读后续写+收养+Ray的故事+讲义 高三一模英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Experienceoftrainingretiredracingdogsledmyhusband,Steveandmetobelievewecouldhandleanything.Butwewerewrong.WhenweadoptedRay,adogwithahurtthatmadehimstopracing,thingsgottough.Heretiredduetotheinjuryandquicklywenttotheadoptionagency.Rayhadnootherplacetogo.Behindhissweetfacehidadarkanddamagedsoulandanaggressive(好斗的)nature.Desperatetofindhimahomeandnotdeliverhimtothefarm,theadoptionagencyrushedhimtoourdoorwhenweofferedtoadopt.Ourexperiencewithdogsandahomewithoutotheranimalsmadeusperfectcandidates,andwewerehisbestshot.Rayjumpedaroundourhouse.Hetriedtounderstandtheenormousworldhenowlivedin,astrangeonecomparedtothequartershehadknownforsolong.Adjustmentwouldtaketime,buthisinexperience,andapparentlyoursaswell,madecoexistenceinteresting.Patienceandtrainingwithanynewpetareimportant,butwithRay,theywerevital.Hedidn’tlistentous,nomatterhownicewewere.Hedidn’tunderstandhewasapetwithaname.Hedidnotrespondtocommands,love,encouragement,orfood.Hehadnoideawhatweexpectedofhim.Likeacreaturefromanotherplanet,hehadnoconceptoflifeinourworld.Raygotreallyscaredandwouldgetangrywhenweleft.Inamadnesshescratched(抓,挠)atwindowsanddoorswheneverweleftthehouse.Concernedforhissafetyandtheconditionofourhome,welockedhiminabigwoodenbox.Butheresistedandtriedtoescape.Thestressweencounteredfloodedus.注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________收养Ray的故事续写续写要点第一段：着重描绘“我们”决定放弃时的复杂情绪与具体行动。内心满是无奈、沮丧和对之前努力付诸东流的不甘，给收养机构打电话时声音中带着疲惫与失落。收养机构工作人员会进行劝说，强调Ray的艰难处境，让“我们”陷入沉思，内心开始动摇，既想摆脱当前困境，又不忍心放弃Ray。第二段：详细刻画Ray转变后的行为表现以及“我们”的反应。Ray积极回应指令，主动与“我们”互动，比如听从“坐下”“过来”等简单命令，还会亲昵地蹭“我们”的腿。“我们”从最初的惊讶、不敢置信，到逐渐露出欣慰的笑容，之后与Ray进行更多互动，一起玩耍、训练，感受到之前从未有过的温暖与亲密，深刻体会到坚持带来的美好结果。情感线一开始，“我们”在收养Ray的过程中遭遇诸多挫折，如Ray的不配合、破坏行为等，内心充满焦虑、疲惫和挫败感，直至产生放弃的念头，此时情感处于低谷。当收养机构提醒Ray的艰难处境时，“我们”内心开始纠结，有挣扎也有一丝不忍。而Ray突然转变后，“我们”从震惊转为惊喜，进而感到无比欣慰和幸福，对Ray的感情也从无奈的接纳转变为深深的喜爱与珍惜，情感实现了从低谷到高峰的巨大转变。故事线“我们”收养受伤退役的赛犬Ray后，面对它的种种问题，八周后决定放弃并联系收养机构。收养机构工作人员劝说“我们”，讲述Ray可能面临的糟糕处境，“我们”内心开始动摇。第二天早晨，Ray突然像变了一只狗，开始听从指令，展现出友好互动的一面。“我们”对Ray的转变感到惊讶和欣喜，与它进行更多互动，如一起玩接球游戏等。随着时间推移，Ray不断进步，与“我们”的关系越来越亲密，家里充满温馨。“我们”回顾这段经历，感慨坚持的意义，更加珍惜与Ray的相伴时光。主旨升华句ThisexperiencewithRaytaughtusthatpatienceandperseverancecanworkwonders,eveninthemostchallengingsituations,andthateverybeingdeservesachancetobeunderstoodandloved.（与Ray的这段经历教会我们，耐心和坚持能创造奇迹，即便在最具挑战性的情况下，而且每个生命都值得被理解和爱。）ThroughtheprocessofadoptingRay,werealizedthatsometimes,themostdifficultjourneyscanleadtothemostbeautifuldestinations,andthatgivingupshouldneverbethefirstchoice.（通过收养Ray的过程，我们意识到，有时最艰难的旅程能通向最美的终点，而且放弃永远不应是首选。）Ray'stransformationnotonlychangedourperceptionofhimbutalsomadeusunderstandthatloveandpatiencehavethepowertobreakdowneventhethickestwallsoffearandresistance.（Ray的转变不仅改变了我们对它的看法，还让我们明白，爱和耐心有力量打破最坚固的恐惧与抵触之墙。）OurstorywithRayservesasareminderthateverypet,nomatterhowtroubledtheymayseematfirst,hasthepotentialtobecomeabelovedmemberofthefamilyifwearewillingtoinvesttimeandeffort.（我们和Ray的故事提醒我们，每只宠物，无论起初看起来多么棘手，只要我们愿意投入时间和精力，都有潜力成为家庭中备受喜爱的一员。）Fromthevergeofgivinguptoexperiencingthejoyofachangedpet,welearnedthattrueloveisaboutacceptanceandperseverance,andthatitcanbringunexpectedrewardsinthemostunexpectedways.（从濒临放弃到体验一只改变的宠物带来的喜悦，我们学到，真爱意味着接纳和坚持，而且它能以最意想不到的方式带来意外的回报。）写作示范示范一EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.Thecontinuouschaoshebroughtwaswearingusdown.Wecalledtheadoptionagency,ourvoicesheavywithdespair.ThestaffontheotherendlistenedempatheticallyandthentoldusaboutRay'stragicpast.Theysaidhehadbeenthroughsomuchbeforecomingtous,andsendinghimbackmightmeanhe'dhavenochanceatahappylife.Wehungup,feelingconflicted.Thatnight,wesatinthelivingroom,lookingatRay,whowaslyinginacorner,hiseyesseeminglyfilledwithahintofsadness.Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.Whenwecalledhisname,heimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandtrottedover.Weaskedhimtosit,andtoourastonishment,heobeyedrightaway.Stevethrewatoy,andRayhappilyrantofetchit,wagginghistailvigorously.Wewereoverjoyed.Itwasasifamagicaltransformationhadoccurredovernight.Fromthatmomenton,Raybecamemoreandmoreobedient.Henolongerdestroyedthingswhenweleft.Ourpatiencefinallypaidoff,andwerealizedthatsometimes,alittlemoreperseverancecanleadtoaworldofdifference.示范二EightweeksafteradoptingRay,wewerereadytogiveupandsendhimback.Theconstantscratchingonthedoorsandwindows,hisunresponsivenesstoourcommands,hadleftusexhausted.Aswedialedtheadoptionagency'snumber,ourheartsachedwithdisappointment.ThepersononthelineexplainedthatRayhadbeenthroughseveralharshtrainingsessionsduringhisracingdays,whichmighthavecausedhisaggressiveandunrulybehavior.Theypleadedwithustogivehimonemorechance.Afterthecall,wesatinsilence,lookingatRay,whowascoweringinacorner.Butthenextmorning,Raysuddenlyseemedtounderstandus.Whenweente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