高考英语复习读后续写练习：离家又归：叛逆少年的成长与亲情回归之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习离家又归：叛逆少年的成长与亲情回归之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ihadrunawayfromhomeafterfinishinghighschool.MyparentshadinsistedIgotocollege,butIwastiredofschool.Ihatedit.Iwasdeterminednottogo.And,besides,myfatherwastoostrict.Ihadtoomanychorestodoaroundthefarm.Ihaledthework!Therehadbeenaquarrelbetweenmyfatherandme.Ithrewsomethingsintoabagandleftangrily,asmyfathershoutedafterme,“Ifyouleave,don’tcomeback!”Mymothercriedopenly,andIhadseenthosetearsduringahundredsleeplessnights.Thenitwastimetowritealettertomyfather.4续写原文DearDad,It’sbeenmorethanayearnow.I’vetraveledeasttowest.I’vehaddozensofjobs.Noneofthemamountedtoverymuch.Alwaysthesamequestions:“Howmucheducationhaveyougot?”Itseemstheyalwayswantcollegemenforthegoodjobs.Dad,youandMotherwererightabouteverything.Iknownowthattheworkonthefarmdidn’thurtme,andI’mconvincedIneedcollege.I’malsoconvincedthatbothofyoulovedme.Dad,I’velearnedalesson.Iwanttocomehome.IknowyousaidifIleft,Icouldn’tcomeback,butI’mprayingyou’llchangeyourmind.Iwanttocomehomeandbeapartofthefamilyagain.GivemylovetoMotherandthegirls.Love,Yourson5续写原文AsIfoldedtheletterandputitintoanenvelope,Ifeltarefreshingrelief.Itwasasifaheavyloadhadbeenliftedfrommyshoulders.AndIhadtobeonmywayhome.Istarteddownthedesolateroad—thelongroadhome.Fortunately,acarpickedmeup,anditwasgoodtohavesomeonetotalkwith.Thedriverwasasalesmanandverypleasant.“Whereyougoing,boy?”heaskedgood-naturedly.TherewasalongsilencebeforeIsaid,“Home.”“Beenawayfromhomelong?”Ismiled,alittleself-conscious,andsaid,“Oneyear,onemonthandtwodays.”6段首句Paragraph1：Havingheardmystory,heexpressedhissupportformyfinaldecisionandtoldmesomethingsurprising.Paragraph2:FinallyIarrivedhomewhen.itwascompletelydark.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9主人公高中毕业后，因厌烦学校生活、不满父亲的严格要求以及农场繁重的劳作，与父亲发生激烈争吵后离家出走。父亲曾愤怒地表示若他离开就别再回来，母亲则在一旁伤心落泪。在外漂泊的一年多时间里，主人公四处奔波，从事了许多工作，却发现好工作都需要大学学历。此时他深刻认识到父母当初的想法是正确的，意识到农场的劳作并没有伤害自己，而且自己确实需要接受大学教育，也明白了父母对自己的爱。于是，他怀着悔意给父亲写了一封信，表达了自己想要回家、重新融入家庭的强烈愿望。写完信后，他如释重负，踏上了回家的路。在途中，一位推销员搭载了他，两人开始交谈。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1：Havingheardmystory,heexpressedhissupportformyfinaldecisionandtoldmesomethingsurprising.听完我的故事，他对我的最终决定表示支持，并告诉了我一些令人惊讶的事。他说自己年轻时也和我一样叛逆，不顾父母的反对，毅然决然地离开了家，想要去外面的世界闯荡一番。他原本以为凭借自己的能力可以闯出一片天地，可现实却给了他沉重的打击。在外漂泊的日子里，他尝尽了生活的艰辛，做着各种辛苦又收入微薄的工作，常常居无定所，食不果腹。直到有一天，他在一场意外中受了重伤，躺在医院的病床上，身边没有一个亲人，那一刻他才深刻地体会到了亲情的珍贵。他强忍着伤痛，拖着虚弱的身体回到了家，发现父母早已白发苍苍，眼中满是对他的思念和担忧。从那以后，他再也没有离开过家，还努力工作，陪伴在父母身边，弥补曾经错过的时光。他的故事让我更加坚定了回家的决心，我在心里暗暗发誓，这次回家后，一定要好好孝顺父母，珍惜和他们在一起的每一刻。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:FinallyIarrivedhomewhen.itwascompletelydark.终于，天完全黑了的时候我到家了。我站在熟悉的家门口，心里既紧张又激动。我深吸一口气，缓缓地抬起手，敲响了家门。过了一会儿，门开了，母亲站在门口，看到我后，她的眼中瞬间充满了惊喜和泪水，她一把将我抱住，嘴里不停地说着：“孩子，你终于回来了，你可把我们想死了。”这时，父亲也从屋里走了出来，他的眼神中透露出一丝欣慰，但依然保持着一贯的严肃。我低着头，走到父亲面前，小声地说：“爸，我错了，我不该那么任性，离开家这么久，让你们担心了。”父亲沉默了片刻，然后轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀，说：“回来就好，回来就好。”那一刻，我感受到了父亲对我的宽容和爱。一家人围坐在餐桌前，吃着母亲做的饭菜，温馨的氛围让我觉得自己仿佛又回到了小时候。我知道，无论我走多远，家永远是我最温暖的港湾。