2024年新高考英语读后续写15大技能（15份打包）

备战2024年新高考英语读后续写15大技能(15份打

包)

专题09读后续写之积极和消极写景烘托

一、关键词

(1)

blow吹

howl咆哮

crash碰撞

stir搅动

darken使变黑

envelope信封，包裹

gloomy阴郁的

dip蘸

pour泼

sunshine/sunlight阳光

breeze微风

dim昏暗的

faint微弱的

winding蜿蜒的

frighten是某人害怕

chilling寒冷的

thunder雷，打雷

lightening闪电

frosty寒冷的

melt融化

二、常用短语

bebathedin沐浴在

amber-likesunshine琥珀色的阳光

stretchoff延伸

凉爽清新的风coolandrefreshingbreeze

落日thesettingsun

strolldownthestreet在街上漫步

thefirstrayofsunlight第一缕阳光

floodinto涌入

gentlebreeze微风

多雨的季节arainyseason

暴风雨之夜astormynight

在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain

在春天温暖的阳光里

inthewarmspringsunshine

难以忍受的热unbearablehot

放晴了clearup

木日光浴batheinthesunshine

一个偏僻的小村庄

asmallvillageoffthemap

离海滨仅咫尺之遥

bedottedwith点缀着

三、各种场景描写片段赏析

（一）阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉，兑的景色描写

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff（延伸）tothehorizon,

slowlynarrowingtonothingness（虚无），onlytore-emerge

（重新出现）againonyourleft.

WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltlikethe

amber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.

Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.

太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳

光倾斜而入

Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天

气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。

Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilver

liningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘

动的金色云朵所吸引了。

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimming

inbroadocean.

Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesofthe

weepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,

就像那卷起的窗帘。

Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesand

stirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、点缀）theslope.风，

轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerof

thepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcool

breeze.Howsweet!

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbright

andfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.The

airwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,

beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlooked

beautiful.

（二）暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写

12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,（乌

云密布、黑云压顶）andthewholeworldseemedtobeenveloped

inahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。

13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygray

cloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon（苍白昏暗的月亮）.

14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.

15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一阵阵寒

风刺痛他们的脸颊cStung的原形为sting“叮咬”

16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswith

asighingsound.叹息的声音

17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂

18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy（阴

郁的），atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofglcom.

Acoldstormyrainsetin（阴冷的暴风雨袭来），andnothingof

Julyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛）,whichthe

windwasdespoiling（摧残）,andthelengthoftheday,whichonly

madesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让

人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）

（三）烦闷焦躁的景色描写

19.It'shotenoughtomelthell.天热得能融化地狱。

20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangs

overthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,

andsitsonmyshoulders.整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩

着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。

（四）凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写

21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling（嚎叫）.

22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthe

windsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂

风肆意冲击房屋。

23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltrees

ontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhe

sky（闪电在空中持续乱舞）.

24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling（寒冷的细

雨），andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）puffs

（一阵阵小风）int，oasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir

（活动的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉闷地）and

silentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands

（踹口袋里的手）.

消极与积极场景：

（一）细节描述之describeapeacefulscene”

1.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltlikethe

amber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.（沐浴

在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤）

2.Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsand

villages.（点缀着）

3.Thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlybythe

gracefullywavingreeds.（优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇）

（二）细节描述之udescribestormyweatherH

1.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.（乌

云密布；黑云压顶）

2.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling.（海浪肆意拍打;劲风咆哮）

3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthe

windsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.（暴风骤雨）

（三）Goodsettingdescriptionforappreciation（佳"景”

赏析）

1.Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,

asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies.

2.Thesunkeptdippingdownintotheoceanandthelights

cameonattheharbor,castingsuddenshadowsontheground,

illuminatingthefacesthatwerejustasecondagosilhouettes.

Theskywasgoldenandpurple,theoceanadarkershadeofviclet.

3.Thesunhadset,butafaintpastelhazelingeredinthe

mid-summersky.

4.Theyrolledupthepath,treebranchesrakingthe

windshieldlikeangrywardens.

5.Outside,theairfilledwithcricketnoise,asthesun

reddenedinitsdescent.

