英语应用文写作不可不背的写作素材

系列四不可不背的写作素材

I.应用文写作高分表达

一、词汇升级

1.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.

一WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iconveyedmyappreciationtomy

teacher.

2.Wewillorganizeallkindsofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusical

instruments,folkdancesandChinesemartialarts.

一Wewillorganizearangeof/avarietyofactivities,includingperformancesontraditional

Chinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesaswellasChinesemartialarts.

3.1fllbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we'llfirstvisitafarm,wherewecanfeedchickensand

pickstrawberries.

一It'llbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we'llfirstpayavisitto/dropinatafarm,wherewe

canfeedchickensandpickstrawberries.

4.1fgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwilltrytopresentthecharmofChineseculture.

一Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwillsparenoefforttopresentthecharmofChineseculture.

5.I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

一I'mwritingtoinformyouofsomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

6.ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksareverypopular.

-^•ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksenjoygreatpopularity.

7.Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Ilikebeingavolunteer,providingservice.

一Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Iamkeenonbeingavolunteer,providing

service.

8.1wouldliketocongratulateyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeech

Competition.

一Iwouldliketoexpress/conveymycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeinthe

ChineseSpeechCompetition.

9.rdappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouarefreeinadvance.

一I'dappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouareavailableinadvance.

10.KnowingthatyoulikeChinesepaper-cutting,Iamveryhappytoinviteyoutotakepartinthe

onlinelecturegivenbymyartteacherMr.Wang.

—KnowingthatyouarefoodofChinesepaper-cutting,Iammorethandelightedtoinviteyouto

getengagedintheonlinelecturedeliveredbymyartteacherMr.Wang.

11.Besides,essayscontributedshouldbelimitedwithin500wordsandwritteninEnglishonly.

一Besides,essayscontributedaresupposedtobelimitedwithin500wordsandwritteninEnglish

only.

12.Busywithmyassignments,Ican'tgoshoppingwithMotherthismorning.

―Occupiedwithmyassignments,Ican'tgoshoppingwithMotherthismorning.

13.Theoldmandonatedalotofmoneytotheschool.makingthestudentsreturntotheir

classroom.

一Theoldmandonatedalotofmoneytotheschool,enablingth。studentstoreturntotheir

classroom.

二、句式升级

1.被动要比主动好

①LastSaturday,weheldspringploughingandplantingpracticeintheschool'slaborpractice

base.

一LastSaturday,springploughingandplantingpracticewasheldintheschool'slaborpractice

base.

②YoumustsubmityourpaintingstoStudents9UnionbeforeNovember10.

—YourpaintingsmustbesubmittedtoStudents5UnionbeforeNovember10.

2.倒装要比正常妙

⑴“only+介词短语/副词/状语从句”位于句首引起的部分倒装

③Wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningfulonlyinthisway.

一0nlyinthiswaycanweimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningful.

@YoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofitonlywhenyoucometoChinatoexperiencethe

SpringFestivalbyyourself.

一OnlywhenyoucometoChinatoexperiencetheSpringFestivalbyyourselfcanyouhavea

betterunderstandingofit.

(2)notonly...butalso...“不但...而且...”结构中,notonly位于句首引起的部分倒装

©Throughthisactivity,wenotonlyrealizedthevalueoflabor,butwealsolearnedtorespectall

laborers.

一Throughthisactivity,notonlydidwerealizethevalueoflabor,butwealsolearnedtorespect

alllaborers.

⑥Thisthemeactivityisnotonlyofgreatbenefittoourmentalhealthbutitalsoenrichesour

schoollife.

—Notonlyisthisthemeactivityofgreatbenefittoourmentalhealthbutitalsoenrichesour

schoollife.

(3)notuntil...“直到...才”结构中,notuntil位于句首引起的倒装，本句式还可以用强调句型

⑦Iwasn'tawareoftheimportanceofteamworkuntilIwaschosenmonitor.

—NotuntilIwaschosenmonitorwasIawareoftheimportanceofteamwork.

一ItwasnotuntilIwaschosenmonitorthatIwasawareoftheimportanceofteamwork］强调句

型)

(4)so/such...that...“如此...以至于...“结构中,so/such...位于句首引起的倒装

©WastingfoodissodisappointingthatI'dliketogivesomeadviceonreducingfoodwaste.

