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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Aftercollegegraduation,Ibecameaneditorofourcityeveningpaperandwaspromotedtothedeputy(副的)editorofthepaperfiveyearslater.Oneday,asIparkedmycarandwalkedtowardstheoffice,Inoticedtwoboyswhoappearedtobearoundeightyearsold,sellingpopcornonthestreetcorner.Curious,Iapproachedthemandrequestedhalfakilogramofpopcorn.Theyprepareditformewithinfiveminutes.“Howmuchisit?”Iasked.“It’s30rupees,sir.”theyreplied.Ithenaskedtheirnames,andtheyanswered,“Sahib,Asib.”IaskedSahibwhytheyweren’tinschoolandweresellingpopcorninstead.Sahibexplainedthattheyweredoingittoearnmoneyfortheirschooling.However,Asibquicklyinterjected(插话),sayingtheyhadnomoneyleftaftercoveringfoodandmedicine,nottomentionschoolingfees.“Medicineforwhat?Youguysarelookingwell,”Isaid.Asibreplied,“Ourmotherhasakidney(肾)disease,soweneedmoneytopurchasemedicineforhertreatment.”WhenIinquiredabouttheirfather,Sahibsadlysharedthathehadpassedawayfromcancerfouryearsbefore,leavingtheirmothertosupportthemwithtwojobs.Iwasdeeplymovedandstruggledtofindwords.Beforeleaving,Iaskedwhethertheywouldbetherethenextday,intendingtobuysomethen.Theyassuredmetheywouldcome.“Takecare,boys,”IsaidasIleft.Thenextday,IreturnedtothespotwhereIhadmetSahibandAsibthedaybefore,buttheywerenotsellingpopcornasusual,standingtherewithasinglebagofpopcorn.Seeingintheireyesthattheirheartsbrokebecauseofsadness,Iaskedwhyandtheyexplainedthattheyhadbeenwaitingformebuthadtoleavebecausetheirmother’shealthhadgotworse.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Itriedtocomfortthemanddecidedtosomethingmyselftohelpthefamily.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthisstoryandmadeitpublic.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意这篇文章讲述了一位城市晚报副主编在下班途中遇到两个卖爆米花的小男孩的故事。这两个男孩——Sahib和Asib——大约八岁,他们为了支付母亲的医药费和自己的学费而不得不在街头卖爆米花。他们的父亲四年前因癌症去世,母亲靠两份工作维持生计。男孩们的母亲患有肾病,家庭经济陷入困境。作者深受感动,决定帮助他们。第二天,作者回到原地,发现男孩们因母亲病情加重而无法继续卖爆米花。作者安慰他们,并决定亲自采取行动帮助这个家庭。回到办公室后,作者将这个故事写成文章并公之于众,引发了社会的关注和支持故事山分析起始阶段:作者在下班途中遇到两个卖爆米花的小男孩。上升阶段:通过与男孩们的对话,作者了解到他们家庭的困境。高潮:男孩们的母亲病情加重,他们无法继续卖爆米花。下降阶段:作者决定采取行动,通过媒体的力量帮助这个家庭。结局:社会的广泛关注和支持改变了这个家庭的命运。伏笔及回应伏笔:作者是城市晚报的副主编。