6.Arestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomy

imaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscript

fromthelateMiddleAges.

7.Themoonwentslowlydowninloveliness；shedeparted

intothedepthofthehorizon,andlongveil-likeshadowscrept

uptheskythroughwhichthestarsappeared.

8.Allbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothing.Westeppedout

ofthetentontonothing.Sledgeandtentwerethere,Estraven

stoodbesideme,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadow.There

wasdulllightallaround,everywhere.Whenwewalkedonthe

crispsnownoshadowshowedthefootprint.Weleftnotrack.

Sledge,tent,himself,myself：nothingelseatall.Nosun,no

sky,nohorizon,noworld.

9.Nighthadfallenfastupontheland.Nomorethananhour

agotheskywaspaintedwithhuesofred,orangeandpink,but

allcolorhadfadedleavingonlyamattblackcanvaswithno

starstobelookedupon.

10.Itwouldbeacoldmoonlessnight.Theskywasdarkand

low,theairsochilledithurttobreathe.Alreadythegrcund

waslaidwhitewithfrostandanywaterthathadbeenliquid

underthewintersunhadbecomeice.

（四）自然景观描写：

1.Weusedtoliveinabeautifulvillage,andtherewere

treesandflowersandgreengrass,andtheairwassosweet.

我们以前住在一个漂亮的村舍里，那里树很多，还有花花草草，

连空气都是甜的。

2.Thesightofalargecornfieldinthelatterpartof

summer,withallitsgreenbannersv/avinganditstasseled

plumesnodding,isonetoadmire,andnottobeforgotten.

盛夏时节，一望无际的玉米地，绿色的叶子像旗帜一样迎风飞舞，

抽穗的包谷随风点头，这是多么赏心悦目而又令人难忘的景色啊！

3.Inthespringitsbranchesarecoveredwithbunchesof

creamyflowers,

春天里，栗子树的枝干上开满了一簇簇奶油般的花朵。

4.Beforethis,hehadlivedinawarmcountry,wherethe

sunshinesdownonbeautifulorangegroves,andfieldsalways

sweetwithflowers.在这之前，他一直住在一个天气暖和的乡村。

在那里，阳光洒满美丽的满是橘子的山坡，田野里到处是芳香扑鼻的

鲜花。

5.Lastnight,thecoldnorthwindblewgreatsnowclcuds

overthesky.Notastar,notabitofblueskycouldbeseen.

昨天夜里，北风呼啸，乌云密布。看不见一颗星星，整个天空也不见

一丝蓝色。

6.Itiswinter.Thecoldwindwhistlesthroughthebranches

ofthetrees.

正值冬季，寒风呼啸着吹过树枝。

7.Johnnylookedthroughtheglass.Therelaythepure,

featherysnowflakelikealovelylittlestar.

乔尼透过玻璃看着雪花，那片纯洁轻柔的雪花就像一颗可爰的小

星星。

8.Soonthetinyflakesfloatedsoftlydown,likeflecks

oflittlewhitebirds.

不久，小小的雪花静悄悄地飘落下来，就像一群白色的小鸟。

9.Thesunmusthavebeenpleasedwithwhathesaw,forhe

smiledsuchabright,sweetsmile,thatthewholewhitewcrld

sparkledasifitweremadeoflittlestars.太阳一定对雪花们

的作品非常满意，因为他笑得如此灿烂和甜蜜。整个洁白的世界闪闪

发光，就像一颗颗小星星在眨眼睛。

（五）早中晚场景举例：

早上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）

1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.

2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.

3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthe

sunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.

4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.

5.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranches

ofoldtrees.

雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上，

6.Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscold

underfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthat

I'mthere.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们

在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。

7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,

envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.——股浓郁的泥土

般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。

8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.

阳光倾斜而入.

9.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrant

flowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iam

totallydrunkwiththetwittering（吱喳）ofbirds.Soonthe

delicate纤弱的，精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.

10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwas

brightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasonginevery

heart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.Cardiff

Hill,beyondthevi11ageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesand

lookedbeautiful.

黄昏：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）

1.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天

空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.