一SodisappointingiswastingfoodthatFdliketogivesomeadviceonreducingfoodwaste.

@Theactivitywassomeaningfulthateveryonewaseagertohaveanotherchance.

—Someaningfulwastheactivitythateveryonewaseagertohaveanotherchance.

(5)as/though“尽管”引起的倒装句:M/./儿+as/though+主语+谓语,...

©Though/AlthoughIwastiredandsweaty,Ifoundthistriprewarding.

一Tiredandsweatyas/thoughIwas」foundthistriprewarding.

1IThough/Althoughwewereexhausted,weenjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

—Exhaustedas/thoughwewere,weenjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

(6)否定副词hardly.nor,never等引导的倒装句

121couldhardlyholdbackmyexcitementwhenIknewIgotthefirstprize.

—HardlycouldIholdbackmyexcitementwhenIknewIgotthefirstprize.

⑺完全倒装

13Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,thenewscamethere.

—Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

14Thetwinswentupstairs,carryingthebreakfasttheyhadmade.

—Upstairswentthetwins,carryingthebreakfasttheyhadmade.

3.强调结构不可少

强调句型的结构:Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who...；强调谓语动词用do/does/did

151turnedonthegascookerundertheguidanceofmymother.

一ItwasundertheguidanceofmymotherthatIturnedonthegascooker.

16Wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningfulonlyinthisway.

一Itisonlyinthiswaythatwecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningful.

171hopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience.

一Idohopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience.

181shouldappreciatetheirselflessandunconditionallove.

一ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.

4.言简意明非谓语

恰当地运用非谓语动词，不仅能够使句式多样、句子灵活多变，而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意

明。

⑴现在分词作状语

19Moreover,Englishwillserveasawindowtotheworld.ltwillallowmetogainaglobalview

towardslife,understandpeoplefromdifferentculturesandmakemorefriends.

一Moreover,Englishwillserveasawindowtotheworld,allowingmetogainaglobalview

towardslife,understandpeoplefromdifferentculturesandmakemorefriends.

⑵过去分词作状语

20Wewerebathedinsunshine,andeveryonesangandlaughedwhilepicking,exhaustedbut

fulfilled.

一Bathedinsunshine,everyonesangandlaughedwhilepicking,exhaustedbutfulfilled.

⑶不定式作状语

21Ourschoolintendedtoenrichthestudents5lifeandstimulateourinterestinlearningEnglish,so

itwillholdalectureonEnglishliteratureat2pmnextFridayinthelecturehall.

一Toenrichthestudents'lifbandstimulateourinterestinlearningEnglish,ourschoolwillholda

lectureonEnglishliteratureat2pmnextFridayinthelecturehall.

22Ourschoolaimstoraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,soitisto

organizeacharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.

—Toraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganizea

charitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.（不定式作状语）

—Aimingtoraisetheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganize

acharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentstoparticipate.

（现在分词作状语）

—Aimedatraisingtheawarenessofcaringforthedisadvantagedgroups,ourschoolistoorganize

acharitydonationat5:30pmnextThursdayinthegym,andappealstousstudentsto

participate.（过去分词作状语）

5.意蕴深长复合句

⑴用定语从句升级句子

23Becauseofyourhelpandinstructions,ImademuchprogressinmybothspokenEnglishand

writtenEnglishanditgavememuchconfidence.

一Becauseofyourhelpandinstructions,ImademuchprogressinmybothspokenEnglishand

writtenEnglish,whichgavememuchconfidence.

24Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist.Hetaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.

一Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.

⑵用定语从句增加细节

25Thefiguresshowthatstudentsarewastingsomuchfood.

一Thefiguresshowthatstudentsarewastingsomuchfood,whichwillhaveabadeffectonthe

蛔h（这将对地球产生不良影响）.

26Besides,wehavealotofsports,suchasfootball,basketballandswimming.

一Besides,wehavealotofsports,suchasfootball,basketballandswimming,whichcanarouse

ourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafter-schoollife（能够激发我们的兴趣，开阔我

们的视野，并且丰富我们的课外生活）.