回应:作者利用自己的职业优势,通过媒体的力量帮助男孩们。伏笔:男孩们提到母亲的肾病和家庭的经济困境。

回应:作者通过文章引发社会关注,为男孩们筹集医药费。伏笔:男孩们提到第二天还会在原地卖爆米花。

回应:作者第二天回到原地,发现男孩们因母亲病情加重而无法继续卖爆米花。伏笔:作者询问男孩们的父亲,得知他已去世。

回应:家庭的困境更加凸显,作者决定伸出援手。伏笔:男孩们提到“没有钱支付学费”。

回应:通过社会支持,男孩们得以继续学业。续写要点(两段)第一段:作者决定亲自帮助这个家庭,安慰男孩们,并承诺会采取行动。第二段:作者回到办公室,将这个故事写成文章并公之于众,引发了社会的广泛关注和支持。情感线文章通过作者的视角展现了两个小男孩在困境中的坚强与乐观。男孩们的母亲身患重病,家庭经济陷入困境,但他们依然努力维持生活,甚至为了学费而卖爆米花。作者深受感动,决定伸出援手。文章的情感从最初的同情,到后来的感动和决心,最终通过社会的支持实现了希望与温暖的传递。这种情感的起伏让读者感受到人性的善良和社会的温暖。故事线作者的日常:作者是城市晚报的副主编,过着普通的生活。偶遇男孩们:作者在下班途中遇到卖爆米花的Sahib和Asib。家庭困境:男孩们的母亲患有肾病,父亲去世,家庭经济困难。作者的决定:作者决定帮助这个家庭,安慰男孩们。媒体的力量:作者通过报纸和社交媒体传播男孩们的故事,引发社会关注。社会支持:通过社会的帮助,男孩们的母亲得到治疗,男孩们得以继续上学。主旨升华句Inthedarkestmoments,asingleactofkindnesscanlightuptheworld.Thepowerofcommunityliesinitsabilitytocometogetherintimesofneed.Sometimes,thesmallestgesturescanmakethebiggestdifference.Hopecanbefoundeveninthemostchallengingcircumstances.Whenwereachouttohelpothers,wediscoverthetruemeaningofcompassion.写作示范(两篇)示例一Itriedtocomfortthemanddecidedtodosomethingmyselftohelpthefamily.ItookoutmywalletandgavethemallthecashIhad,tellingthemtouseitfortheirmother'smedicineandtheireducation.Theylookedatmewithtearsintheireyes,andIcouldseethehopeflickeringintheirfaces.IpromisedthemthatIwouldfindawaytohelpthemmore.Beforeleaving,ItooktheiraddressandtoldthemIwouldvisitthemsoon.Theynodded,clutchingthemoneytightly,andthankedmewithheartfeltsmiles.Ileftwithaheavyheartbutalsowithadeterminationtomakeadifferenceintheirlives.Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthisstoryandmadeitpublic.IwroteaboutSahibandAsib'sstruggles,theirbravery,andtheirunwaveringhopedespitethehardshipstheyfaced.Isharedtheirstoryonsocialmediaandinthenewspaper,hopingtorallysupportfromthecommunity.Tomysurprise,theresponsewasoverwhelming.Peoplefromallwalksoflifereachedout,offeringfinancialhelp,schoolsupplies,andevenmedicalassistance.Withinaweek,wehadraisedenoughmoneytocovertheirmother'smedicalexpensesandensurethatSahibandAsibcouldcontinuetheireducation.Theirstorybecameasymbolofhopeandcommunityspirit,showingthateveninthedarkesttimes,thereisalwaysalightattheendofthetunnel.示例二Itriedtocomfortthemanddecidedtodosomethingmyselftohelpthefamily.ItookoutmywalletandgavethemallthecashIhad,tellingthemtouseitfortheirmother'smedicineandtheireducation.Theylookedatmewithtearsintheireyes,andIcouldseethehopeflickeringintheirfaces.IpromisedthemthatIwouldfindawaytohelpthemmore.Beforeleaving,ItooktheiraddressandtoldthemIwouldvisitthemsoon.Theynodded,clutchingthemoneytightly,andthankedmewithheartfeltsmiles.Ileftwithaheavyheartbutalsowithadeterminationtomakeadifferenceintheirlives.Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthisstoryandmadeitpublic.IwroteaboutSahibandAsib'sstruggles,theirbravery,andtheirunwaveringhopedespitethehardshipstheyfaced.Isharedtheirstoryonsocialmediaandinthenewspaper,hopingtorallysupportfromthecommunity.Tomysurprise,theresponsewasoverwhelming.Peoplefromallwalksoflifereachedout,offeringfinancialhelp,schoolsupplies,andevenmedicalassistance.Withinaweek,wehadraisedenoughmoneytocovertheirmother'smedicalexpensesandensurethatSahibandAsibcouldcontinuetheireducation.Theirstorybecameasymbolofhopeandcommunityspirit,showingthateveninthedarkesttimes,thereisalwaysalightattheendofthetunnel.【答案】Itriedtocomfortthemanddecidedtosomethingmyselftohelpthefamily.Iaskedwhichhospitaltheirmotherwasinandvisitedherwiththeb

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