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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenmyhusbandaskedmewhatIwantedforthecomingfestival,Ireplied,“TheFamousFiveseries.”Hisfirstresponsewas,“What’sthat?”Ihadtoexplain.Heknewtherewaslossandsadnessassociatedwithmovingsomanytimes,andthatI’dlostsomematerialthingsalongtheway.WhatIhadn’texplainedquiteyetwasmydesiretoconnectwithmypastthroughthebooksI’denjoyedasachild.DuringourelementaryschoolyearsinAustria,IwouldfrequenttheBritishbookshopinVienna.Duringthosevisits,Iacquiredalltwenty-onebooksintheFamousFiveseriesbytheBritishauthorEnidBlyton.Ienjoyedreadingabouttheadventuresofthe“Five”,whichincludedsiblings(兄妹)Julian,Dick,andAnneaswellastheircousinGeorginaandherdogTimmy.Thestoriesfeaturefunnyplotscenteringoncatchingbadpeople—quiteextraordinary,consideringtheheroesweremereteenagers!ThebooksweremypassportstoadventuresI’dneverexperiencedinmyownlife.Unfortunately,myfamilyhadtomovetotheUnitedStatesquiteabruptlyduetoahealthemergency.MyparentshadtomakedifficultdecisionsaboutwhattobringtoAmerica.Sincebookswereheavy,myparentswereunabletobringmostofmybookswiththem,includingtheFamousFiveseries.Iwasheartbroken!Fastforwardtosevenyearsintomymarriage,someseventeenyearsafterI’dleftmytreasuredFamousFiveseriesbehind,IdecidedIwantedtoacquiremybooksforaholiday.I’dbeensearchingtheInternetfortheseriesbutgotdisappointed,becausenoAmericanbookpublishersorwebsiteshadthebooks.Wecouldhaveboughtthemonaforeignwebsite,butwewerenervousaboutusingourcreditcardthatway.Thefestivaleventuallyarrivedandmyhusband,daughter,andIsataroundthetable.Wetraditionallyopenedonepresentandeachofuspickedagift.Mydaughteropenedhersfirst,andthenmyhusband.Ieyedmychosenpresent,acolorfullywrappedbox,andguessedwhatitmightbe.“Anelephant?”mydaughtersmiled.“Oh,let’sendthesuspense!”Isaidandbegantearingthewrapping.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,“India.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________《著名五人组》系列书籍故事续写续写要点(两段)​第一段续写要点:​打开盒子:细致描绘打开棕色盒子时的动作细节,双手的颤抖体现内心的紧张与期待,缓缓揭开胶带时的小心翼翼,突出这一刻的重要性。描述看到盒子里书籍时的第一反应,眼神的聚焦,面部表情的变化,如眼睛瞬间睁大、嘴巴微张,表现出惊讶与不敢置信。​确认书籍:详细描述对书籍的观察,封面虽有磨损但熟悉的图案、字体,纸张的质感,勾起对童年阅读时光的回忆。此时的内心活动,从最初的震惊逐渐转变为感动,眼眶湿润,声音颤抖地向丈夫询问书籍的由来。​第二段续写要点:​丈夫解释:深入刻画丈夫讲述寻找书籍过程的场景,他的表情认真而深情,眼神中透露出对妻子的关爱。具体说明丈夫为找到书籍所付出的努力,花费数周时间,通过各种渠道寻找,联系印度的朋友时的焦急与期待,朋友帮忙在旧书店找到书籍时的喜悦。​情感升华:描述“我”听完丈夫讲述后的反应,紧紧拥抱丈夫,身体微微颤抖,表达内心的感激与感动。进一步阐述这份礼物的意义,不仅仅是找回了童年的书籍,更是丈夫对自己深深的理解与爱意的体现,这种情感跨越时空,连接了过去与现在,让“我”感受到家庭的温暖与支持。