读后续写练习+加伦的寻书之旅：爱与成长的故事 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习加伦的寻书之旅：爱与成长的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Everymorningbeforegoingtoschool,Galenwouldstandinfrontoftheirbookshelfinthelivingroom,focusinghissightsononebooktitled“TheGreatestExplorerThatNeverWas”.Itwaskeptonthetopshelf.Hismomwouldalwaysreadittohimwhenhewasfeelingsad.Andlately,he’dalwaysbeenfeelingsad.Hismomdied.Hewouldtrytothinkofawaytogetthebook.He’dthoughtaboutaskinghisdadforhelpbuthisdadhadbeenspendingmoretimeinhisoffice.Galenwasonhisownforthisoneandhesawitasachallengeheneededtoovercome.Thiswashistest.4续写原文Atschool,hewoulddrawupplansonhowhewoulddoit.First,heplannedonusingtheladdertheykeptintheshed(小屋).Sowhenhegothome,hethrewhisbagonthecouchandcarriedouttheplan.Butwhenhehadhishandsonandtriedtocarryit,immediatelyherealizedthattheplanwasafailure-theladderwastooheavyforhimtocarrytothelivingroom.Helefttheshed,defeated.Hetookoutthenotebookthathe’dwrittenhisplanson.Hecrossedoutusingaladder.Hewenttobedthatnightdeterminedtocomeupwithanewplanthatwouldwork.Hisnextplanwastousehismom’soldtrampoline(蹦床).Usingitwouldallowhimtojumphighenough,reachthetopoftheshelf,grabthebook,andlandontheground.Hedidthisaboutfourorfivetimesbeforedecidingthatthisplan,liketheonebefore,wouldn’twork.5续写原文Galenstartedcomingwithotherplansasthedayswenton.Aftertheunsuccessfulmopandbroomplan,hestayeduplatethatnighthatchinganewplan,whichhadahighersuccessratethantheothers.Itwastoclimbtothetopoftheshelfuntilhecouldjusttakethebook.He’djusthavetoholdontothesidesalittletightersothathewouldn’tfalloff.6段首句Paragraph1：Butitwasn’ttheeasyclimbheexpected.Paragraph2：Downtothegroundwiththebook,heturnedaroundtoseewhotheally(同盟)was.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章围绕小男孩加伦在妈妈去世后，试图获取书架顶层那本妈妈常读给他听的书展开。通过一系列失败的尝试，如用梯子、蹦床、拖把扫帚等，展现了他的坚持与努力。最后爬书架时差点滑落，爸爸的及时出现，不仅揭示了爸爸一直在默默关注他，也为故事画上温暖的句号，体现了亲情的力量以及在困境中成长的主题。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Butitwasn’ttheeasyclimbheexpected.加伦开始攀爬书架，他小心翼翼地往上爬，双手紧紧抓住书架边缘，双脚努力寻找着力点。然而，书架比他想象中更难攀爬，表面光滑，他的手逐渐开始酸痛，汗水也浸湿了他的额头。随着高度的增加，他心中的恐惧也在加剧，但对那本书的渴望支撑着他继续向上。就在他快要接近目标时，突然脚下一滑，身体开始快速下滑，他惊恐地闭上双眼，以为自己要重重摔在地上。11续写思路分析Para2：Downtothegroundwiththebook,heturnedaroundtoseewhotheally(同盟)was.钧一发之际，一双有力的大手稳稳地托住了他。加伦缓缓睁开眼睛，看到是爸爸，眼中满是惊喜与安心。爸爸将他抱到地上，轻声安慰着他。原来，爸爸这段时间虽然忙碌，但一直留意着加伦的举动。看着手中的书，加伦心中感慨万千。此后，加伦和爸爸的关系更加紧密，他们一起在对妈妈的回忆中，慢慢走出悲伤，相互扶持着继续前行。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WhenGalenstartedclimbingthebookshelf,hewasextremelycautious.Withhishandsfirmlygraspingtheedgesofthebookshelfandhisfeetstrugglingtofindstablepoints,hemadehiswayupbitbybit.However,thebookshelfwasmuchmoreslipperythanhehadexpected.Hishandsbegantoache,andsweatrolleddownhisforehead.Asheclimbedhigher,fearwelledupinsidehim.Buthisstrongdesireforthebookkepthimgoing.Justashewasabouttoreachthebook,hisfootslippedsuddenly,andhestartedslidingdownrapidly.Heclosedhiseyesinhorror,thinkinghewasabouttofallheavilytotheground.14范文呈现Attheverymoment,apairofstronghandscaughthimfirmly.Galenslowlyopenedhiseyesandwasoverjoyedtoseehisdad.Hisdadcarriedhimgentlytothegroundandcomfortedhimsoftly.Itturnedoutthatalthoughhisdadhadbeenbusy,hehadbeenpayingattentiontoGalen'sactionsallthetime.Lookingatthebookinhishand,Galenfeltafloodofemotions.Fromthenon,Galenandhisdadbecamecloser.Theygraduallyhealedfromthegriefinthememoriesofhismom,supportingeachotherandmovingforward.15升级版范文呈现Butitwasn’ttheeasyclimbheexpected.AsGalenstartedhisarduousjourneyupthebookshelf,hishandsgrippingthesidestightly,hequicklyencountereddifficulties.Thebookshelf,whichwassmoothandofferedlittlegrip,madethetaskfarmorechallenging.Witheveryinchheascended,hishandsachedunbearably,andsweatstreameddownhisface.Fearcreptinashegothigher,yetitwasthebook,theveryonethathismotherusedtoreadtohim,thatkepthimmotivated.Justwhenhewasonthevergeofreachingit,hisfootslipped,anddownhetumbled,eyesclosedindespair,bracingfortheimpact.16升级版范文呈现Downtothegroundwiththebook,heturnedaroundtoseewhotheallywas.Itwashisfather,whosestrongarmscaughthiminthenickoftime.Hisfather,whohadbeenseeminglyengrossedinwork,hadactuallybeenwatchingoverhimallalong.OnlythendidGalenrealizehowmuchhisfathercared.Holdingthebookclose,Galenfeltasenseofc