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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,OurswimteamalwaysreliedontheSnackBartoraisemoneyformeetsandequipment,butCoachAbbyhadbadnews:itwouldbeclosedforrepairsthroughAugust,meaningnomoneyforupcomingevents.Everyonewasworried."Doesthismeanourswimteamiscanceled?"Noahasked.CoachAbbycomfortedus,sayingwe'dstillpractice,butshewasn'tsurehowthemeetswouldbefunded.Thenextmorning,practicefeltstrange.Noneofuswereswimmingourbest,andevenCoachAbbywasworried.Duringabreak,Noahsuggested,"Ifwecan'truntheSnackBar,maybewecanthinkofotherwaystoraisemoney."“Goodidea.”saidRuby.Shesuggestedakaraokesing-along(卡拉OK)likewhatherbrotherdidtoraisefundsforhisschoolsingingclub.Tamararecommendedabakesale.“Afallfestivalwouldbefun!"Iadded,thinkingwecouldhavewater-themedgamesongroundsbytheswimmingpool.Atfirst,CoachAbbyhesitated.Butwhenshesawhowexcitedwewere,sheagreed,“OK!Let'sgoforit!"WequicklybeganbrainstormingideasforourSupportforPoolParty."I'llbringmykaraokemachine."Rubyoffered."Wecouldmakethemicrophonelooklikeafish!”someoneadded.Isuggesteda"FunintheSun"lemonadestand,andeveryonejumpedintohelp.Soon,wehadaplanforthebestfundraiserever,completewithastarfishcookiebakesale.Wewerereadytomakeithappen!Wespentsomuchtimegettingeverythingreadyandtalkingupourfundraisertoeveryonewemetthatwewerepositiveitwouldbeagreatsuccess.Thedaybeforeourbigevent,IwassqueezinglemonsforlemonadewhenIsawaverydarkcloudoutsidethekitchenwindow."Uh-oh!That'snotaraincloud,isit?"Iaskedmymom."Rainwouldbeadisaster!Itcouldruineverything."“Youknowwhattheysay,”sheanswered.“Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.”"Hmm,"Isaid.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,Iarrivedatthepoolgroundsearly.Facingthesuddenrain,wewererelievedthatwehadpreparedthebigumbrellas.游泳队筹款活动故事续写续写要点(两段)第一段续写要点:细致描绘活动当天清晨的糟糕天气,强调雨势的猛烈,如“雨如倾盆,地面瞬间形成大片积水”,通过对场景的刻画营造紧张氛围。描述队员们陆续到达后的反应,展现他们从满怀期待到极度失望的情绪转变,如“队员们的脸上写满了沮丧,原本兴奋的眼神瞬间黯淡”。突出关键人物的话语和态度,如诺亚的担忧、鲁比的乐观,为后续应对困境做铺垫。第二段续写要点:具体描述大家迅速利用大伞应对雨天的行动,如“队员们齐心协力,迅速将大伞撑开并固定在各个摊位上方”,展现团队的协作精神。详细讲述活动在雨中顺利开展的过程,包括吸引人们前来的因素,如“五彩的雨伞在雨中格外醒目,卡拉OK欢快的歌声穿透雨幕”,以及各项售卖活动的情况,如“孩子们冒着雨排队购买海星饼干,柠檬水摊位前也人头攒动”。强调最终成功筹集到足够资金的结果,以及大家从中获得的感悟,如“我们深刻体会到,只要有充分准备和积极心态,困难只是暂时的”。情感线活动前,队员们满怀期待,积极筹备,充满信心,对成功举办活动、筹集资金充满希望。活动当天看到大雨倾盆,大家瞬间从兴奋跌入失望,内心充满担忧和焦虑,担心之前的努力付诸东流。然而,在鲁比的提醒下,大家重拾信心,积极应对。活动过程中,看到人们在雨中参与,队员们的情绪逐渐高涨,充满干劲。最终成功筹得资金,大家的内心被成就感和喜悦填满,对团队协作和积极心态的力量有了更深刻的认识,团队凝聚力进一步增强。故事线游泳队依赖的小吃吧因维修关闭,面临资金短缺,队员们担忧游泳队活动取消。队员们集思广益,提出举办卡拉OK、烘焙义卖、秋季节日等活动来筹款,教练同意,大家积极筹备“泳池派对支持活动”。活动前一天,发现乌云密布,担心下雨影响活动,队员们提前做好心理准备。活动当天,大雨倾盆,队员们到达后十分失望,诺亚表达担忧,鲁比提醒大家早有准备。队员们迅速撑起大伞,搭建起遮雨区域,活动在雨中照常进行,人们被吸引前来,各项售卖活动顺利开展。活动结束,成功筹集到足够资金,队员们深刻体会到准备和积极心态的重要性,团队更加团结。主旨升华句Theswimteam'sexperiencevividlydemonstratesthatwhenfacedwithunexpectedsetbacks,apositivemindsetandpriorpreparationcanturnpotentialdisastersintoopportunitiesforsuccess.(游泳队的经历生动地表明,当面临意外挫折时,积极的心态和事先的准备能够将潜在的灾难转变为成功的机遇。)Thisstoryoftheswimteamteachesusthatinthefaceofadversity,thepowerofunityandacan-doattitudecanovercomeeventhemostchallengingcircumstances.