(3)用as引导的非限制性定语从句拓展句子

27Itisknowntousthattreesareverysignificanttotheenvironmentandhumans.

—Asisknowntous,treesareverysignificanttotheenvironmentandhumans.

⑷用同位语从句升级句子

28EveryoneagreesthatprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironmentisthefocusofattention.

—NoonecandenythefactthatprotectingtheMarineecologicalenvironmentisthefocusof

attention.

n.应用文写作热考体裁和话题

1感谢信(生活技能云端展)

假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(WorkCreatesaBetter

Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:

1.表示感谢2外教的帮助;3.活动的反响。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

DearPatrick,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DealPatrick,

IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheactivityWorkCreatesa

BetterLife（不定式短语作状语），whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess（非限制性定语

从句）.

Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestions

onourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsof

cooking,gardening,etc（弓虽调句型）.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassion

fordailylifeskills.Whatismostimportantisthatthisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewide

admirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence（主语从句;表语从句）.

Manythanksfbryourtimeandsupport.

Yours,

LiHua

2邀请信(邀请职业规划师约稿)

假定你是李华，是你校英文报增设的“职业规划”(CareerPlanning)栏目的负责人,请给职

业规划师David写一封邮件向他约稿，内容包括：

1.栏目介绍2稿件内容3稿件长度:约800词;4.交稿日期:6月2日前。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearDavid,

How'severythinggoing?Ifeelhighlyhonoredtoinviteyoutowriteanarticleforour

schooFsEnglishnewspaper.

CareerPlanningisanewlyaddedcolumndesignedtohelpusgetabetterunderstandingof

thejobmarket（过去分词短语作定语）.Thearticleyouwrite（省略关系词的定语从句）is

designedtodealwithwhatqualitiesweshouldpossess（宾语从句）tosatisfytherequirementsof

differentjobs.Inaddition,Ihopeyoucanoffersometipsonhowwecangetwell-preparedforour

futurecareer.About800wordswouldbefine.Anditcan'tbebetterifyoucansubmityourarticle

beforeJune2（it作形式主语）.

Lookingforwardtoyourwordsofwisdom.

Yours,

LiHua

3演讲稿（创建文明城市）

假定你所在的城市正在创建全国文明城市，请写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动起来，为

创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。内容包括：

1.创建文明城市的内容与意义；

2.呼吁同学们从身边小事做起（不少于两点）。

参考词汇:文明城市civilizedcity

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

【参考范文】

Boysandgirls,

Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool（3E限制J性定语从句），wearetobuildacivilizedcity,in

whichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmorecompetitive（非限制性定语从句），andallthe

residentswillbebetteroff.

Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary

（省略句）.Athome,wecanpersuadeourparentstoquitsmokingandgetalongwellwith

neighbors.Inaddition,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice,whichIthinkis

essentialforustobuildacivilizedcity（非限制性定语从句）.

Thankyouforyourlisteningtomyspeech.

4征稿启事（最美家乡）

假定你是校英文报。出仅）的负责人，你报将举行“最美家乡”图文征集活动,请写一

份征稿启事，内容包括：

1.稿件要求2奖励办法。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

【参考范文】

WiththedevelopmentofChina,yourhometownhastakenonanewlook.Toshowthebeauty

ofyourhometown（不定式短语作状语），SchoolDailyisexpectingfantasticworksbyindividuals

fromJun.luntilOct.1,2024.

Workscanbesubmittedintheformsofphotosandtexts.Wewillhave20winnerstobe

awarded.Besidesawards,participantswillgetachancetoseetheirworksfeaturedontheschool

website（"see+宾语+宾补”结构;不定式短语作定语）.Ifyouareinterested,youcansubmityour

worksbye-mail.

Welcometoparticipateintheactivity.

5开幕辞（孝敬父母）

假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举行以“孝敬父母”为主题的系列活动，请为这次活动

写一篇开幕辞。内容包括：

1.活动目的；

2.活动内容；

3.预祝活动圆满成功。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

参考词汇:孝敬showfilialrespectfor；对父母的孝心filialaffectionforparents

【参考范文】

Dearteachersandfellowstudents,

Ifeelprivilegedtogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheactivitywhosethemeis"showingfilial

respectforourparents^^（定语从句）heldinourschool（过去分词短语作定语）.