2.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,nicikingithard

toseeanythinginthethickdarkness.

3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,

biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.

秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落，告别甜美夏天，召唤秋天

的到来。

4.It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsof

wetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,the

sidewalkmushyunderfoot.现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪

花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。

5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothe

lastbeamofsunlight.

雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.

6.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidly

fallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedever

thesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天

空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。

7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddown

thestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightly

swayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.

我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我

身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。

8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblameless

blueandshimmering.

湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是无比湛蓝，并且闪闪发光。

9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日

落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.

10.Thestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutes

ifIcouldn,tfindshelter.

如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧

焦

11.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadand

shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。

晚上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）

1.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight（昏暗的灯光）in

thevillage.

2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousand

scared.Atthatmcment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaint

lightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.

3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingclcuds

heldmeentirelyintheirpower.

4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytale

quality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.

天空，午夜蓝，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量，星星点点的天空照

亮了夜晚。

5.Theclearblueskywasclottedwithflutteringlarks.天

气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。

6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouring

fromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.

Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwith

theroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepingupon

me.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurled

up.

7.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingclouds

heldmeentirelyintheirpower.

8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy（阴

郁的）,atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofglcom.

Acoldstormyrainsetin（阴冷的暴风雨袭来），andnothingof

Julyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木丛），whichthe

windwasdespoiling（摧残），andthelengthoftheday,whichonly

madesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白昼的延长可以让

人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）

9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,（乌

云密布、黑云压顶）andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelcped

inahugegrayquilt.整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。

10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygray

cloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon（苍白昏暗的月亮）.

Thefrostyair（寒冷的空气）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.

其它：

1.Iclosedniyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,

loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldme

entirelyintheirfascination.

2.Thegentlebreeze（MR）strokedhishead,asif

comfortingallhistiredness.

3.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.

Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittle

guyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmile

andtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepatted

herontheface,warmandcomfortable.

4.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouring

fromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.

Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwith

theroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepingupon

me.Timmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurled

up.

5.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthe

sky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywinds

slapping（拍；掴）myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtears

andfreezingrain.

6.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswith

richeranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensand

aseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothe

painting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering（吱喳）ofbirds.

Soonthedelicate纤弱的，精致的airandsoftraindropsir.elt

myheart.Oh,I'mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!专题

15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落

一、读后续写收尾的方式：

1.画面定格

2.对话收尾

3.主题升华

4.结尾留白

5.首尾呼应

二、画面定格

1.人物动作的画面定格

如：(2020杭州高级中学等五校联考)Theystoodtherefora

moment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrent

andfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverand

momentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,alir.ost

reluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomed

affectionaroundhermotherJsshouldersandgentlyguidedher

backintothedeluge.

如：Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,

Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegot

thebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaced

itinDoraJshand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.

Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,

withtearswellingupinhereyes.

如：Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,"No."God

feltabitrelievedandsaid,uTomorrowyoucanbecomehuman

again.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobe

abutterflyfortherestofmylife..."Thenthebutterflywould

staytogetherwithher]overforever.Onthetopofthemountain,

sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

(1)Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrass

greenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeone

beautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜

和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。(黎明到来的画面)

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

(2)Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,

bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.

黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸

到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

（3）ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwaded

throughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.

当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙

色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

（4）Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidly

fallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthe

sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空

被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

（5）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthe

nightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.

Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.

被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂

着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

（6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIever

knewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasit

reflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththe

heat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.

抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处

有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。

我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊

寓意）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

（7）Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,

gavethesceneafairytalequality.缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝

色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

(8)Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundis

coldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromthe

ground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的

地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味

从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。(雨后清新的画面)

Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelast

beamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。

(雨水来临的画面)

2.特殊寓意的写景画面

(9)TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddown

thestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightly

swayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上

漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，

轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。(描写落叶的画面)

三、对话收尾

(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearch

forhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheir

lastnames."Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotheranche

toldmethathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,

hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColoir.bia

tobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunion

withhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamily

everywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.

(2)Whatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthat

Shavialsomovesothers.Nina'sfamilyhadmovedtoabigger

apartment.'Tveheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs,loyalty,

butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappento

me.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalong

distancetofindus,“saidNina,“Iwouldnevergivethiskind

offriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis

-animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneed

ourloveandcare.

