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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasalittleboy,Ididn’tseemtobegoodatanythingsothatIfeltinferior(较差的).IlongedtoachievesomethingtoprovetomyselfthatIamacapableperson.So,Itookpartinvariouscompetitions,hopingtoexperiencethethrillofvictoryandboostmyself-esteem(自尊).Unfortunately,Ineversucceededinanyofthesecompetitions.Thisconstantfailureledmetofeeldiscouraged.Feelingupset,Iwantedtogiveuptryingaltogether.Whenmyfathernoticedmydisheartenedspirit,hedecidedtostepinandhelpme.OnesunnySaturdayafternoon,hetookmetoacarnivalheldbyourlocalcommunitycenter.Everyyear,ourtowneagerlyawaitedthiscarnival,whichwasorganizedtoraisefundsforlocalcharities.Thecarnivalfeaturedawiderangeofdeliciousfoods,excitingrides,games,music,andotherattractions.Mydadledmetoacolorfultentatthecarnival.Inside,agamewassetupspecificallyforchildren.Thegameinvolvedthrowingringsontobottlestowinprizes.Anelderlymanwithakindfacewasinchargeofthegame.Itwasstillearly,andnootherkidswerearoundyet.Mydadpushedmeforwardandencouragedmetogiveitatry.Iapproachedtheoldmannervouslyandasked,“HowdoIplaythisgame?”Hesmiledwarmlyandexplained,“It’ssimpleandfun.Justthrowtheseringsandtrytogetthemoverthebottles.Ifyoumanagetogetevenoneringonabottle,you’llwinaprizeofyourchoice.”Ithenaskedaboutthecostofthegame.Theoldmanreplied,“It’sfivedollarsfortenrings.”Mydadhandedmethemoneyquickly,andIpassedittotheoldman,whothengavemeabundleoftenrings.Itookadeepbreathandthrewoutmyfirstring.Itmissedthebottlecompletely,landingonthegroundwithasoftsound.Ringafterring,Imissedeachattempt.Sweatbegantoformonmyforehead,andmyhandstrembled.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.嘉年华游戏获胜故事续写续写要点第一段:重点刻画“我”在扔最后一个圈时的紧张心理,包括心跳加速、手抖等细节,以及父亲的鼓励动作和言语,详细描述扔圈的动作和圈在空中飞行的过程,制造紧张氛围。第二段:着重描写“我”获奖后的激动心情,如笑容、与父亲的互动,以及老人的祝贺,深入阐述这次经历对“我”心态的改变,如不再害怕失败、勇于面对挑战,体现成长与感悟。情感线起初,“我”因多次失败而极度沮丧,想要放弃。在嘉年华玩游戏时,一次次扔圈失败让“我”愈发紧张、焦虑,担心再次失败。当只剩最后一个圈时,“我”的紧张达到顶点。成功套中瓶子获奖后,“我”从紧张转为激动、喜悦,最后收获自信,内心充满力量,完成从自卑到自信的情感转变。故事线“我”站在游戏场地前,紧张地拿起最后一个圈,父亲在旁鼓励。“我”深呼吸,试图稳住颤抖的手,将最后一个圈用力扔出。圈在空中飞行,“我”紧紧盯着,心中充满期待和紧张。圈成功套中瓶子,“我”兴奋地跳起来,不敢相信自己成功了。老人微笑着祝贺“我”,父亲满脸骄傲,“我”开心地挑选奖品。“我”拿着奖品,内心感悟到努力的意义,不再惧怕失败。主旨升华句Thisexperiencetaughtmethattruesuccessliesnotinthemagnitudeoftheachievementbutinthecouragetokeeptrying,andeverysmallvictorycanbeastepping-stonetogreaterconfidence.(这次经历让我明白,真正的成功不在于成就的大小,而在于不断尝试的勇气,每一次小小的胜利都可以成为通往更大自信的垫脚石。)Itshowsthateveninthefaceofrepeatedfailures,asinglemomentofperseverancecanturnthetablesandbringnotonlyvictorybutalsoaprofoundtransformationinone'smindset.(这表明,即使面对多次失败,坚持的一瞬间也能扭转局面,不仅带来胜利,还能深刻改变一个人的心态。)Throughthisincident,Irealizedthatself-esteemisnotbuiltovernightbutthroughaseriesofsmallstepsoffacingchallengesandovercomingfears,nomatterhowtrivialtheymayseem.