Asweallknow,filialaffectionforparentsishighlystressedinChinesetraditional

education.Todeepenourunderstandingofit（不定式短语作状语），wearegatheredheretodayto

attendtheactivity.Asscheduled（省略句），theactivityconsistsoffourparts,athemedspeech,

shortdramaperformances,aphotoshow,andapaintingexhibition,thespecifictimeofwhichhas

beenlistedonthenoticeboard（非限制性定语从句）.

Idohopewecouldhaveameaningfulandenjoyableexperience（强调;省略that的宾语从

句）.Thankyouforyourattendance.

6投稿（最受学生喜爱的书）

你校英文报正在举办以“PopularBooksAmongStudents”为主题的征文活动。请你根据图

表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.读书状况描述;

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

PopularBooksAmongStudents

【参考范文】

PopularBooksAmongStudents

Accordingtothesurveyconductedinourschool,43%ofthestudentsprefertoreadscience

books,followedbycomics,whichaccountfor26%（3E限制」性定语从句）.Meanwhile,18%ofthe

studentsenjoyreadingsportsandmusicbookswhileonly13%liketoreadclassics.Inthe

informationage,itisencouragingtosee（it作形式主语）somanystudentsreadingregularly.The

preferenceforbooksaboutscienceindicatesthatteenagers5awarenessofscienceisontherise（宾

语从句）.

Inmyview,Ihopethatourschoolwillorganizebookclubsorreadinggroups,wherestudents

candiscussandsharetheirthoughts（宾语从句;非限制性定语从句）.Itcanarousetheircuriosity

andcriticalthinkingandenhancetheirsocialskills.

7求助信（帮助润色稿件）

假定你是李华，你为校英语网站LanguageLearning77Ps栏目写了一篇文章。请你给外教

MrSmith写封邮件请他帮忙修改润色。内容包括：

1.介绍稿件；

2.请求指导。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

DearMrSmith,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearMrSmith,

I'mLiHua.FmwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavourwithanarticlewhichIwrotefor

LanguageLearningTips（定语从句）,apopularcolumnofourschool?sEnglishwebsite（同位语）.

ThearticletitledBodyLanguageinDifferentCulturesincludestwoparts,thefirstofwhich

coverstheimportanceofbodylanguageindailycommunication俳限制性定语从句）.Theother

partprovidesseveralbodygesturesindifferentcultures.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetolook

throughthearticleattachedtothee-mail（过去分词短语作定语）andpolishit?

I'dappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeahand（it作形式宾语）.Lookingforwardto

yourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

8活动介绍（我帮父母做家务）

五一劳动节快到了，学校开展了“帮父母做家务”的活动。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇短

文，介绍该活动的情况，要点包括：

1.活动目的；

2.活动内容；

3.你的感受。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

【参考范文】

HelpingParentsDoHousework

WiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay,ourschoollaunchedanactivity

of“HelpingParentsDoHousework”,aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitude

（现在分词短语作状语）instudents.

Theactivityinvolvedstudentstakingonvariouschoressuchascleaning,cooking,and

laundry,thusgivingparentssomewell-deservedrest（现在分词短语作状语）.Throughoutthe

week,studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass,promoting

discussionandreflection（现在分词短语作状语）.

Personally,Ifindthisactivitybotheducationalandrewarding（"find+宾语+宾补''结构）.Ithas

taughtmetheimportanceofcontributingtothefamilyandhasdeepenedmyappreciationformy

parents5dailyefforts.

9建议信（如何与寄宿家庭相处）

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将到中国留学并在一个当地家庭里居住。他写信询

问如何与寄宿家庭相处,请你据此回信，内容包括：

1.很高兴他将来中国；

2.你的建议；

3.期待他的留学成功。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?IamhappythatyouaregoingtostudyinChina（宾语从句）.You

askedmeabouthowtogetalongwithyourChinesehostfamily.