​情感线​第一段情感线:打开盒子前,内心充满好奇与期待,心跳加速,对礼物充满遐想。看到书籍的瞬间,惊讶与不敢置信占据主导,大脑一片空白,不敢相信自己的眼睛。确认是《著名五人组》系列书籍后,感动的情绪涌上心头,眼眶湿润,声音颤抖,对丈夫充满感激与疑问。​第二段情感线:听到丈夫说出“印度”时,内心充满疑惑,急切地想听丈夫解释。在丈夫讲述寻找书籍的艰难过程中,感动之情愈发强烈,被丈夫的用心和努力所打动。听完丈夫的讲述后,感激之情达到顶点,通过紧紧拥抱丈夫来表达内心的情感,此时不仅对书籍的失而复得感到开心,更对丈夫的爱有了更深的体会,感受到家庭的温暖与幸福。​故事线​丈夫询问“我”节日想要什么礼物,“我”表示想要《著名五人组》系列书籍,向丈夫解释自己童年对这套书的喜爱以及因搬家失去它们的遗憾,渴望通过这些书连接过去。​回忆小学时在奥地利,经常去维也纳的英国书店,收集齐了《著名五人组》系列的二十一本书,书中青少年抓坏人的有趣情节让“我”着迷,成为“我”生活中冒险的寄托。​由于健康紧急情况,一家人突然搬去美国,父母因书太重没能把大部分书带走,包括《著名五人组》系列,“我”十分伤心。​结婚七年后,“我”决定在节日找回这套书,在网上搜索却失望而归,因担心信用卡安全也无法从外国网站购买。​节日到来,一家人围坐在桌前拆礼物,“我”选中一个彩色包装的盒子,打开后发现是梦寐以求的《著名五人组》系列书籍,惊讶又感动,询问丈夫如何得到。​丈夫解释通过印度的朋友,在当地旧书店找到这套书并寄来,“我”被丈夫的用心深深打动,感受到这份礼物背后的爱与理解。​主旨升华句​Thisheart-warmingtaleofthelostandfoundFamousFiveseriesvividlydemonstratesthattrueloveliesnotingrandgesturesbutintheunderstandingofone'sdeepestdesires,transcendingtimeanddistancetobringbackcherishedmemories.(这个关于失而复得的《著名五人组》系列的温馨故事生动地表明,真爱不在于华丽的姿态,而在于对他人内心深处渴望的理解,它跨越时间和距离,带回珍贵的回忆。)​Throughthejourneyofsearchingforthebooks,thehusband'sunwaveringdeterminationshowcasesthepoweroflovetoovercomeobstacles,provingthatwhenwetrulycareforsomeone,wewillgotogreatlengthstofulfilltheirdreams.(通过寻找书籍的历程,丈夫坚定不移的决心展示了爱的力量能够克服障碍,证明了当我们真正关心某人时,我们会竭尽全力去实现他们的梦想。)​ThegiftoftheFamousFiveseriesisnotmerelyacollectionofbooksbutasymboloftheunbreakablebondbetweenhusbandandwife,atestamenttothefactthatlovecanbridgethegapbetweenpastandpresent,bringingwarmthandcomforttoone'slife.(《著名五人组》系列书籍这份礼物不仅仅是一套书,更是夫妻之间牢不可破的纽带的象征,证明了爱可以跨越过去与现在的鸿沟,给生活带来温暖和慰藉。)​Thisnarrativeaboutthebookshighlightsthesignificanceofchildhoodmemoriesandhowtheycanshapeourlives.TherediscoveryoftheFamousFiveseries,withthehelpofherhusband,showsthatsometimes,themostpreciousthingsinlifearetheonesthatconnectustoourroots.(这个关于书籍的故事突出了童年记忆的重要性以及它们如何塑造我们的生活。在丈夫的帮助下重新找回《著名五人组》系列书籍表明,有时候,生活中最珍贵的东西是那些将我们与根源联系起来的东西。)​ThestoryoftheFamousFiveseriescomingbackintotheprotagonist'slifeisabeautifulreminderthatinthejourneyoflife,loveandunderstandingfromourlovedonescanturnasimplewishintoaprofoundandlastingmemory,makingeverymomentmoremeaningful.(《著名五人组》系列书籍重新回到主人公生活中的故事美好地提醒我们,在人生的旅途中,来自亲人的爱与理解可以将一个简单的愿望变成深刻而持久的记忆,让每一刻都更有意义。)​写作示范一​第一段续写​Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.MyhandswereshakinguncontrollablyasIgingerlystartedtopeeloffthetape.Everymovementfeltlikeitwasinslowmotion.AsIopenedthebox,afaint,mustysmellofoldbookswaftedout.There,neatlystacked,werethebooksoftheFamousFiveseries.Thecovers,withtheirfadedcolorsandslightlytornedges,werelikeoldfriendsIhadn'tseeninyears.Ipickedoneup,runningmyfingersoverthetitle.MyeyesfilledwithtearsasIrecognizedthefamiliarillustrationsinside.Ilookedupatmyhusband,myvoicechokedwithemotion."I...Ican'tbelieveit.Howdidyoufindthese?"Iasked,myheartpoundinginmychest.