot

bigger.Whenhetriedtosleepinashoebox,hisfurrytummy（肚子）hungoverthesides.

Chesterdidn'tjustsitinboxes,though.Sometimeshesatinflowerpots,pans,or

laundrybaskets.ChesteralsolikedtositinthebedroomofSasha'sdollhouse,her

birthdaygift,withthefurnitureinamess.Sashahadtoredecoratethedollhouseevery

day,butshedidn'tmindaslongasChesterwashappy.Sasha'smomsuggestedChester

needafixedhouseofhisown,butSashaignored.

OnedaySashacamehomefromschool,andshecouldn'tfindChester.Hewasn't

inthedollhouse,orhersockdrawer.t4Mom,Dad!”Sashayelled."Chesterisgone!"

Sasha'smomlookedintheattic（I阁楼）.Therewereboxesanddustballs,andeven

amousethathadescapedChester'snotice,butnoChester.Sasha'sdadlookedinthe

kitchencabinets.Therewerepotsandpans,andtheoldcanofsouphethoughthe'd

lost,butnoChester.

Suddenly,ulfoundhim!”Sashacried.

Thebi^orangecatwasinsidehermom'snewglassvase,clearglasswithblueand

greenlines.

Hecurledupinit,hisfattybodyalmostjammingthe

vase.注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.

Paragraph1:

Hedidn'tlookhappyatall.

____________________________Paragraph2:

Luckily,notonlyChester,butthevase,wasstillinonepiece.

Onepossibleversion:

Hedidn'tlookhappyatall.Sashatippedthevaseovergentlyandtriedtopullhim

out,butChesteijustyowledpainfully.4tWehadtobreakthevasetogethimout!”

Lookingattheannoyedandfrightenedcatinside,Sashacried."NoJsaidherdad,“If

webreakit,theglassmighthurtChester.Maybewecanputbutterontheinsideofthe

vaseandslidehimout."Sasha'smombutteredasmuchasshecouldreach,andherdad

pulledtheunhappycatout.

Luckily,notonlyChesterhutthevase,wasstillinonepiece.Withtearsrollingin

theeyes,Sashaheldthebutterycatinherarmsimmediately."Mom,you'reright.We'd

bettermakeahousefbrhimnow."Sashaturnedtohermom.Afterwashingthebutter

outofthevase,mombroughtarefrigeratorboxandhelpedSashamadeitintoacozy

boxhouseforChester.Theycutoutroundwindows,decorateditallaroundandput

pillowsinsideforhimtositon.Staringitwithhisglitteringeyes,Chesterlovedit.

2.ThereAreNoVans

Tome,whatThanksgivingreallymeansisgivinggoodthanks,noteatingturkey.Bythe

timeIwas18IhadcreatedmyThanksgivingritual（惯例）.1wouldgooutshoppingand

buyenoughfoodforoneortwofamilies.ThenIwoulddresslikeadeliveryboy,goto

thepoorestneighborhoodandjustknockonadoor,andwouldalwaysincludeanote

saying“AllthatIaskinreturnisthatyoutakegoodenoughcareofyourselfsothat

somedayyoucandothesamethingfbrsomeoneelse."Ihavereceivedmorefromthis

annualritualthanIhavefromanyamountofmoneyI'veeverearned,especiallyone

suchexperienceinNewYorkCity.

SeveralyearsagoIwasinNewYorkCitywithmynewlymarriedwifeduring

Thanksgiving.Shewassadbecausewewerenotwithourfamily.Normallyshewould

behomedecoratingthehouseforChristmas,butwewerestuckhereinahotelroom.I

said,“Honey,look,whydon'twedecoratesomelivestodayinsteadofsometrees?”

WhenItoldherwhatIalwaysdoonThanksgiving,shegotexcited.Isaid,"Let'sgo

someplacewherewecanreallyappreciatewhoweare,whatweareabletodoandwhat

wecanreallygive.LefsgotothepoorneighborhoodHarlemandfeedsomepeople

thereinneed.We'llgobuyenoughfoodfbrsixorsevenfamiliesfbr30days.We'vegot

enough.Let'sgodoit!”

