高考英语复习读后续写练习+泳池初体验勇敢学游泳之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习泳池初体验，勇敢学游泳之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thesummerfinallycame.Thatafternoon,thehotsunwasshiningbrightly,makingthetreeleavesalmostburnandmakingpeople’sbodiesseemtobeonfire.Havingnothinginterestingtodoathome,Idecidedtogotothepooltoenjoythecoolnessinsteadofgoingswimming.Thereasonwassimple—Istillcouldn’tswim.Iwasimpatient,andIalwaysfailedtodosomethingandsufferedlosses.Sotheswimminglessonwasputoffagainandagain.Uponarrivingatthegym’spool,Iwasgreetedbyalivelyscene.Somepeoplejustjumpedintothewater,withhandsenteringfirstandthebodyfollowinginasmoothmotion.Somewerekickingtheirlegsrhythmicallybelowthesurface.Allwerehappy.Thatwasinfectious,andIcouldn’thelpbutfeeldeepadmiration.ThenImadeadecision!Takingadeepbreath,Ifollowedtheirexample,closingmyeyesandjumpingintothe“vastwater”withaplop(扑通声).4续写原文Atthismoment,myheadwaspointingtothegroundandmyfeettothesky.WhenI“plopped”tothebottom,mywholebodywasswinginghardandmyhandsandfeetlosttheirabilitytofeel.Ijustfeltwaterrushingtowardsme,andmynosewasfilledwithwater.Itwasveryterrible.Suddenly,Iwashitbysomething.Istruggledoutofthelightbluewaterbitbybitasifbeingdragged.“That’shorrible!”Ishouted1oudly,andwhileIwascomplaining,IsuddenlyrealizedthatIcouldn’tswiminthefirstplace,sowhyshouldIbeshocked?JustwhenIdecidedtostayawayfromwater,someonegentlypattedmyshoulderandsaid,“Don’tbediscouraged,littlegirl.Look,swimmingrequires...”TheladyintroducedherselfasAllison.Shegavemea“1ecture”onhowtoholdmybreath,howtokickgently,andhowtostartwithfloatingwiththehelpofaswimmingring,beingpatientwhilegivingmeademonstration.5段首句Paragraph1：“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Paragraph2：Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了炎热夏日，不会游泳的“我”因无聊前往泳池纳凉。看到别人畅快游泳，心生羡慕，决定效仿跳水，却遭遇失败。此时，Allison出现，耐心给“我”讲解游泳技巧。在她的鼓励下，“我”一次次尝试，虽当天仍未熟练掌握游泳技能，但克服了对水的恐惧，收获了坚持的力量，并决心日后继续练习。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Allison鼓励道：“为什么不再试一次呢？”她那温柔且充满力量的话语，瞬间点燃了我内心的斗志。我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气再次踏入水中。这次，我全神贯注地回忆着她教给我的每一个动作要领。先稳稳地憋住气，随后按照她示范的那样，小心翼翼地轻轻踢腿，同时努力让自己的身体在水面上浮起来。过程中，我难免还是会有些手忙脚乱，甚至又呛了几口水，但我不再像之前那般惊慌失措。每一次尝试，我都能感受到自己在慢慢进步。Allison始终在一旁关注着我，每当我有一点进步，她都会及时给予表扬，这让我的信心愈发充足。10续写思路分析Para2：Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.随着天色渐暗，这一天即将结束，我不得不承认，自己依旧没能熟练地学会游泳。然而，我已然不再是那个一碰到水就害怕得不行的女孩了。我清楚地知道，自己已经取得了实实在在的进步。更重要的是，我成功战胜了内心对水的恐惧。我满心感激地走到Allison面前，真诚地向她道谢。她不仅传授给我游泳的基础技巧，更让我深刻领悟到了坚持的宝贵意义。离开泳池时，我内心充满了新的决心。我暗暗告诉自己，一定要定期来练习游泳。我满心期待着，在不久后的某一天，我也能像初次来泳池时看到的那些人一样，在水中自由自在地畅游。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.Hervoicewaslikearayofsunshine,fullofwarmthandencouragement.Unabletoresistherpersuasion,Itookadeepbreathandsteppedintothewateroncemore.Thistime,Iwasfullyconcentratedonthetechniquesshehadtaughtme.Iheldmybreathfirmly,kickedmylegsgentlyasshehaddemonstrated,andmadegreateffortstofloat.Despitestumblingseveraltimesandevenchokingonwaterabit,Ididn'tpanicasIdidbefore.Witheachattempt,Icouldfeelmyselfgettingbetter.AllisonkeptacloseeyeonmeandpraisedmewheneverImadeanyprogress.Herwordsofencouragementreallyboostedmyconfidence.13范文呈现Asthedaydrewtoaclose,Istillcouldnotswimverywell.However,Iwasnolongerthegirlwhowasterrifiedofwater.Ihadmadeevidentprogress,andmoreimportantly,Ihadovercomemyfear.IwalkeduptoAllisonwithgratitudeinmyeyesandthankedhersincerely.Shehadnotonlytaughtmethebasicskillsofswimmingbutalsoinstilledinmethevalueofperseverance.WhenIleftthepool,Iwasfilledwithanewdetermination.Idecidedtopracticeswimmingregularly.IwaslookingforwardtothedaywhenIcouldswimfreelyjustlikethosepeopleIsawatthepoolonthathotsummerafternoon.14升级版范文呈现“Whynottryonemoretime?”saidAllison.SowarmandencouragingwashervoicethatIsimplycouldn'tresisthavinganothergo.Takingadeepbreath,Isteppedintothewateragain,withmymindfullyfocusedonthetechniquesshehadimparted.Holdingmybreathsteadily,Ikickedgentlyasshedemonstrated,makingeveryefforttofloat.AlthoughIstumbledseveraltimes,notoncedidIpanicasbefore.Eachattemptwitnessedmyimprovement.Allison,keepingawatchfuleyeonme,praisedmyefforts,whichsignificantlyboostedmyconfidence.15升级版范文呈现Asthedaydrewtoaclose,swimmingproficientlystilleludedme.Nevertheless,gonewasthegirlwhowaspetrifiedofwater.Ihadmaderemarkableprogress;moreimportantly,Ihadconqueredmyfear.ApproachingAllisonwithgratitudewellingupinmyheart,Ithankedhersincerely.Shehadnotonlytaughtmethebasicsofswimmingbutalsotheimportanceofperseverance.Leavingthepool,Iwasbrimmingwithanew-fo