(游泳队的这个故事告诉我们,在逆境面前,团结的力量和积极进取的态度能够克服最具挑战性的环境。)Throughtheswimteam'sjourney,welearnthatnomatterhowgreattheobstacle,aslongaswearewillingtoadaptandpersevere,wecanachieveourgoalsandturnourdreamsintoreality.(通过游泳队的历程,我们了解到无论障碍多大,只要我们愿意适应并坚持不懈,我们就能实现目标,将梦想变为现实。)Thesuccessfulfundraiserdespitetherainservesasapowerfulreminderthatwithcarefulplanningandunwaveringdetermination,wecannavigatethroughdifficultiesandemergevictorious.(尽管下雨但筹款活动的成功有力地提醒我们,通过精心规划和坚定决心,我们能够战胜困难,取得胜利。)Theswimteam'sstoryisatestamenttothefactthatinanyendeavor,thecombinationofpreparation,positivethinking,andteamworkisthekeytoovercomingobstaclesandachievingremarkableresults.(游泳队的故事证明了一个事实,在任何努力中,准备、积极思考和团队合作的结合是克服障碍并取得显著成果的关键。)写作示范一第一段续写Thenextday,Iarrivedatthepoolgroundsearly.Therainwaspoundingdownrelentlessly,turningtheonce-invitingpoolareaintoafloodedmess.Irushedaround,lookingforCoachAbby.WhenIfoundher,shewasstaringattherain-soakedground,herfacefilledwithworry.Onebyone,theteammembersarrived.Noah'sshouldersslumpedashetookinthescene.“Thisisadisaster.Allourplans...”hemuttered.ButRuby,evertheoptimist,quicklysaid,“Hey,weknewthismighthappen.We'vegotthosebigumbrellas.Wecanstillmakethiswork!”Herwordsseemedtoinjectabitofhopeintothegloomyatmosphere.第二段续写Facingthesuddenrain,wewererelievedthatwehadpreparedthebigumbrellas.Weworkedtogetherlikeawell-oiledmachine,settinguptheumbrellasoverthelemonadestand,karaokearea,andbake-saletables.Thecolorfulumbrellascreatedacozyandinvitingspace.Despitetherain,peoplestartedtricklingin.Thekidsweredrawntothewater-themedgames,theirlaughterechoingthroughtherain.Ourstarfishcookieswereahugehit,andthelemonade,servedwithasmile,disappearedquickly.Bytheendoftheday,wehadnotonlyreachedourfundraisinggoalbutalsolearnedavaluablelessonaboutresilienceandteamwork.写作示范二第一段续写Thenextday,Iarrivedatthepoolgroundsearly.Therainwasdrummingonthegroundsohardthatitwasalmostdeafening.Thepool,whichwassupposedtobethecenterofourfun-filledevent,nowlookedlikeastormysea.CoachAbbywaspacingbackandforth,clearlystressed.Astheteammembersarrived,theirexcitementturnedtodespair.Noahlookedlikehewasabouttocry.“We'veworkedsohard.Isitallfornothing?”hesaid.ButRubysteppedforward,hervoicefullofdetermination.“Guys,wepreparedforthis.Theumbrellasareoursaviorstoday.Let'snotgiveup!”第二段续写Facingthesuddenrain,wewererelievedthatwehadpreparedthebigumbrellas.Weimmediatelygottowork,securingtheumbrellasfirmly.Theraincouldn'tdampenthespiritoftheevent.Thekaraokemusicblared,andpeoplestartedgatheringundertheumbrellas.Thesmelloffreshlybakedstarfishcookiesfilledtheair.Thekidswerehavingablastplayingthewater-themedgamesintherain.Ourlemonadestandwasconstantlybusy.Bytheendoftheday,wehadraisedmoremoneythanwehadexpected.Werealizedthatwithapositiveattitudeandgoodpreparation,wecouldovercomeanychallengethatcameourway.参考答案Thenextday,Iarrivedatthepoolgroundsearly.Peoplewerealreadystartingtoarrive,theirfacesfiledwithanticipation.Theatmospherewaselectricwithexcitement:Thelemonadestandwasbusting,withpeoplelininguptotasteour“FunintheSun”special.Tamara'sstarf
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