Westartedbygettingavan（货车），butthereseemednovansinallofNewYork

City.Therent-a-carplaceswerealloutofvans.MywifewasdisapDointed,andIsaid,

“Look,thebottomlineisthatifwcwantsomething,wccanmakeithappen!Allwe

havetodoistakeaction.ThereareplentyofvanshereinNewYorkCity.Lookdownat

thestreet.Doyouseeallthosevans?Lefsgogetone!”Mywifeagreedandwetook

action.

Paragraph1:

Wetriedstoppingvansastheyweredrivingdownthe

street.Paragraph2:

Eventuallyavandroveupandthedriversaid

yes.____________________________________

范例

Wetriedstoppingvansastheyvzeredrivingdownthestreet.Ilearnedsomethingabout

NewYorkdriversthatday:Theydon'tstop;theyspeedup.We'dgoover,knockonthe

windowandthedriverwouldrollitdown,lookingatusinalarm,andI'daskifhe

woulddriveustoHarlemsowecouldhelpsomepeople.Everytimethedriverwould

lookawayquickly,furiouslyrollupthewindowandpullawaywithoutsayinganything.

Mywifewasreadytogiveup,butIsaid,"It'sthelawofaverages:somebodyisgoing

tosayyes.”

Eventuallyavandroveupandthedriversaidyes.Wewerewildwithjoyandclimbed

ontothevan.Uponarrival,heledustoastorewhereweboughtlotsoffoodandsome

baskets.Togetherwepackedthemup,carriedthemontothevanandwenttobuildings

wheretherewereevenpeoplelivingwithoutelectricity.ltwasatrulyfulfilling

experiencetomakeevenasmalldifference.

Miracleslikethishappeneveryday—eveninacitywhere“therearcnovans.^^

3.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

ItwasabeautifulOctoberevening,acoolgentlebreezeisblowingasthemoonrises

highinthesky,andIhadgottenhomefromworkaboutanhourearlier.AsIoftendid

afteralongday,Iwentstraighttomybackyardanddidsomeworkinmyflowergarden

beforedecidingtolightthegrilltomakedinnerformyhusbandandmyselfIhadonly

justwalkedafewstepswhenIsuddenlyfeltahorribleblowtotherightsideofmy

neck.Itfeltasthoughsomeonehadhitmewithabaseballbat（棒球棒）.Iknewthatno

onewasintheyardwithme,sonoonecouldhavehitme.Totallyconfused,Ireached

upand,tomyshockandhorror,realizedthatIhadbeenshot-withanarrow.

Igrabbedthearrowtightlywhereithadgonethroughmyneckandraninside,screaming

myhusband'sname.Edwasinthebackofthehousetalkingtoourdaughter,Keila,on

thephone.Hedroppedthephoneandrantome.Edgrabbedmebytheshouldersto

stopmefromrunningandtoldmetoliedownonthecouch.Thenhewenttocall911.

Ilaythereandprayed.Ididn'tknowiftherewasanywaythatIcouldsurvive.

Thenexthourorsowasacrazy,disorderlymixofevents.Thearrowhadcomefroma

younghunterpracticingwithacompoundbow,usedforhunting,backyard.Luckily,he

wasusingapracticearrow,whichissmoothandrounded;abroadheadarrowfbr

huntingwouldhavekilledme.Helivedacrossthebackstreetandwasshootingtothe

north.Thearrowhadbouncedandturnedbacktothesouth.Itwentovertwo,possibly

three,fences,throughthebushesandanoaktree,betweentwolargehangingbaskets,

andintomyneckasIwalkedtothegrill.Ashotfromacompoundbowcantravelupto

20()milesperhour,or300feetpersecond.

Paragraph1:Soon,Iwassenttothehospital.

Paragraph2:Thebowhunterpaidavisittomethenextday.

