Unit 7 A Day to Remember .（话题写作指导）（教师版）

Unit7ADaytoRemember(话题写作指导）【话题分析】值得记忆的一天本单元的话题是“值得记忆的一天”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关学校郊游、周末活动或过去发生的事情的短文。在写作时，时态以一般过去时为主，人称主要是第一人称。注意要交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点、经过及感受。常用句型：Itwassunny/cloudy/windy/rainy...Wewentonaschooltrip...Wehadsomuchfun...Wehelped...Wepicked...Itwastiringbutinteresting.Itwasadaytoremember.【写作实例】生活中有很多值得记忆的东西。你校英语报社正在开展以“ADaytoRemember”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，参加此次活动。内容包括：1.活动的时间、天气情况、参加人员、地点；2.具体活动；3.感受...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】【教材典句】Todaywewentinaschooltriptoafarm!(SB,1b)Theworkseemedeasy,butittooktimetogetitright.(SB,1b)Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(SB，1b）Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.(SB,1b)【经典范文】ADaytoRememberItwassunnylastSaturday.WewentonaschooltriptoRedStarFarm.Wehadsomuchfunthere.Ittookusonehourtogettherebybus.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmfirst.Thereweremanygoats,cows,ducksandchickensonthefarm.Thefarmertoldussomethingabouttheseanimals'livinghabits.IwasinterestedintheanimalsbecauseIlovedthem.Thenwehelpedthefarmerfeedchickensandducks.Afterthat,thefarmertaughtushowtomilkacow.Itseemedeasy,butittookussometimetogetitright.Finally,wehelpedthefarmerpicksomeeggs.Itwastiringbutinteresting.OnethingIlearnttoday:Keepinganimalsisn'teasy.Itneedslotsofwork.Itmademethinkweshouldvaluethetimeandworkhardforabetterfuture.Itwasadaytoremember.【亮点点评】①用lastSaturday点明活动的时间。②用wentonaschooltrip表达上周六的活动。③first,then,after,that,finally表明活动的顺序。④用“Itwastiringbut...”表达对这次活动的感受。⑤"Itwasadaytoremember.”总结全文。【同步检测】1．假如你是李华，你校广播站以“MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchool”为题向学生们征稿。请你写一篇英语文章投稿，内容包括：学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等等。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua.MyfirstdayherewasgoodbecauseIlearnedmanynewthings.Theclasseswereinteresting.Ilikescienceandhistorybest.Afterschool,Ijoinedthebookclub.Wereadandtalkedaboutbooks.Ialsoplayedgameswithmynewfriends.Howfunitwas!Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.Ishouldspendmoretimelearningnewwords.Overall,I’mhappyhere.I’mmakingnewfriendsandlearningnewthings.I’mlookingforwardtomoredayslikethis.Thankyouforlistening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山。向大家问好，介绍自己。（开头已给出）第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，阐述在初中第一天的学习、活动、遇到的问题、这一天的感受等。第三步，书写结语。展望未来，感谢大家的聆听。[亮点词汇]①findit+adj.forsb.todosth.发现做某事对某人来说很怎么样②spendtimedoingsth.花时间做某事③overall

adv.总之④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Howfunitwas!（感叹句）②Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.（省略that的宾语从句）省略（）2．假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“AnExcitingTrip”的英语短文。时间上周末参加者你和……地点北海公园（BeihaiPark）活动划船、爬山、野餐（haveapicnic）、照相、做游戏……感受……要求:1.不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，表达正确；3.60词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnExcitingTrip

Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatmyhome.WewenttoBeihaiParkbybus.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedandwesangsongsonthebus.Whenwegotthere,wewentboatingonthelake.Weclimbedmountainsandhadapicniconthemountain.Afterthatwetooksomephotos.Thensomegirlsdancedunderthetreeandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wegothomeat4o'clockintheafternoon.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadagreattime.【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文。要求根据题目所给要点提示写一篇关于郊游的英语短文，文中所给要点必须全部包含，并可以适当加以拓展。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称；时态应用一般过去时；按照要点提示，准确表达，内容条理清楚，无句法错误；可适当运用连词或时间状语从句，使文章内容层次清晰。3．假设上个月，你参加了学校组织的去现代农场的郊游活动，请以“Aschooltriptothemodernfarm”为题，写一篇英语短文。提示问题：(1)Whodidyougotothefarmwith?(2)Howdidyougetthere?(3)Whatdidyoudothere?(4)Howdidyoufeel?提示词语：pickstrawberries,feedcows,tiredbutveryhappy要求：1.60词左右；2.在提示问题和提示词语的基础上，可适当发挥。Aschooltriptothemodernfarm________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AschooltriptothemodernfarmIwentonaschooltriptothemodernfarmwithmyclassmatesandteacherslastmonth.Wetookabusthere.Whenwegotthere,wepickedstrawberries.Thestrawberriesweredelicious.Afterthat,wefedcows.Thecowswereveryfriendly.Wehadareallygoodtimethere.Onthewaybacktoschool,Ifeltalittletiredbutveryhappy.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求根据所给的要点提示来介绍你参加的现代农场的郊游活动。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称和一般过去时来叙述。写作时先开篇点题，然后叙述自己在现代农场的经历，最后表达这次旅行的感受。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。4．假如你是Kate，现在就读于北京某国际学校，上周你学校组织了一次旅行。你们游览了北京的许多名胜古迹（placeofinterest），如长城、故宫、天安门广场（Tian’anmenSquare)等。请你给你的同学Mike写一封60词左右的书信介绍一下你的这次学校旅行。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate【答案】DearMike,Howareyou?Howwasyourschooltrip?IwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmateslastweekinBeijing,China.Itwasgreat.YouknowBeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithaslotsofplacesofinterest.LastSunday,theweatherwassunny.WewenttotheGreatWallanditwasgreatandexciting.ThenwewenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwascool!NextwevisitedTian’anmenSquare.Itwasbeautiful.Oh,Itookalotofphotosonthetrip.Allofushadgreatfunontheschooltrip!Pleasewritebacksoonandtellmeaboutyourtrip.Yours,Kate【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封书信，要注意书信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，题中给出了旅行的相关内容，在写作中要进行运用，也可以适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。2.写作指导：本文主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，在介绍北京的情况时，用一般现在时，介绍旅行过程时用一般过去时。第一段主要是问候朋友；第二段重点介绍北京并描述旅行过程和感受，写作时要注意连接词的使用，使文章更加有层次；最后一段表达祝愿。写作中注意时态的转换，同时保证无语法错误和单词拼写错误。5．假如你叫皮特，请根据表格中所给的信息用英语写一则旅行日记。词数不少于60。DateOctober2nd,TuesdayWeatherwindyPlacetheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseumFoodchicken,friedfishFeelingdelicious,happy,tiredTuesday,October2nd

Windy___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tuesday,October2nd

WindyItwaswindyonOctober2nd.WewenttotheGreatWallandthePalaceMuseum.They’reverygreat.Thereweremanyvisitorsthere.Wehadchickenandfriedfishfordinnerinarestaurant.Thefoodintherestaurantwasverydelicious.Welikeditverymuch.Wehadagreattime.ItwasanexcellenttripinChina.Weweretired,buthappy.【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇日记，主要从当天的天气入手开始描写，然后用记述的方式讲述当天做的一些事情，把当天的经历写清楚即可。2.例文点评：文章以当天的天气情况展开描写，详细的描写了当天做的一些事情，文章结构完整，格式正确，用词简单易懂，语言结构清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：theGreatWall；PalaceMuseum；haveagoodtime。句型：and引导的并列句；Therebe句型。【真题链接】1．（23-24七年级下·河北张家口·期末）随着社会的发展，越来越多的人走进博物馆。假如上周六（7月6日），你参观了张家口博物馆（ZhangjiakouMuseum）。请根据下面的图示写一篇短文，介绍你的博物馆之旅。要求：1.短文须包含以上全部图片信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3.词数60个左右。ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseum______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseumLastSaturday,IhadatriptoZhangjiakouMuseum.Itwasveryinteresting.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.ItwassunnylastSaturday.ZhangjiakouMuseumisveryfar.It’saboutfortykilometers.Iwenttherebybus.Ittookusaboutfiftyminutes.InthemuseumwesawalotofinterestingthingsandIlearnedalot.Ilearnedsomeinformationaboutthehistory,geographyandcultureofmyhometown.ItookalotofphotosandIboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.ItwasanexcellenttripandIhadagoodtime!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍博物馆之旅；第二步，介绍时间、天气、交通以及在博物馆进行的活动等；第三步，介绍自己的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①interesting有趣的②sunny晴朗的③information信息④gift礼物⑤excellent极好的⑥haveagoodtime玩得愉快[高分句型]Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.(祈使句)2．（23-24七年级下·山东德州·期末）古人云：“读万卷书，行万里路。”假如你是李华，本周你需要在英语角活动上向大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。要求：1.参考要点内容，并适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Mytripto__________LastSaturday,Itookatripto__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoavillageLastSaturday,Itookatriptoavillagenearmyhomewithmyparents.Theweathertherewassunnyandwarmthatday.Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.Mymothertooksomebeautifulpictures.Afterthat,wepickedsomefreshfruitonthefarmtogether.Thenwehadlunchinasmallbutcleanrestaurant.Thefoodtherewasverydelicious.Intheafternoon,wewentfishingforanhour.Wedidn’tgohomeuntilitwasdark.ItwasgreatfuntostayinthevillageandIwashappyaboutthistrip.I’mlookingforwardtotravellingthereagain.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]

第一步，补全标题；

第二步，讲述去农村的旅行经历；第三步，表达自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①atfirst起初

②lookforwardto期待

[高分句型]

①Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.（动词不定式作主语）

②Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.（时间状语从句）3．（23-24七年级下·山东德州·期末）假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸妈妈带你去了北京旅游，请你根据下列表格提示写篇英语短文，介绍一下你的旅游经历。行程我和爸爸、妈妈去了北京参观了天安门广场，国家博物馆，在北海公园划船去了老舍茶馆，了解了老舍的生命历程：吃了美味的食物，并给爷爷奶奶买了礼物。感受……提示词：天安门广场TiananmenSquare；国家博物馆NationalMuseum；北海公园BeihaiPark划船goboating；老舍茶馆LaoSheTeahouse；骆驼祥子CamelXiangzi要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。MyTriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutthetrip.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Andwevisitedmanyplacesofinterest,suchasTiananmenSquare,theNationalMuseumandBeihaiPark.AndinBeihaiPark,wewentboating.Itwasgreatfun!WealsowenttoLaoSheTeahouseandlearntalotaboutLaoShe.HewasborninBeijingin1899.Thenhebecameateacherin1916.Fiveyearslater,hewasinanewspaper.AndthenhewenttoEnglandandtaughtChinesein1924.Later,hecamebacktoChinain1929.Hemarriedin1931anddiedin1966.TwoofhisfamousworksareCamelXiangziandLaoSheTeahouse.Wealsohadsomedeliciouslocalfood,suchasBeijingDuck.Andweboughtsomegiftsformygrandparentsbeforeweleft.Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.Beijingisawonderfulplace.IthinkIwillgothereagain.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。［写作步骤］第一步，开门见山，引出话题：介绍去年暑假去北京的经历。第二步，介绍去北京的方式和参观的景点；第三步，重点介绍老舍的生命历程；第四步，品尝美食以及其他活动；第五步，表达感受。［亮点词汇］①manyplacesofinterest许多名胜古迹②suchas例如［高分句型］①Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.

(though引导让步状语从句)②IthinkIwillgothereagain.(宾语从句)4．（23-24七年级下·四川广安·期末）假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起参观了杭州，根据下面提供的信息，以“MyLastSummerHoliday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇不少于60词的小短文，可适当发挥。参考词汇：第一天：Onthefirstday；西湖：TheWestLake；第四：fourth提示：1.第一天，参观西湖，拍了许多照片。2.第二天，在湖里游泳，非常凉爽。3.第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。4.第四天，在街上散步，为朋友买了一些礼物。5.很累，但很开心。期待着下次再去。MyLastSummerHoliday_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyLastSummerHolidayIvisitedHangZhouwithmyparentslastsummervacation.Wehadagreattimethere.HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.WevisitedtheWestLakeandtookmanyphotosthereonthefirstday.Iswaminthelakethenextdayanditwasverycool.Wehadapicniconthethirdday.Howdeliciousthefoodwas!Iwalkedonthestreetandboughtsomegiftsformyfriendsonthefourthday.IleftHangZhou,feelingtired,buthappy.Iamlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你的杭州之旅的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“以“MyLastSummerHoliday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参观的地点、自己的活动、感受等”几个方面重点介绍你的杭州之旅的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“期望再次去那里”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①haveagreattime玩得高兴；②takephotos拍照；③buysthforsb给某人买某物；④lookforwardto期望。[高分句型]①HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.(“oneofthe+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型)②Howdeliciousthefoodwas!(感叹句)5．（23-24七年级下·山东临沂·期末）21世纪英文报正在举办以“MyTripto________”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文来投稿，分享自己难忘的旅行经历。提示:1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whodidyougowith?Andhowdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyoudothere?4.Howdidyoufeelaboutyourtrip?要求：1.词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。MyTriptoBeijing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 MyTriptoBeijingLastyear,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsinthesummervacation.Wewenttherebyplane.WevisitedthewonderfulForbiddenCityandSummerPalace,climbedtheGreatWall,andwalkedthroughTiananmenSquare.What’smore,wewatchedtheraisingofthenationalflagintheearlymorning.ThefoodinBeijingwasalsoamazing.IlikeddeliciousPekingduckandlambhotpot.MytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.Itwasajourneythatnotonlyfilledmyeyeswithwonderbutalsotouchedmyheart.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，直入主题，介绍旅行的时间，地点和人物；第二步，具体阐述在这次旅行中都做了什么；第三步，谈谈自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①walkthrough穿过②theraisingofthenationalflag国旗的升起③notonly...butalso不仅……而且……[高分句型]①MytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.(定语从句)6．（23-24七年级下·河北石家庄·期末）假如你是李华，今年五一节你和你的父母坐火车一起去北京游玩了。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇日记，可适当发挥。日期5月1日天气晴朗行程上午：游览天安门广场（Tian’anmenSquare）和故宫（thePalaceMuseum）中午：在一家餐馆吃牛肉面下午：参观名胜古迹长城感受虽然有点累，但是很开心。要求：1.意思连贯，表达准确，可适当拓展；2.词数：不少于70词。May1st___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】May1stThisMayDayIwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Itwassunny.Wewereexcited.WevisitedtheTian’anmenSquareandthePalaceMuseuminthemorning.Therewerelotsofpeople.Atnoon,wehadbeefnoodlesatarestaurant.Intheafternoon,wevisitedtheGreatWallandtooksomephotosthere.Beijingisabeautifulcity.WhenIcameback,