2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit1TeenagelifeSectionⅦReadingforWriting-建议信学案新人教版必修第一册

PAGEPAGE1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2024DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①recommendvt.建议②unhealthyadj.不健康的③encouragevt.激励④usefuladj.有用的⑤advicevt.忠告，建议⑥inone’ssparetime闲暇⑦lookforwardto盼望，期望⑧beworriedabout对……担忧⑨beattractedto宠爱⑩beaddictedto对……上瘾⑪concentrateon集中精力于⑫begoodfor/dogoodto对……有好处⑬makefriends交挚友⑭hearfrom收到……的来信⑮enjoyoneself/havefun玩得开心Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华，你的好挚友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请依据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交挚友首先要做一个挚友；2.要和挚友同甘共苦；患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友；3.友情须要时间和投入(effort)。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：thepurposeoftheletterParagraph2：thesuggestionsthatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’shopeStep2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tip/advice/suggestionn.建议②situationn.状况③makefriends交挚友④havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困难⑤takeone’sadvice接受某人的建议⑥sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦⑦callfor须要⑧putone’sheartinto一心一意2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很愧疚。(havetroublein...)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.②假如你接受我的建议，变更这种状况是很简洁的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.③要交挚友为什么不先做一个挚友呢？(whynot)Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④你和挚友同甘共苦莫非不是一个好办法吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的挚友才是真正的挚友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2024DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?篇章结构Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮点表达1.建议信开头常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人沟通方面有些麻烦，你也可能常常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很兴奋收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。2.表达建议常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参与一个俱乐部？假如你这样做的话，就会交到挚友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应当尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的办法。通过这样做，你会使自己安静下来。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最终但同等重要的是，你应当先和她谈一谈。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看来，你们应当相互帮助。3.建议信结尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发觉这些方法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.假如你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会情愿和你交挚友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。写作技巧连句成篇，行