(通过这件事,我意识到自尊不是一蹴而就的,而是通过一系列面对挑战和克服恐惧的小步骤建立起来的,无论这些步骤看起来多么微不足道。)Thisstoryremindsusthatthesmallestactsofencouragementfromlovedones,combinedwithourowndetermination,cancreateaturningpointinourlivesandleadustodiscoverourhiddenpotential.(这个故事提醒我们,亲人的小小鼓励,加上我们自己的决心,能成为我们生活的转折点,让我们发现自己隐藏的潜力。)Thevictoryatthecarnivalgamewasnotjustaboutwinningaprize;itwasapowerfulreminderthatweallhavetheabilitytoovercomeself-doubtandachieveourgoals,aslongaswenevergiveup.(在嘉年华游戏中的胜利不仅仅是赢得一个奖品,它有力地提醒我们,只要我们永不放弃,我们都有能力克服自我怀疑,实现目标。)写作示范示范一Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.MyheartwasthumpingsoloudlythatIwassureeveryonearoundcouldhearit.Myhandswereshakinguncontrollably,andIfeltacoldsweattricklingdownmyback.Myfather,sensingmydistress,puthisarmaroundmeandsaidsoftly,“Son,justrelaxandgiveityourbestshot.Itdoesn'tmatterifyouwinorlose;theimportantthingisthatyoutry.”Hiswordsgavemeaglimmerofcourage.Itookadeepbreath,closedmyeyesforasecond,andthenwithallmystrength,Ithrewthering.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.Itwasacutelittletoycar,butitfeltlikethemostprecioustreasureintheworldtome.Ilookedupatmyfather,andhewasbeamingwithpride.“Youdidit,son!Iknewyoucould,”hesaid,givingmeabighug.Theoldmanrunningthegamealsocameovertocongratulateme.Thissimplewinatthecarnivalgamewasalife-changingmomentforme.ItmademerealizethatIwascapableofachievingthingsIhadoncethoughtwerebeyondmyreach.Fromthenon,Ifacedlife'schallengeswithanew-foundconfidence,alwaysrememberingthateveryeffortwasworthit.示范二Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Mykneeswereknockingtogether,andmythroatfeltdry.Istaredatthebottles,myvisionblurringslightlyduetotheintensefocus.Icouldhearmyfather'sgentlevoiceinmyear,“You'vegotthis,myboy.Justbelieveinyourself.”Summoningallmywillpower,Iaimedcarefullyandreleasedthering.Itspunthroughtheair,andforamoment,timeseemedtostandstill.Iheldtheprizetightlyinmyhands,withahugesmilespreadingacrossmyface.Itwasasmall,colorfulkeychain,butitrepresentedsomuchmore.Theoldmanpattedmeonthebackandsaid,“Welldone,youngman!You'vegotsomerealdetermination.”Myfather'seyeswereshiningwithjoy.Thisexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelesson.Iunderstoodthatfailurewasnottheendbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.Inolongersawmyselfasafailure.Instead,Iwasafighterwhohadovercomeself-doubtandachievedasmallbutsignificantvictory.Thisnew-foundmindsetwouldstaywithmethroughoutmylife,inspiringmetotakeonbiggerchallengeswithcourageanddetermination.参考答案Withonlyoneringleft,Iwasverynervous.Sensingmyanxiety,mydadcameoverandpattedmyshoulder.“It’sokay,son,”hesaidgently.“Takeadeepbreath,focusonyouraim,anddon’trush.”Heguidedmeonhowtoadjustmystanceandaimmorecarefully.Encouraged,Itookadeepbreathandthrewthefinalring.Tomyasto

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