高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：妈妈的慈善罐传递爱与温暖

高考英语读后续写语篇练习妈妈的慈善罐，传递爱与温暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ialwaysthinkofmymotherasasuperhero,becausesheneverrunsoutofroominherheartforanyoneoranything.Icouldwriteaboutallofthewonderfulthingsshehasdone,butIwanttofocusononeprojectshedoeseveryyearthathasshapedmywholefamilyandeveryonearoundus:Shesavesmoney,andsheputsitinalittlejar(罐子)thatwerefertoas“TheCharityJar”.Everyyear,shetakesthismoneyandputsittowardsomething—anactofkindness,anythingthatcanhelpsomeone.Sometimes,shebuyssomethingforanorganizationthatneedsit.Ifyouaskheraboutthistradition,shewilltellyouthatsheiscarryingonsomethingthathermotherusedtodoaroundtheholidays.Ifyouaskanyoneelsewhoknowsher,however,theywilltellyouthatshehasahugeheart.Shemanagestogetourwholefamilyinvolved(参与)inthismovementeveryyear.Lastyear,shehelpedanorganizationwhereIvolunteered—Ruth’sPlace—ahomelesswomen’sshelterinWilkes-Barre,Pennsylvania.4续写原文IhadbeenhelpingaprofessorrunawritingworkshopintheshelterwhenInoticedthewishlistonthewall:warmclothes,acoffeemakerandsupplies.Itoldmymom,andwithinaday,shehadalreadyaskedifourfamilywantedtohelpRuth’sPlace.Weallagreedanddecidedthatthecoffeemakerandsupplieswouldbethebestthingsforourfamilytoworkontogether.Afewdayslater,Momfoundacoffeemakeronline,andshowedittous.Withafewclicks,itwasonitsway.Shealsobaked(烘焙)freshchocolatecupcakesforthewomenintheshelter.Wegatheredtherestofthesuppliesandcalledthesheltertofindadaywhenwecoulddeliverthem.5段首句Paragraph1：ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.Paragraph2：Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8“我”视妈妈为超级英雄，她每年都有个特别的传统——将攒下的钱放进“慈善罐”，用于帮助他人。这一传统源于外婆。去年，“我”在一家为无家可归女性设立的庇护所做志愿者，向妈妈提及那里的愿望清单。妈妈很快组织全家参与，购买了咖啡机等物资，并烤制了巧克力纸杯蛋糕，准备送去庇护所。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.那天，我小心翼翼地开车载着妈妈前往庇护所，心里既兴奋又紧张。一路上，妈妈不停地念叨着希望这些东西能给大家带来帮助。到达后，工作人员热情地迎了上来，妈妈满脸笑容，亲切地和他们打招呼。紧接着，我们开始搬运物资。妈妈把咖啡机搬到屋内，详细地向工作人员介绍它的功能和使用方法，还不时询问他们是否还有其他需求。随后，妈妈又将香喷喷的巧克力纸杯蛋糕端给庇护所的女士们，她们围拢过来，眼中满是惊喜与感动。妈妈拉着她们的手，关切地询问她们的生活状况，现场充满了温馨。10续写思路分析Para2：Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.离开时，我们收获了满满的感激。女士们和工作人员纷纷走上前来，真诚地向我们道谢。一位女士含着泪说，这些物资和蛋糕让她们感受到了久违的温暖。工作人员也表示，我们的帮助对庇护所意义重大。听着这些真挚的话语，我和妈妈都深受触动。妈妈对我说，帮助他人能收获最纯粹的快乐。这次经历让我深刻理解了妈妈的善举，我暗下决心，以后也要像妈妈一样，用自己的力量去帮助更多的人，将这份爱传递下去。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.Iwasbothexcitedandnervousontheway.Momkeptsayingthatshehopedthesethingscouldbringhelptoeveryone.Whenwearrived,thestaffgreeteduswarmly.Momhadabigsmileonherfaceandgreetedthemaffectionately.Thenwestartedtocarrythesupplies.Momcarriedthecoffeemakerintotheroomandintroduceditsfunctionsandusagemethodstothestaffindetail.Shealsoaskedthemfromtimetotimeiftheyhadanyotherneeds.Afterthat,Mombroughtthefragrantchocolatecupcakestothewomenintheshelter.Theygatheredaround,withsurpriseandgratitudeintheireyes.Momtooktheirhandsandaskedthemabouttheirlivingconditionswithconcern.Thescenewasfullofwarmth.13范文呈现Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.Thewomenandthestaffcameuptousonebyoneandthankedussincerely.Awomansaidwithtearsinhereyesthatthesesuppliesandcupcakesmadethemfeelthelong-lostwarmth.Thestaffalsosaidthatourhelpwasofgreatsignificancetotheshelter.Hearingthesesincerewords,mymomandIweredeeplytouched.Momsaidtomethathelpingotherscouldbringthepuresthappiness.Thisexperiencemademedeeplyunderstandmymom'skindness.Isecretlymadeupmymindthatinthefuture,Iwouldalsousemyownstrengthtohelpmorepeople,justlikemymom,andpassonthislove.14升级版范文呈现ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterataleisurelypace,myheartbrimmingwithablendofexcitementandnervousanticipation.Throughoutthejourney,Momincessantlyexpressedherhopethattheitemswewerebringingwouldbringmuch-neededassistancetothoseattheshelter.Uponourarrival,thestaffwelcomeduswithopenarms,andMom,wearingaradiantsmile,greetedthemwithgenuinewarmth.Withoutdelay,wesetaboutunloadingthesupplies.Momcarefullycarriedthecoffeemakerintothebuildingandmeticulouslyexplaineditsfunctionsandoperationtothestaff,pausingperiodicallytoinquireiftheyhadanyadditionalrequirements.Subsequently,shepresentedthefreshly-bakedchocolatecupcakestothewomenintheshelter.Drawnbytheenticingaroma,theygatheredaround,theireyeswidewithsurpriseandgratitude.Mom,takingeachwoman'shandinhers,engagedinaheartfeltconversation,showingdeepconcernfortheirlivingconditions.Theentirescenewassuffusedwithwarmth.15升级版范文呈现Aswepreparedtoleave,achorusofheartfeltthanksensued.Thewomenandthestaffapproachedusonebyone,expressingtheirgratitudewithutmostsincerity.Onewoman,hereyesglisteningwithtears,sharedthatthesuppliesandcupcakeshadrekindledasenseofwarmththeyha