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Havingheardmystory,heexpressedhissupportformyfinaldecisionandtoldmesomethingsurprising.Hesaidthathehadbeenasrebelliousasmewhenhewasyoung.Despitehisparents'opposition,heresolutelylefthome,eagertoexploretheoutsideworld.Heoriginallythoughtthathecouldmakeanameforhimselfwithhisownabilities,butrealitydealthimaheavyblow.Duringhisdaysofwanderingoutside,heenduredthehardshipsoflife,doingvarioushardandlow-payingjobs,oftenwithoutafixedplacetoliveandenoughfoodtoeat.Untiloneday,hewasseriouslyinjuredinanaccident.Lyingonthehospitalbed,withnorelativesbyhisside,hedeeplyrealizedthepreciousnessoffamilyaffectionatthatmoment.Heenduredthepainanddraggedhisweakbodybackhome.Whenhesawhisparents,theywerealreadygray-haired,andtheireyeswerefulloflongingandworryforhim.Sincethen,heneverlefthomeagain.Heworkedhardandaccompaniedhisparents,tryingtomakeupforthetimehehadmissed.Hisstorymademeevenmoredeterminedtogohome.IsecretlyvowedinmyheartthatafterIgothomethistime,Iwoulddefinitelybefilialtomyparentsandcherisheverymomentwiththem.14范文呈现Finally,Iarrivedhomewhenitwascompletelydark.Istoodinfrontofthefamiliarhouse,feelingbothnervousandexcited.Itookadeepbreathandslowlyraisedmyhandtoknockonthedoor.Afterawhile,thedooropened,andmymotherstoodatthedoor.Whenshesawme,hereyeswereinstantlyfilledwithsurpriseandtears.Shehuggedmetightlyandkeptsaying,"Mychild,you'refinallyback.We'vebeensoworriedaboutyou."Atthistime,myfatheralsocameoutofthehouse.Therewasahintofreliefinhiseyes,buthestillmaintainedhisusualseriousness.Iloweredmyhead,walkeduptomyfather,andsaidsoftly,"Dad,Iwaswrong.Ishouldn'thavebeensowillfulandlefthomeforsolong,makingyouworry."Myfatherwassilentforamoment,thengentlypattedmeontheshoulderandsaid,"It'sgoodthatyou'reback,it'sgoodthatyou'reback."Atthatmoment,Ifeltmyfather'stoleranceandloveforme.Thewholefamilysataroundthediningtable,eatingthemealmymotherhadcooked.ThewarmatmospheremademefeelasifIhadreturnedtomychildhood.IknewthatnomatterhowfarIwent,homewouldalwaysbemywarmestharbor.15升级版范文呈现Havingheardmystory,heexpressedhiswhole-heartedsupportformyfinaldecisionandproceededtosharesomethingastonishing.HeconfidedthathehadoncebeenasrebelliousasIwasinhisyouth.Defyinghisparents'earnestpleas,hehadlefthomewithunwaveringdetermination,drivenbytheburningdesiretoconquertheoutsideworld.Hehadbeenconvincedthathiscapabilitieswouldsurelyleadhimtogreatsuccess.However,realitystruckhimhard.Duringhisyearsofwandering,heenduredcountlesshardships,takingonarduousandpoorly-paidjobs,oftenlivinginprecariousconditionswithnostableshelterorsufficientfood.Itwasnotuntilhewasseverelyinjuredinanaccidentandlayaloneinthehospitalbed,devoidofanyfamilymembersbyhisside,thathetrulygraspedtheprofoundvalueoffamilyaffection.Musteringallhisstrengthdespitethepain,hemadehiswaybackhome.There,hewasgreetedbythesightofhisparents,theirhairnowsilver-streaked,theireyesbrimmingwithlongingandconcernforhim.Fromthatmomenton,heneverlefthomeagain.Instead,hededicatedhimselftoworkinghardandstayingbyhisparents'side,strivingtomakeupforthelosttime.Hisstoryservedasapowerfulcatalyst,strengtheningmyresolvetoreturnhome.IsilentlyvowedthatonceIwasback,Iwouldbeafilialchildandcherisheverypreciousmomentspentwithmyparents.16升级版范文呈现Finally,Iarrivedhomewhendarknesshadcompletelyengulfedtheworld.Standinginfrontofthefamiliarhouse,awaveofnervousnessandexcitementwashedoverme.Takingadeepbreathtosteadymynerves,Islowlyreachedoutandknockedonthedoor.Afterabriefmoment,thedoorswungopen,revealingmymother.Themomentshelaideyesonme,hereyeswelledupwithsurpriseandtears.Shepulledmeintoatightembrace,hervoicechokedwithemotionassherepeated,"Mydear,you'refinallyhome.We'vebeensoworriedaboutyou."Justthen,myfatheremergedfromthehouse.Hi