押南京卷第76题 书面表达（原卷版）

押南京卷第76题书面表达命题原则及特点1.着重考查学生运用所学语言知识与技能来表达思想、进行交际的能力。以书面的形式进行信息沟通、再现生活经历、描述周围事物、发表意见和观点。2.最近几年来书面表达在体裁和题材方面突出的特点是稳中有变。话题更贴近学生生活，让人人有话可说，有感可发，且发挥空间大。试题突出交际性和实用性。3.中考书面表达还是控制性加半开放性写作。通过提供要点，降低了考生的写作焦虑，同时也给考生足够的写作空间。4.中考写作体裁是外在的、附属的东西，是提供的。如何连贯、清楚、得体地表达内涵才是学生真正需要关注的。从某种意义上说，初中写作只是停留在翻译的层面，它是语言的组织和观点的表达，不是创作。1．（2021·江苏南京·中考真题）某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2020·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。FUNLAND

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请仔细观察下面图片并发挥想象，用英语写出一篇涵盖每张图片内容且结局完整的故事。故事的开头已经给出。注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名学校名称；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数80左右。Millieisamiddleschoolstudentwholovesplayingwithlittleanimals.Oneday,whenshewasonherwaytoschool,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。Now,moreandmorestudentsarebusystudyingalldaylong.Thisweekwewantyoutohaveyoursayabouttheten-minutebreak.Whyisitnecessarytohavethebreak?Whatdoyouandyourclassmatesdoduringthebreak?Whatisyourgoodadviceonplanningthebreak?注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Wehaveaten-minutebreakbetweenclasses._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（23-24九年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习）在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以“全身心投入(Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是慧洁，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题：1.Whatdidyoudevoteyourselfto?2.Howdidyoudoit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；2.词数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。DevotionI’mgladtosharemyideasaboutmydevotioninmylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（23-24九年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习）我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它跳动在民族乐器回音袅袅的琴弦上，闪烁在国粹京剧色彩斑斓的脸谱上，绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中，传扬在脍炙人口的中华诗词里，描绘在历史悠久的名胜古迹中……请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。内容包括：(1)你最喜欢的传统文化；(2)讲述你体验传统文化的一次经历；(3)谈谈你的感受。注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺；2.词数不少于80词。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末）义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后，周末培训机构不再提供服务，校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间，校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁，请根据问卷内容，用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。要求：1.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dearheadmaster,Thanksforofferingussuchmeaningfulchances.Iamgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyafter-schoolactivities.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,ZhangNing8．（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末）现在，越来越多的外国学生对中华传统文化很感兴趣。假如你是李华，请根据你的笔友David的邮件，用英语给他回一封邮件。DearLiHua,Howareyougoingthesedays?OurschoolheldaChineseCultureDaylastweek.WefeltthebeautyofChinesemusic,thecharmofChinesepaintingsandthewisdomofChineseliterature.That’ssoamazing!Iwanttolearnmore.Couldyouintroduceyourfavouriteonetome?Pleasetellmeyourstoryaboutit.Andwhatdoyouthinkofit?I’mlookingforwardtoyourshare.Yours,David注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。2.词数不少于70词(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearDavid,I’mgladtoknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetohearfromyousoon.Allthebest,LiHua9．（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末）BeforeSpudWebb’sproudestmomentcame,heworkedhardtoovercome(克服)hisheightdisadvantage;beforeTanDuncreatedamazingmusic,hehadtomakeaviolinhimselfwhenhewasveryyoungbecauseofhispoorfamily;beforeAudreyHepburnwasseenbytheworld,shesufferedhardshipsandstressesbeyondherageduringherchildhood.Weallexperiencedifficultiesandweallhavechancestosucceed.PleasewriteanarticleonthetopicofEverybodyCanBeaWinner,whichshouldinclude:(1)Whatdifficultydidyouexperience?(2)Howdidyouovercomethedifficulty?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromtheexperience?注意：1.词数90左右；2.内容完整，结构合理，条理清楚，书写规范；3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。EverybodyCanBeaWinner___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________