2024高考英语一轮复习层级3篇章结构第1讲合理恰当的细节添加教学案新人教版

-1-第1讲合理恰当的细微环节添加依据括号内的提示完成句子1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface­to­facecommunication(比如，许多人越来越不重视面对面的沟通)．2．Atthatmoment,Ibecamethefocusofthewholeclassandwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence(充溢了骄傲和自信)．3．IsuggestthattheteachershouldchoosemoreEnglishfilms,thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinteresting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加好玩)．4．Ifpossible(假如可能的话),I'lltakepartinsocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety(以便我能更多地了解这个社会)．5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme(令我兴奋的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．在书面表达的“留意”中有明确规定：1．词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充溢文章的方法，即“适当增加细微环节”。适当添加细微环节的详细方法如下：1．列举详细的实例进行补充说明①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.②我看到了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一个充溢活力的健康男孩，我特别喜爱体育运动。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.2．增加相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增加相关的缘由、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容①我须要好好休息，我要做些阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswellasforknowledge.②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人。Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemthroughdifficulties,butalsogivethemwarmthandhappiness.③演讲时要面带微笑；要讲慢些，讲清晰。Youshouldwearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearly.→Youshouldwearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak,whichwillmakeyourelaxed.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearlysothatyoucanleaveagoodimpressionontheaudienceandjudges.4．结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等①AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholidays,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到兴奋。②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。③Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.(愿望)我诚心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活。④Asastudent,it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)作为一个学生，爱护我们校内的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。依据提示，给下列短文增加合理恰当的细微环节假设你是李华，你的美国网友Peter准备到中国留学，他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐。请你依据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1．语言是道硬门槛；2．适应实力很重要；3．爱好爱好被看重。留意：1．词数100左右；2．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearPeter，InyourletteryoumentionedhowtogetthepreferenceofChineseuniversities.Ibelievetherewouldbethreemainaspectstobeconsidered.Firstly,masteringChineseisabasicneedtoliveinChina.1．Withthisability,youcancommunicatewithnativespeakerseasilyandhaveaccesstomanyresources(有了这种实力，你与当地人沟通就会很简单，而且还可以获得许多资源).Besides,itisimportanttoadapttothenewenvironmentquickly.2.Thesooneryoucangetusedtothenewenvironment,themorebeneficialitwillbecometoyou(你熟识新环境越早，好处就越多).Finally,personalinterestsandhobbiesarealsohighlyvalued.3.Youshouldchooseamajorthatyouwanttotakeup(你应