读后续写：珍妮的徒步之旅+讲义 高二下学期第一次阶段考英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thispastsummer,Ijoinedmysister'sfamilyfortheirannualAdirondackvacationinarentedcottageonalake,thesameplacemyfamilyhasstayedsinceIwasalittlekid.Thereareplentyofactivitiestokeepeveryonebusy:swimming,fishingandsandcastlebuildingonthebeach.Bythethirdday,Ihadnoticedthatmyten-year-oldniece,Jannie,hadspentmostofhertimewatchingcableTVandbrowsingthroughthegiftshopsintown.NotexactlythewildernessexperienceIrememberedfrommyyouth.So,atdinner,ItoldJannieweshouldhiketothetopofthemountainacrossthelakethefollowingmorning,whichwascalledRockyPointbecausethepeakisbareandrock-covered."Well."repliedJannie,"TomorrowtherearesomeshowsontheDisneyChannel,soI'mgoingtobeprettybusy.""WhenyourmotherandIusedtocomeherewhenwewereyourage,weweretoobusyswimmingandhikingupmountains.""Soundsmorelikepunishmentthanavacation."Sheshruggedhershoulders."Besides,Idon'tthinkIcanwalkthatfar."WhenIsaiditonlytookahalf-hourofsteadywalkingtogettothetop.Shegrumbled,"Fine,I'llgo."Iknewshewasagreeingjusttoshutmeup,butIwouldtakeanythingIcouldget.Thenextmorningwasaperfectdayforahike,withsunshineandclearskies.Igotupearlyandtooksomesandwichesandwaterbottles,whichItuckedintomybackpackalongwiththebugsprayandthecamera.Janniecameshufflingdownstairs,sigheddramatically,rolledhereyesandannouncedinaveryunenthusiastic,robot-likevoice."I'mreadytogohiking,UncleDavid."Anyway,weclimbedintomycaranddrovetothetrailheadabouttenminutesaway.Aswestoodattheedgeoftheparkinglotandlookeddowntheshadedtrailthatledintothewoods."Iamstillnotsurethisisagoodidea,butifyouandMomcoulddoit,Icantoo,Iguess."注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraphl:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________珍妮的徒步之旅续写续写要点第一段：重点描述徒步过程中Jannie的状态变化。开始可能还会有些不情愿，但随着在森林中看到更多有趣的事物，如各种小动物、独特的植物等，她会逐渐被大自然吸引，变得越来越兴奋和好奇，与“我”的交流也增多，不再抵触徒步。第二段：到达山顶后，着重描写Jannie看到景色时的震撼与喜悦，她可能会兴奋地欢呼、四处张望，尽情享受美景。然后可以写我们在山顶休息、吃东西，她向“我”表达对这次徒步的喜爱和感激，最后以她表示以后会更愿意参与户外活动结尾，体现她的转变。情感线开始Jannie对徒步充满抵触和不情愿，在徒步过程中，她逐渐被自然吸引，从无聊、无奈转变为好奇、兴奋，到达山顶看到美景后，内心充满震撼与喜悦，最后对“我”带她来徒步充满感激，并且对户外活动有了新的认识和喜爱，情感从消极抵触转为积极热爱。故事线Jannie最初不情愿地答应去徒步。我们出发前往徒步地点，开始走在林间小道上。徒步过程中Jannie看到森林里的动植物，逐渐产生兴趣。我们继续前行，克服一些小困难，如爬坡、过小溪等。最终到达山顶，Jannie被美景震撼。Jannie表示以后会更愿意参与户外活动，我们的关系也更加亲近。主旨升华句Fromthisexperience,Jannielearnedthatnatureholdsendlesswondersthatarewaitingtobediscoveredifwearewillingtostepoutofourcomfortzones.（从这次经历中，Jannie学到了如果我们愿意走出舒适区，大自然有着无尽的奇迹等待我们去发现。）ThishikenotonlyshowedJanniethebeautyoftheoutdoorsbutalsotaughtherthatchallengescanleadtowonderfulrewards.（这次徒步不仅向Jannie展示了户外的美丽，还教会了她挑战能带来美妙的回报。）ThejourneyupthemountainwasnotjustaphysicalwalkbutaspiritualadventureforJannie,openinghereyestoaworldshehadpreviouslyoverlooked.（对Jannie来说，爬山的旅程不仅仅是一次身体上的行走，更是一次精神上的冒险，让她看到了一个她以前忽略的世界。）