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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thesoundofthestartinggunechoed(回荡)throughtheair,andMia’sheartwasracing.Shewasonthestartinglineofthestatetrackchampionship,holdingherbreath.Theotherrunnersaroundherwerefocused,theireyesonthetrackahead.ThiswasthemomentMiahadworkedforherentirelife—adefiningmoment,onethatcouldchangeeverything.However,thejourneyleadinguptothismomentwasfarfromeasy.Miahadstartedrunningwhenshewaseightyearsold.Fromtheverybeginning,shedreamedofwinningastatechampionship.Foryears,shetrainedharderthananyone,pushingherbodytothelimit,alwaysaimingforabiggerimprovement.Buttwomonthsago,shefacedtheworstsetbackofherlife——shepulledherhamstring(腘绳肌)duringtrainingforthebiggame.Theinjuryforcedhertostoprunningpletelyforweeks.Thepainanddisappointmentwereunbearable.Everytimeshetriedtogetbackonthetrack,herbodyfeltweak.Shecouldn’tshakethefeelingofuncertainty.WhatifIcouldneverrunagain?WhatifImissedmyoneshotatthechampionship?Hercoachbelievedinherabilities,though.“Thejourneytosuccessisn’tjustabouttalent,”hetoldheroneeveningastheyreviewedherrecoveryplan.“It’saboutbelievinginyourselfevenwhentimesgethard.Focusongettingbetterstepbystep.”Miakeptthosewordsinmindasshestartedherslow,painfulrecovery.Shefocusedonherphysicaltherapy(理疗),rebuildingstrengthwitheachpassingday.Slowly,shestartedtotrustherbodyagain.Everyworkoutwasachallenge.Hermusclesburned,andherlegsshook,butMianevergaveup.Now,standingatthestartingline,herjourneyfeltbothunrealandachievable.Shehadtrainedthroughpain,throughselfdoubt,andthroughtears.Today,shewouldprovethatalltheeffortsshehadmadewereworthwhile.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Mia从八岁起就怀揣赢得州田径锦标赛冠军的梦想,多年来刻苦训练。然而,在大赛前两个月的训练中,她拉伤了腘绳肌,这使她被迫停训数周,期间痛苦又失望,还不断自我怀疑。但教练的鼓励让她坚定信念,专注于物理治疗,慢慢恢复。如今,她站在了州田径锦标赛的起跑线上,过往的艰辛与此刻的期待交织,她渴望证明自己的努力是值得的。故事山分析开端:Mia八岁开始跑步,梦想赢得州冠军,多年来刻苦训练。发展:大赛前两个月训练时拉伤腘绳肌,被迫停训,陷入痛苦与自我怀疑。高潮:站在州田径锦标赛起跑线上,回忆过往,准备迎接挑战。结局(待续写):Mia在比赛中奋力奔跑,克服困难,完成比赛。尾声(待续写):Mia冲过终点线,收获成功的喜悦,领悟坚持的意义。伏笔以及在续写中的回应Mia多年的刻苦训练和对冠军的渴望,暗示她在比赛中会全力以赴,续写中可体现她在比赛中顽强拼搏的精神。教练的鼓励话语“相信自己,一步步变好”,在续写中可回应为Mia在比赛中遇到困难时,回忆起教练的话,重新振作。受伤后的痛苦和自我怀疑,可在续写中体现为比赛中伤痛的阴影短暂出现,但Mia克服了心理障碍。缓慢又痛苦的恢复过程,暗示比赛中她的身体可能仍有不适,续写时可描述她在比赛中如何克服身体的疲惫和伤痛。站在起跑线的期待和决心,在续写中可回应为她在比赛中始终保持坚定的信念,向着终点冲刺。续写要点(两段)第一段:着重描写比赛开始后Mia的状态,如起跑时的爆发力、比赛过程中遇到的困难(如伤痛复发、体力不支、对手强劲等),以及她如何凭借坚定的信念和顽强的毅力去克服。第二段:描述Mia冲过终点线后的场景,包括她的表情、动作,周围观众的反应,以及她内心的感受,突出成功后的喜悦和对自己坚持的感慨。情感线从受伤后的痛苦、失望和自我怀疑,到恢复过程中的坚持与努力,再到站在起跑线的紧张与期待,比赛中的拼搏与坚定,最后冲过终点线的喜悦与自豪,展现Mia在整个过程中的情感变化。故事线比赛枪响,Mia起跑。比赛中Mia遇到困难,如伤痛复发。Mia回忆教练的话,坚定信念。Mia克服困难,继续加速冲刺。Mia冲过终点线。Mia享受成功的喜悦,领悟坚持的意义。主旨升华句Successisnotjustaboutcrossingthefinishline;it'sabouttheunwaveringdeterminationandperseveranceduringthejourney.Thegreatestvictoriesarenotonlymeasuredbytheresultsbutalsobytheobstaclesweoverealongtheway.Inthefaceofadversity,it'sourbeliefinourselvesandourdreamsthatcanleadustoachievetheseeminglyimpossible.Thepathtosuccessisoftenpavedwithpainanddoubt,butit'sourabilitytoriseabovethemthatdefinesourtruestrength.Truechampionsarenotthosewhoneverfall,butthosewhoalwaysgetupandkeeprunningtowardstheirgoals.写作示范示范一ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Withaburstofenergy,sheshotforwardlikeanarrow.However,halfwaythroughtherace,asharppainshotthroughherhamstring.Foramoment,fearanddoubtcloudedhermind.Butthen,sherememberedhercoach'swords.Summoningallherstrength,shegrittedherteethandpushedon.Herlegsburned,andherbreathwasragged,butsherefusedtoslowdown.Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.Shecollapsedtotheground,exhaustedbutelated.Tearsofjoystreameddownherfaceassherealizedthatallherhardworkhadpaidoff.Lookingaroundatthecheeringcrowd,shefeltadeepsenseofprideandacplishment.Thisvictorywasnotjustaboutwinningarace;itwasaboutprovingtoherselfthatshecouldovereanyobstacle.示范二ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Shedashedoff,hereyesfixedonthefinishline.Astheraceprogressed,shefoundherselffallingbehindatoughpetitor.Panicstartedtosetin,andherselfdoubtresurfaced.Butthen,shethoughtaboutthecountlesshoursoftrainingandthepainshehadendured.Gatheringhercourage,shedugdeepandincreasedherspeed.Hermusclesscreamedinprotest,butsheignoredthepain.Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.Shestoodthere,gaspingforbreath,ahugesmileonherface.Theaudiencerushedtowardsher,congratulatingher.Atthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatthejourneyhadbeenmoreimportantthanthedestination.Herperseverancehadnotonlymadeherawinnerbutalsoastrongerperson.【答案】ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Miabegantorun,keepinganevenandcontrolledbreath.Thefirstlapwenteffortlessly.AsMianearedthehalfwaypoint,herlegsweretired,butsherefusedtostop.“Youcandothis,”shethought.“Onelapatatime.”Thelastlapcame,an

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