范例

Paragraph1:

Soon,IwassenttothehospitaLIcouldseetheworriedlookswithhorrorandanxiety

onthefacesofmyfamily.Itwassurelyfrighteningsincetherewasanarrowsticking

outofmyneck!Luckily,Ihadwonderfuldoctorsandnurseswhowereperfectlycalm

andtotallyfocused.Inspiredbythem,Ifeltcompletepeace,firmlybelievingthat

everythingwouldbefine.Althoughiwasinextremepain,iheldonwiththelastbitof

mystrengthbecauseiwouldn'tletallthosewholovedmedown.Ifinallymadeitand

thenewsspreadfastincommunity.

Paragraph2:

Thebowhunterpaidavisittomethenextday.Itturnedoutthattheyounghunter

whowascrazyaboutthrillinghuntingwaspreparingfbrthehuntingseason.Notuntil

thenewsofaccidentwasbroadcast,didherealizewhataterriblemistakehehadmade.

Heconfessed,4tTheexcitementandsatisfactionthroughhuntingturnedintobubblesin

asplitsecond!”Hecontinued.4,Iamwonderinghowicanmakeupfbrthesituation.^^

Withgreatguiltandregret,hemadeanapologytome.Tomyjoy,thisdisasterdidn't

bringdoomandgloombutmademebelievethemostpreciouspresentislifeandthe

loveandwarmthfromfamilyandfriends.

第二节读后续写(满分25分)

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Ihadthedifficulttaskofchoosingacareerpathbefore

collegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan,therewerelimitedoptions:becominga

doctororanengineer;orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.Iwasn't

interestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.

Myuncle,oneofthecidersinthefamily,suggestedthatIdoaworkplacementtoexperience

itforamonthinaninternationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icould

makeadecision.Itseemedlikeabrilliantidea.

Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowtheworld

offinancefunctioned,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingwork

surroundings.

Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.The

experiencecouldn^havebeenmoredifferent.Thehospitalhadanintenseenvironment.The

daysstartedearly(at7am,comparedto9amatthebank),andwerefilledwithendlessduties.

Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,v/orkingallday,throughthenight,andagainthenextday.

Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxingatmosphere,

betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalwasfullofexcitementandunpredictability,but

thestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatthebusinessoptionwasgoingtowinout.

Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteranespeciallybusynight

call.Infrontofmewasapublicbus,withcollegestudentssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweaved

through(穿梭)traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.

Paragraph1:

Suddenly,aboyfelloffthebackofthebus.

Paragraph2:

Thenextday,whenIwenttohospitaltoseetheboy,allhisfamilygotup,withgratefulsmiles

ontheirfaces.

范例

Suddenly,aboyfelloffihebackofihebus.Hehittheroadfacedownandrolled

over.Helaystillinthemiddleoftheroadasthebusspedaway.Noneofthecarsbehind

stopped.Thinkingthathecoulddieinamatterofminutes,Istoppedmycarand

carefullyexaminedtheboy.Withthehelpofsomepassers-by,Iliftedtheunconscious

boyintothecarandracedbacktothehospital.Afterhisfamilywascontacted,andhe

waswheeledintoemergencysurgery,Idrovehome,exhaustedbuthappy.(86)

Thenexlday,whenIwenttoihehospitalloseetheboy,allhisfamilygolup,with

gratefulsmilesontheirfhces.Whatafeelingitwastohelpsavethelifeofanother

person!IspenttherestofthedayinastateofthemostfabulousmoodIhadever

experienced.Drivinghomethatevening,Idecidedonmycareerpath.Twomonthsof

placementscouldnotdowhat30minutes'helpinganaccidentvictimhaddonefbrme.

Thisexperiencetaughtmethatattimes,thedecisionsaremadefbryou-andthat

whateverhappensisalwaysforthebest.(82)

评分标准：应用文：词数少于60

和多余100的，从总分中减去2

分。如书写较差，以致影响交际,

将分数降低一个档次。

档次描述

完全完成了试题规定的任务。

一覆盖所有内容要点。

第五档一应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

(13-一语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构

15)或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。