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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Oneafternoon,EmmaandIwerewalkinghomefromschool,chattingaboutourday.Emma,withhercuriouseyesshining,askedmeaboutmyfriendshipwithLucy.Withoutthinking,Isaid,“IonlyhungoutwithLucybecauseshewantedmeto,butIdidn’treallywanttobefriendswithher.Shewaskindofboring.”Unluckily,Ididn’tknowLucywasnearby.WhenIlookedup,shewasrightthere,havingheardeverything.Herfaceturnedpale,andhereyesgotbigwithsurprise.Shedidn’tsayanythingandranoff.EmmaandIjuststoodthere,feelingbad.IknewIshouldgoafterLucyandsaysorry,butIwastooshockedtomove.Emma’sfaceturnedredtoo.Wewalkedhomewithouttalking,anditfeltlikeourstepsweregettingheavierThenextdayswerehard.IfeltreallybadaboutwhatIsaidandwantedtofixthingswithLucy.Ineededtosaysorry.ButwhatshouldIsay?EventhoughIdidn’tmeanto,IhurtLucy’sfeelings.EverytimeIsawheratschool,Ilookedawayquickly.Then,somethinginterestinghappenedinourspeakingclass.OnTuesday,Ms.Juliasaidwewoulddopre-classspeeches.Shehadwrittenourtopicsonsmallpiecesofpaperandputtheminabox.Wehadtopickonewithoutknowingwhatitwas.Iwasabitnervous.WhenIreachedintothebox,Ipulledoutapaperthatsaid,“Tellyourmostembarrassingmoment.”Myheartwasbeatingfast.ItfeltlikeIwasgivenachancetomakethingsrightIspentthenextfewdayspracticingmyspeech,tryingtofindtherightwordstoapologizetoLucy.IwantedtobesincereandshowherIwassorry.Whenthedayofthespeechcame,Iwasstillnervous,butIknewitwasimportanttofacemymistake.Istoodinfrontoftheclass,tookadeepbreath,andbegantosharemystory,hopingitwouldhelpmeandLucymoveforward.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Icalmedmyselfdownandwalkedtothestage.________________________________________________________________________________Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________关于友谊道歉故事的续写续写要点第一段:着重描述“我”在演讲台上的紧张与决心,详细阐述道歉的具体话语,以及演讲过程中对Lucy和同学们反应的观察。第二段:聚焦演讲结束后,Lucy的回应以及两人互动。展现关系缓和,可提及后续相处细节,点明从此次经历中获得的成长感悟。情感线(150字)故事开篇,“我”因失言伤害Lucy,内心充满愧疚与不安,不敢面对她。演讲时,“我”带着紧张与真诚的歉意,鼓起勇气袒露心声。Lucy从最初的震惊、伤心,到听到道歉时的意外与动容。演讲结束,两人关系缓和,“我”如释重负,此后两人友谊更加深厚,“我”也收获了成长与对友谊的珍视。故事线(6条)“我”发现演讲题目是“最尴尬时刻”,意识到可借此向Lucy道歉。“我”精心准备演讲,反复斟酌道歉用词。演讲时,“我”紧张开场,真诚讲述伤害Lucy的经过并诚恳道歉。Lucy专注倾听,眼神复杂,有惊讶也有触动。演讲结束,Lucy主动找“我”回应道歉。此后“我”和Lucy关系改善,友谊升温,“我”汲取教训成长。主旨升华句(英文)Truefriendshipnotonlywithstandsmistakesbutalsodeepensthroughsincereapologiesandmutualunderstanding.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatadmittingone'sfaultsisthefirststeptowardsmendingbrokenrelationshipsandgrowingasaperson.Inthejourneyoffriendship,thecouragetofaceourwrongdoingscanturnacrisisintoanopportunityforstrongerbonds.Itisinmomentsofrectifyingourhurtfulactionsthatwetrulylearnthevalueofcherishingthoseweholddear.Throughthisincident,Irealizedthateveryfriendshipisapreciousgift,anditrequirescarefulnurturingandthehumilitytomakeamends.写作示范一KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Itookatremblingsteptowardsthestage.Myhandswereclammy,andmyvoicequiveredatfirst."MymostembarrassingandregretfulmomentwaswhenIbetrayedmyfriendLucy'strust.Inamomentofthoughtlessness,Isaidcruelwordsabouther.Iwaswrong,andI'vebeenhauntedbymyactionseversince.Lucy,youareanamazingfriend,fullofwarmthandkindness.Iamtrulysorryforcausingyoupain."AsIspoke,IstoleglancesatLucy.Hereyesglistened,andshebitherlip.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.Aftermyspeech,Lucywalkeduptomewithasoftsmile."Yourapologymeansalot,"shesaid."Iknowyoudidn'tmeanthosewords."Fromthatdayon,webecameinseparable.Welaughedtogether,criedtogether,andbuiltafriendshipthatwasstrongerthanever.Thisexperiencetaughtmethattruefriendsforgive,andeveryrelationshipisworthfightingfor.写作示范二KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Isteadiedmynervesandwalkedontothestage.Itookadeepbreathandbegan,"MymostembarrassingmomentwaswhenIletmyemotionsgetthebetterofmeandsaidsomethingextremelyhurtfultoLucy.Icalledherboring,whichcouldn'tbefurtherfromthetruth.Sheiscreative,caring,andalwaysthereforme.Iwasashamedofmyself.Lucy,Iamsosorryformythoughtlesswords."Duringmyspeech,InoticedLucy'sexpressionchangefromshocktoahintofrelief.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.OnceIfinished,Lucyapproachedme."Iacceptyourapology,"shesaid,hervoicegentle.Ourfriendshipwasrekindled,andwemadeapromisetoalwayscommunicateopenly.Thisincidentnotonlymendedourrelationshipbutalsotaughtmethepowerofapologyandtheimportanceofbeingmindfulofothers'feelingsineveryfriendship.参考答案KnowingwhatIhadtosay,Icalmedmyselfdownandwalkedtothestage.Istartedspeaking,eventhoughmyvoicewasalittleshaky.ItalkedabouthowI’dactedwithoutthinkingandhowsorryIwasforhurtingsomeone.WhenIfinishedmyspeech,Iwassweating,andIwasn’tsurewhattheotherswoulddo.Buttheyclappedformyhonesty.Mrs.JuliaevensaidIwasbraveforsayingsorryinfrontofeveryone.IwentbacktomyseatandsawLucylookingatmewithtearsinhereyes.Thatdaymarkedaturningpoint.LucyandIdidn’ttalkaboutwhathadhappened,butwestartedtotalkandlaughtogetheragain,a
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