(3)HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,

DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajobworkingforthe

company.Shesaid,“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitude

andisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.I

wastold,(Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehisjobsifhe

wasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteycung

manandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”

(4),,•Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.Jackasked

Paisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithir.e?

"Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewalls

withloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,"Yes!For

me,itisnotasufferingtolive.”

四、主题升华

(1)Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.

Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,

andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,I

wouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbea_famous_dancer.Someday,

when_I_am_olderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbe

justasgreataparentasmymom.(母爱的深远影响)

(2)….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn'

tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn'tequal

happiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,

anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmy

classmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyis

everything.Inmyopinion,moneycan'ttaketheplaceof

everything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表

达自己的价值观)

(4)uTworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,"theteacher

answered.uFirst,you'vealmostmasteredoneoftheir.ost

difficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefense

forthatmoveisforyouropponenttcgrabyourleftarm.It

isyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asa

proverbsays,"Everycoinhastwosides.'Makingfulluseof

yourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinno

casewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairto

everyone."(借用名言警句来升华主题)

五、结尾留白

(1)Whileshewrappedthem,Itookadeepbreathandasked

Joy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans"IexplainedthatI'dlike

towaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital-gaveGrace

andherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby."Wouldyoube

interestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat“Iasked.'Td

loveto,"shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,

thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreak

followingBetsy'sdeath.(故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间)

(2)Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedto

openit.Hedeclaredaloud,“WhocaresHewantedmetohave

itanyway.Imightaswe11enjoyitnow."Withthat,heunwrapped

thewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohard

rockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhite

pearlworththousandsofdollars.

六、首尾呼应

(1)

开头：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwith

suprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,

sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.Onestrangefaimlytrip

wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

结尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,

shewasstillakindandnicemom.

(2)

开头：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoa

vacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatripto

theWildWest.

结尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerous

vacationbefore.ThespecialtriptoiheWildWestwasdeeply

engravedinmymind.

(3)

开头：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthe

waytoworkoneday.

结尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughing

wheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious搞笑的experience.

附：名言警句升华主题

1.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.靖志者，事

竟成。

2.Wellbegunishalfdone.好的开端是成功的一半。

3.East,west,homeisbest.金窝、银窝，不如自己的

草窝。

4.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.学无坦途。

5.Lookbeforeyouleap./Firstthink,thenact.三

思而后行/摸着石头过河

6.Itisnevertoolatetomend.亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。

7.Lightcome,lightgo.来得容易，去得快。

8.Timeismoney.时间就是金钱。

9.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真交。

10.Greathopesmakegreatman.远大的希望，造就伟大的

人物。

11.Afterastormcomesacalm.雨过天晴。

12.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。

13.Artislong,butlifeisshort.人生有限，学问无涯。

14.Sticktoit,andyou,11succeed.只要人有恒，万事都

能成。

15.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,

wealthyandwise.

早睡早起，富裕、聪明、身体好。

16.Agoodmedicinetastesbitter.良药苦口。

17.Itisgoodtolearnatanotherman1scost.前车之鉴。

18.Keepingisharderthanwinning.创业不易，守业更难。

19.Let1scrossthebridgewhenwecometoit.船到桥头

自然直。

20.Morehaste,lessspeed.欲速则不达。

21.Nopains,nogains.不劳则无获。

22.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上

无难事，只要肯登攀。

23.Wherethereislife,thereishope.生命不息，希望

常在。

24.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

25.Wemustnotliedown,andcry,“Godhelpus.“求神

不如求己。

26.Aplantmayproducenewflowers；manisyoungbutonce.

花有重开日，人无再少年。

27.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者，天助之。

28.Whatmaybedoneatanytimewi11bedoneatnotime.

明日待明日，明日不再来。

29.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作，

不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

30.Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess.勤奋是成功之母。

31.Truthisthedaughteroftime.时间见真理。

32.Takecareofthepence,andthepoundswilltakecare

ofthemselves.

积少自然成多c/小事留意，大事顺利

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