Infact,Chinesearefriendlyandeasy-going,soyoudon'thavetoworry.Iamsureyouwillbe

familiarwithyourhostfamilymemberssoon（省略that的宾语从句）.Besides,Chinesearehelpful

andkindly.Wearealwaysreadytoofferhelp.Sodon'thesitatetoaskforhelpwheneveryouarein

trouble（时间状语从句）.AsforChineseholidaytraditions,you'dbettersearchforsome

knowledgeontheInternetbeforeyourarrival.

Hopingyou'llhaveanunforgettableandenjoyablelearningexperiencehereinChina（省略

that的宾语从句）.

Yours,

LiHua

10推荐信（最喜爱的电影）

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Ross在邮件中提到他对中国电影很感兴趣。请推荐一部你

最喜爱的影片，内容包括：

1.你的推荐；

2.你的理由。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

【参考范文】

DearRoss,

KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChinesefilms（现在分词短语作状语;宾语从句），Iam

morethanexcitedbecauseIamfairlyafilmlovermyself.

Irecommendawell-knownChinesefilmtitledMonkeyKingtoyou,whichtellsthefairytale

ofSunWukong（非限制性定语从句），theMonkeyKing.IttellsthestoryofSunWukong,whois

notafraidofpower（非限制性定语从句），fightingagainstthedragonpalaceandtheheaven,and

bravelyfightingwiththeheavensoldiersandtheheavengenerals（现在分词短语作状语）.

Watchingthisfilm（现在分词短语作状语），youwillbedeeplymovedbythecourageand

spiritofthemaincharacterSunWukong.ThafswhyImakethisrecommendation（表语从句）.1

amlookingforwardtoyourviewofthisfilm.

Yours,

LiHua

11建议信（“中文日”庆祝活动）

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Hans来信请你为他负责策划的4月20日“中文日”班级庆

祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.来信收悉2提出活动建议；3.望录制和分享。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearHans,

Yours,

LiHua

【参考范文】

DearHans,

I'mmorethandelightedtohearyouwillholdanactivityon“theChineseLanguage

Day".Herearesometips（倒装）tomakeitamazingandeducational.

Firstly,engagingaudienceinentertainingactivities（动名词短语作主语）isthekey.ltcan

startwithChinesecalligraphyshowdemonstratingthebeautyofChinesecharacters.Secondly,

whynotholdaChinesespeechcontesttohighlighttheunmatchedcharmofthiselegantlanguage?

Afterthat,itcouldbewrappedupwith“Jasmine”,atraditionalChinesesong,whichwillcertainly

impresstheaudience（非限制性定语从句）.

IamconvincedthatthiswillbeafeastofcultureandIsincerelyhopeyoucouldrecordthis

unforgettableshowandshareyourachievementwithme（宾语从句）！

Yours,

LiHua

12道歉信（校园生活）

假定你是李华，上周你班外教MrGreen布置了一份作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故

不能如期提交。请你给MrGreen写一封信，内容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.解释原因；

3.请求延期提交作业。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

DearMrGreen,

I'mwritingtoapologizeforbeingunabletosubmitthehomeworkgivenbyyoulastweek,

whichisduethisFriday（非限制性定语从句）.

Owingtotheinfectionofabadcold,Ihavebeenfeelingunwellthesedays.Achingallover

withapersistenthighfever（现在分词短语作状语），Ihavetobeconfinedtobedalldaylong.Asa

consequence,itwouldbedifficultformetofinishtheassignmentontime.Iwonderifyoucan

allowmetopostponethesubmissiontimeuntilnextFriday（宾语从句）.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration（it作形式宾

in）.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

13报道（体育运动）

假定你是李华，是学校英语报记者，你们学校近期举行了一次校体育运动会。请写一篇短

文，报道此次校运会。内容包括：

1.活动简介；

2.你的感受。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Lastweek,asportsmeetingwasheldbyourschoolinthestadium,whichwassoexcitingthat

itimpressedmedeeply（非限制性定语从句;结果状语从句）.Allthestudentsgotactively

involvedinitandthewholeschoolwasaliveandfulloffreshness.Theplaygroundwascrowded

withaudiences.Everyathletemadegreateffortstowin,andthestudentswhostoodbytherunway

（定语从句）letoutthemostencouragingslogan.ExhaustedAVomoutaswewere（倒装），we

enjoyedourselvescheeringandjumping.