​第二段续写​Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,"India."Hiseyesweresoftandfulloflove.HetoldmethathehadspentcountlesshoursscouringtheInternet,reachingouttobookcollectorsandenthusiastsallovertheworld.WhenherealizeditwasadifficulttaskinAmerica,herememberedanoldfriendinIndia.Hecontactedhisfriend,explaininghowimportantthesebooksweretome.Hisfriendsearchedthroughnarrow,dustylanesinold-fashionedbookstores.Finally,inacornerofasmallshop,hefoundthecompleteseries.Myhusbandhadthemcarefullyshippedtous."Iwantedtogiveyouapieceofyourchildhoodback,"hesaid.Ithrewmyarmsaroundhim,holdinghimtightly.Thisgiftwasmorethanjustbooks;itwasasymbolofhislove,abridgeconnectingmypastandmypresent,andIfeltadeepsenseofgratitudeandhappiness.​写作示范二​第一段续写​Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.Withbatedbreath,Ibegantoremovethetape,myfingersfumblingslightlyinmyexcitement.Astheboxlidopened,Isawthespinesofthebooks,andmyheartskippedabeat.There,inalltheirworn-outglory,weretheFamousFiveseries.Igentlypickeduponeofthebooks,feelingtheroughtextureofthecover.Thepageswereyellowed,butthestorieswithinwereasvividinmymemoryasever.Ilookedupatmyhusband,myeyeswidewithshockandjoy."Ohmygoodness!Howonearthdidyoumanagethis?"Iexclaimed,myvoicetremblingwithemotion.Thesightofthesebooksbroughtbackafloodofchildhoodmemories,andIwasovercomewithasenseofnostalgia.​第二段续写​Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,"India."Hethenrecountedhisarduoussearch.Hehadspentweeksonthephoneandonline,contactingbookstoresindifferentcountries.WhenheheardthatsomerareBritishbookscouldbefoundinIndia,hedidn'thesitate.Hereachedouttoanacquaintancethere.Hisacquaintancevisitednumerousbookstores,spendinghourslookingthroughshelves.Finally,inasmall,hiddenbookstore,hefoundtheseries.Myhusbandarrangedforthemtobeshippedimmediately."Iknewthesebooksmeanttheworldtoyou,"hesaid.Ihuggedhimtightly,tearsstreamingdownmyface.Thisgiftwasnotjustaboutthebooks;itwasatestamenttohisloveandthoughtfulness.ItmademerealizehowluckyIwastohaveahusbandwhounderstoodmesowellandwaswillingtogotosuchlengthstomakemehappy.参考答案Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.Icarefullycutthetapeandopened

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