Throughthishike,Jannierealizedthatthebestthingsinlifeoftencomewhenweembracetheunknownandstepintothegreatoutdoors.（通过这次徒步，Jannie意识到生活中最美好的事情往往在我们拥抱未知、走进大自然时到来。）ThisexperiencewithJanniemademeunderstandthatsharingthebeautyofnaturewithotherscanbringaboutpositivechangesandcreatelastingmemories.（和Jannie的这次经历让我明白，与他人分享大自然的美丽能带来积极的改变，创造永恒的记忆。）写作示范示范一Paragraph1:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.Janniewalkedslowlyatfirst,butaswewentdeeperintotheforest,hereyeswerecaughtbyasquirreljumpingamongthetrees.Shechasedafteritcuriously,herfacefullofexcitement.Then,weheardtheclearsongofabird.Shestoppedtolistencarefully,asmilespreadingacrossherface."UncleDavid,it'ssonicehere,"shesaidhappily.Wewalkedon,andshefoundabeautifulwildflower.Shebentdowntosmellit,hereyesshiningwithjoy.Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.Janniewascompletelyamazedbytheview.Thelakelookedlikeabluegeminthesunlight,andthemountainsinthedistancewerecoveredwithgreenforests."Thisisamazing!I'veneverseensuchabeautifulscene,"sheshoutedexcitedly.Wesatonastoneandateoursandwiches,enjoyingthepeacefulmoment."Thankyou,UncleDavid.I'msogladIcame,"shesaid,huggingme.Ismiledandsaid,"You'rewelcome.Ihopeyou'lllovenaturemorefromnowon."Shenoddedfirmly,hereyesfullofdetermination.示范二Paragraph1:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.Aswewalkedalongthetrail,Jannie'smoodgraduallychanged.Shewasattractedbyasmallstreambesidethepath.Theclearwaterwasflowinghappily,andthereweresomecolorfulpebblesatthebottom.Shesquatteddownandreachedoutherhandtotouchthewater,giggling."It'ssocool!"sheexclaimed.Then,abutterflyflewby,andshechaseditforawhile.Sheseemedtohaveforgottenthatshedidn'twanttocomeatfirst.Witheachnewdiscovery,herstepsbecamelighterandmoreenergetic.Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.Janniegaspedinastonishmentwhenshesawthepanoramicview.Thevastskywasclearandblue,andthewhitecloudswerelikecottoncandy.Thewholelakeandthesurroundingscenerywerelikeabeautifulpainting."Ican'tbelievehowbeautifulitis,"shemurmured.Wetooksomepicturestorecordthismoment.Janniesaid,"ThishikeisthebestthingI'veeverdone.I'lldefinitelycomeagain."Iwasgladtoseeherchangeandsaid,"Natureisfullofsurprises.Wejustneedtoexploreit."Shelookedatmeandnodded,herfacefullofsmiles.【参考答案】Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.About200yardsintotheforest,thetrailbegantoclimbasteepslope.Ipointedoutsomerarely-seentreesandfloweringplants,whichIexplainedwereendangeredspecies.Shedidn’tsharemyenthusiasm.Shewasthirsty,tired,sweatyandbored.Ihandedherthewaterbottleasshesatonafallenlogandtookabreak.“Youknow,Ithinkwe’realmosttothetop,”Itoldher.“Youalreadysaidthatthreetimes,andwe’renotthereyet.”shereplied.Shegrumbledanothercomplainaswecontinuedon.Shemightnot