Thisactivitywasofgreatsignificance.Notonlycouldithelpussensethefunofexercise,but

alsoitcultivatedtheawarenessofteamwork（倒装），anddeepenedourfriendship.

14博客（家务我在行）

假设你是李华，最近参与了学校举办的“家务我在行”活动。请写一篇博客文章，分享如下

内容：

1.活动目的;

2.活动内容；

3.活动感受。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

AGoodHandatHousework

【参考范文】

AGoodHandatHousework

Toraisetheawarenessofstudents9tidinessandfamilyresponsibility（不定式短语作状语）,

anactivitynamed"AGoodHandatHousework''（过去分词短语作定语）washeld.Inresponseto

theactivitysponsoredbyourschool（过去分词短语作定语），Icarriedoutmyhouseworkplan

lastweekend,rangingfromtidyinguproomstocookingmeals（现在分词短语作定语）.

Earlyinthemorning,Iremovedunwanteditemsandcleanedthehouseuntilitwasspotless

（时间状语从句）.Atalmosteleven,Ipreparedalunch,friedrice,forwhichmyparentspraisedme

（非限制性定语从句）.TiredasIwas（倒装），Ifeltsoproud.

Throughtheinvolvementinthehouseholdchores,notonlyhaveIestablishedasenseof

familyresponsibility（隹（I装），butalsoIhavefullyunderstoodthatdoinghouseworkisofgreat

meaning.

15图画类作文（孩子做家务是否应该得到报酬）

某英语网站正在开展以“ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?”为题的讨论。请你根

据下图跟帖，内容包括:

1.图片描述2简单评论。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?

【参考范文】

ShouldChildrenBePaidtoDoHousework?

Thereisnodoubtthatthispicturehasremindedmeofaphenomenonthatcannotbeignored

anylonger（therebe句型;定语从句）:Alotofchildrenneedtobepaidtodohousework.

Frommypointofview,childrenshouldnotbemisledtobelievethateverythingalwayshasa

return（宾语从句）.Instead,measuresshouldbetakentoencouragethemtochangetheirmindthat

houseworkitselfcanbethereward.Doinghouseworkisnotonlyawaytoshowtheirlovetotheir

families,butalsohelpsthemtobecomeresponsiblepersonsinthefuture（固定句型）.

in.读后续写精彩语段

人与自我篇

1个人成长类

作者从沉迷于虚拟世界逐步转向专注现实生活的过程,并在参与很多现实生活的活动中,

收获了很多。

ThenIlookedatthewordsonthepieceofpapertapedtomylaptop,lostinthought.I

realizedafunnyfact.Iplantedandharvestedvirtualcropsforhourseverydaywhileleavingthe

reallandoutsidethewindowuntouched（省略句）.Thiswasneitherameaningfullifenoran

activitythatmirroredmyhighestintentions.HowcouldIbasemyhappinessonunrealgoals?

Inspired（过去分词作状语），Idecidedtostopplayingfarmgamesandfocusonreallife.Tobegin

with,Ifarmedthelandinourbackyardactively.

Farmingthereallandwasonlythebeginning,andIstartedtodomoretoenrichmyleallife.I

walkedmydoginthepark,spentmoretimewithmyfamily,climbedmountainswithmyfriends

andattendedvariousclasses（动作链）.Thesewereactivitiesthatallowedmetomakebetteruseof

mysparetimeanddeveloppositiveattitude.ThesentenceIhadcopiedfromthatpost（省略关系

词的定语从句）becameamirrorIusedtoexaminehowIshouldspendmytimeandenergy（省略

关系词的定语从句;宾语从句），enablingmetoliveahealthierandricherlife（现在分词短语作

状语）.

2励志理想类

作者从小梦想在电视上表演，在父亲的帮助和鼓励下，作者被多伦多瑞尔森学院的广播

电视艺术专业录取。最终作者凭借努力和勇敢,赢得了上电视的机会，感悟到是爸爸的爱支持

着自己成为一名出色的演员。

WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformancn.

Ifinishedmyperformancerelativelysmoothlythoughpalmsweresweating（状语从句）.Neverin

mywildestdreamdidIimagine（倒装）thatIwasindeed