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高考英语读后续写语篇练习手帕投掷比赛中的创意火花1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文I’vespentmyadultlifeasacollegeprofessorteachingpeoplehowtothinkmorecreativelyandusemoreoftheirbrainpower.Interestingly,thislifetimepassionwasawakenedbyacasualcontestwhenIwasachild.Atafamilypicnicforemployeesofthecompanywheremyfatherworked,theyheldahandkerchief-throwingcontestforthechildren.Iwas13,fullofenthusiasmandthespiritofcompetition,soIthrewmyselfintothecontest,whichIrealizenowwasnotmeanttodemonstrateanyrealskill,butsimplyforlaughs.Butitsparkedmyloveofthinkingoutsidethebox.4续写原文Theemcee(主持人)gaveeachchildaclothhandkerchiefandtoldusthewinnerwouldbetheonewhothrewitthefarthest.Thefirstthrowers,thelittleones,tookmightywind-ups,butwhentheclothlefttheirhands,itopenedandflutteredtothegroundafewinchesinfrontofthem.Thenextkidsthrewharderandharder,butwithnobetterresults.Thecrowdroaredwithlaughter,andbeing13,Ididn’tlikeadultslaughingatus.Theolderthechildren,themorethecrowdlaughedattheresults.5续写原文Itwasobviousthatusingthesametechniquewouldnotwork.SupposeItiedarockinsidethehandkerchief?No,itwas“throwahandkerchief,”notarockandahandkerchief.Whentheyinspectedit,I’dbedisqualified.IfIknewanythingaboutadults,itwasthattheylivedbyrules.Andtheylovedtoseizeachildwhobrokethem.Soitirritatedmetoseethekidsthrowingharder,butstillwithoutbetterresults.Thesecretwasnottothrowharderbuttokeeptheclothfromopening.SupposeIhidarockintheclothwithouttyingit.Therockwoulddrivetheclothatleastfartherthantheothers,andwhentheyseparated,peoplemightnotnoticeasmallrocklandinginthegrass.Ihadagoodchanceofgettingawaywithit,butIdidn’twanttowinbycheating.WhatIreallywantedtodowasshowthemthatakidcouldbeatthemattheirowngame.Ihadtomakethehandkerchiefflylikearock.Likearock!Thatwasit!6段首句Paragraph1:Ibegantyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitsmallandfirmlypacked,likearock.Paragraph2:Beforetheemceefoundmyhandkerchief,amansaid,“Hemusthavecheated.”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了身为大学教授的“我”,对激发创造力的热情源于童年一场手帕投掷比赛。在父亲公司的家庭野餐中,孩子们参与该比赛,目标是把手帕扔得最远。小选手们用力投掷,手帕却都飘落近处,引得大人哄笑。“我”深知常规方法无用,又不愿作弊,在思考如何让手帕像石头般飞行的过程中,开启了创新思维。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Ibegantyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitsmallandfirmlypacked,likearock.我全神贯注地把手中的手帕一圈又一圈地缠绕起来,一心想让它变得像石头那般坚硬、紧实。我的眼神始终聚焦在手帕上,手指灵活地穿梭其中,每一个步骤都做得极为细致。在众人疑惑的目光下,我手中原本柔软的手帕逐渐变成了一个坚硬的小团。准备就绪后,我大步走到投掷线前,双脚稳稳站立,深吸一口气,感受着周围的目光。接着,我将手臂高高扬起,借助身体扭转的力量,像投出一颗炮弹似的,用尽全身力气把手帕扔了出去。只见手帕如同一道黑色的闪电,在空中快速划过,径直朝着远处飞去,瞬间超越了之前所有人的投掷距离。人群中先是一片寂静,紧接着爆发出一阵惊叹声。11续写思路分析Para2:Beforetheemceefoundmyhandkerchief,amansaid,“Hemusthavecheated.”就在主持人还没走到手帕落地的位置时,突然有个男人大声叫嚷道:“这孩子肯定作弊了!”这话一出口,我的心瞬间揪紧,委屈和愤怒涌上心头。我立刻大声反驳:“我没有作弊!我靠的是自己的智慧!”此时,现场气氛变得紧张起来。好在主持人很快捡起手帕,仔细检查了一番,发现并无异常。随后,主持人向大家展示了手帕,并郑重宣布我是比赛的获胜者。人群中爆发出热烈的掌声,那些之前怀疑我的人也纷纷露出了赞许的目光。我站在原地,脸上洋溢着自豪的笑容。这场比赛让我深刻认识到,创新思维能带来意想不到的成果,也坚定了我未来探索创新的决心。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Iconcentratedontyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitasfirmandcompactasarock.Myeyeswerefixedonthehandkerchief,andmyfingersmovednimbly.Underthepuzzledeyesofthecrowd,thesofthandkerchiefinmyhandgraduallyturnedintoahardball.Aftergettingready,Iwalkedfirmlytothethrowingline,standingsteadilywithmyfeet.Takingadeepbreath,Iraisedmyarmhigh,andwiththepowerofmybodytwisting,Ithrewthehandkerchiefoutwithallmystrengthasifitwereacannonball.Thehandkerchiefflewthroughtheairlikeaboltofblacklightning,headingstraightforthedistanceandinstantlysurpassingthethrowingdistancesofallthepreviouscompetitors.Therewasamomentofsilenceinthecrowd,followedbyaburstofexclamations.14范文呈现Beforetheemceereachedtheplacewherethehandkerchieflanded,amansuddenlyshouted,"Hemusthavecheated!"Assoonasthesewordswerespoken,myhearttightened,andasenseofgrievanceandangerwelledupinsideme.Iimmediatelyretortedloudly,"Ididn'tcheat!Ireliedonmyownwisdom!"Atthismoment,theatmosphereatthescenebecametense.Fortunately,theemceequicklypickedupthehandkerchiefandinspecteditcarefully,findingnothingwrong.Then,theemceeshowedthehandkerchieftoeveryoneandsolemnlyannouncedthatIwasthewinnerofthecompetition.Thecrowdburstintowarmapplause,andthosewhohaddoubtedmebeforealsocastapprovingglances.Standingthere,Iworeaproudsmileonmyface.Thiscompetitionmademedeeplyrealizethatinnovativethinkingcanbringunexpectedresultsandstrengthenedmydeterminationtoexploreinnovationinthefuture.15升级版范文呈现Imeticulouslysetabouttyingthehandkerchiefarounditself,aimingtotransformitintoaformasrigidandcompactasarock.Withmygazeintentlyfixedonthefabric,myfingersdanceddeftly,knottingandtwistingwithprecision.Amidtheperplexedstaresoftheonlookers,theonce-softhandkerchiefinmygraspmetamorphosedintoadenseprojectile.Prepared,Istroderesolutelytothethrowingline,feetplantedfirmly,apictureofdetermination.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Iarchedmyarmskyward,andwithapowerfultwistofmytorso,unleashedthehandkerchiefwiththeforceofacatapult.Ithurtledthroughtheairlikeastreakofblacklightning,slicingthroughtheatmosphereandsoaringfarbeyondthereachesofanypreviousthrow.Ahushfelloverthecrowd,followedbyaneruptionofgaspsandmurmursofastonishment.16升级版范文呈现Beforetheemceecouldreachthelandingspotofthehandkerchief,aman'svoice,lacedwithsuspicion,piercedtheair:"Hemusthavecheated!"Instantly,myheartlurched,andawaveofindignationsurgedwithinme.Ishotbackdefiantly,voiceringingclear,"Icheatednot!Itwasmywitsthatwontheday!"The
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