高考英语复习读后续写练习：为妹奔跑：汤姆的鞋之征程

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为妹奔跑：汤姆的鞋之征程1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Tomandhisyoungersister,Jane,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks(紧盯着他们).Oneday,TomtookJane’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.4续写原文JaneagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareTom’srunningshoes.Jane’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoTom.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Tomoftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Tomheardaboutalong-distanceracethatwouldbeheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.5续写原文Thedayofracearrived.Tomhadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofJaneandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withTomfrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.6段首句Paragraph1：Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragraph2：Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9汤姆和妹妹简家境贫寒，母亲生病，父亲难找工作，还面临房租压力。汤姆弄丢简的鞋后，两人只能共用他的跑鞋。为给简赢双新鞋，汤姆决定参加长跑比赛，因为三等奖是新鞋。比赛当天，他起初状态不错，但中途体力不支，后来还被撞倒。然而，他一心想着对妹妹的承诺，努力追赶。最后他带着奖品新鞋开心回家，体现了他对妹妹的关爱。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.汤姆抬头看到其他男孩飞速向前冲去。他心中一阵慌乱，妹妹期待的眼神在他脑海中一闪而过，那是他绝不能辜负的。他咬着牙，双手撑地，不顾膝盖和手掌的擦伤，猛地站起身来。双腿的疼痛如潮水般涌来，但他深吸一口气，紧追不舍。他的眼神中透露出无比的坚定，每一步都踏得用力而坚决。汗水湿透了他的衣衫，顺着脸颊不断滑落。他超过了一个又一个选手，距离前三名越来越近。此时，他的体力已接近极限，但他凭借着顽强的意志，依然在奋力拼搏。11续写思路分析Para2：Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.满心欢喜的汤姆一刻也没耽搁，踏上了回家的路。一路上，他紧紧抱着那双新鞋，仿佛抱着世间最珍贵的宝贝。他想象着妹妹看到新鞋时惊喜的模样，嘴角不自觉地上扬。到家后，他迫不及待地冲进家门，大喊着妹妹的名字。简从屋里跑出来，看到汤姆手中的新鞋，眼中闪烁着激动的泪花。她接过鞋子，轻轻地抚摸着，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。汤姆看着妹妹开心的样子，心中所有的疲惫都烟消云散。一家人围过来，虽然生活依旧艰难，但此刻，幸福的气息弥漫在整个房间。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Panicfilledhisheartashethoughtofhissister'sdisappointedfaceifhefailed.Withouthesitation,hequicklygotupfromtheground,ignoringthepaininhiskneesandhands.Hegrittedhisteethandpushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight.Hislegswereaching,andhewasbreathingheavily,butherefusedtogiveup.Witheverystep,hewasgettingclosertotherunnersinfrontofhim.Hepassedonerunnerafteranother,hiseyesfixedonthetopthreepositions.Despitehisexhaustion,hesummonedallhisstrengthandkeptrunning.14范文呈现Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.Heheldthenewpairofshoestightlyinhisarms,asiftheywerethemostprecioustreasureintheworld.Hecouldn'twaittoseethejoyonhissister'sfacewhenshesawtheshoes.Whenhearrivedhome,herushedintothehouseandcalledouthissister'sname.Janecameoutoftheroomandhereyeswidenedwithexcitementwhenshesawthenewshoes.ShetooktheshoesfromTom'shandsandstrokedthemgently,herfacebeamingwithhappiness.Tomlookedathissister'sdelightedexpressionandfeltallhistirednessfadeaway.Theirparentscameover,andalthoughlifewasstilltough,theroomwasfilledwiththewarmthofhappiness.15升级版范文呈现Tomlookedup,onlytobeholdtheotherboysdashingforward.Panicsurgedwithinhim,forheenvisionedhissister'screstfallenvisageshouldhefallshort.Withouttheslightesthesitation,hesprangtohisfeet,heedlessofthepaininhiskneesandpalms.Grittinghisteeth,hepropelledhimselfforwardwitheveryounceofhisstrength.Hislegsthrobbedpainfully,andhisbreathcameinraggedgasps,yethewasadamantinhisrefusaltoyield.Witheachstride,heclosedinontherunnersahead.Onebyone,heovertookthem,hisgazeintentlyfixedonthetopthreespots.Despitebeingonthevergeofcollapse,hesummonedeverylastbitofhisenergyandpressedon.16升级版范文呈现Filledwithsheerdelight,Tomhastenedhomewithoutamoment'sdelay.Clutchingthenewpairofshoestightly,asiftheywerethemostpricelessoftreasures,hecouldscarcelycontainhiseagernesstowitnessthejoyilluminatinghissister'sfaceuponseeingthem.Uponreachinghome,heburstintothehouse,shoutinghissister'sname.Janeemergedfromtheroom,andhereyeswidenedinexcitementatthesightofthenewshoes.TakingthemfromTom'shands,shecaressedthemtenderly,herfaceradiatinghappiness.Tom,observinghissister'sela