高考英语复习读后续写练习：伦敦马拉松的暖心互助时刻+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习伦敦马拉松的暖心互助时刻1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Trainingforamarathonisoneofthemostphysicallydemandingactivitiesyoucanwillinglyputyourselfthrough.Andwhentheracedayfinallycomesaftermonthsoftrainingandhoursspentrunningontheplaygroundyouwanttofinishtheracewell.Butsometimes,thatjustdoesn’thappen.Awarmmomenthappenedamongthreerunners,andwiththehelpoftwootherrunners,therewasarunnerwhoreachedthefinishlineandfinishedtherace.It’sreportedthatthethreerunnersdidn’tknoweachotherbeforetherace.4续写原文Thatmomenthappenedatthe203LondonMarathon.ArunnernamedLouisexperiencedthisasheworkedhiswaytowardstheendoftherace.Themanbegantodoubleover(弯腰)andwasontheedgeofcollapsing(昏倒)asotherrunnerspassedby.Clearly,hewastootiredtofinishtherace.Butitwasonly200metersleft.Andhemightfalltothegroundatanytime.Sotired,Louisfelltothegroundandlookedwhiteandupset.Atthatmoment,arunnersawLouiswhoneededhelp,sotherunnerrantohimandpickedhimup.“AreyouOK?”therunneraskedLouis.“Iamtootiredtokeeprunning,”Louisreplied.“Comeon!Letmesupportyoutothefinishline200metersaway,”therunnersaidandgrabbedhisarm.5续写原文“Itisverykindofyou,”Louissaidhappily.Withthehelpoftherunner,therewereonly150metersawayfromthefinishline.Butitseemedthathecouldn’tholdLouissteadyenough,Louiswasinabadconditionandwouldfalltothegroundatanytime.Therunnerwasveryanxiousandwatchedhelplesslyasotherrunnersrantothefinishline,notknowingwhattodo.AlthoughtherunnertriedhisbesttosupportLouissteady,Louisfelltothegroundagain.6段首句Paragraph1：Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.Paragraph2Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9马拉松训练极为艰苦，选手都渴望在比赛中顺利完赛。在2023年伦敦马拉松赛上，选手路易斯临近终点时体力不支，几近昏倒。此时一名选手发现后，主动上前搀扶，助他前行。然而，只剩150米时，因一人难以支撑，路易斯再次摔倒。就在这关键时刻，另一名选手及时出现，一场感人的互助接力就此展开。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.就在这时，另一名选手从路易斯身后赶来。他看到路易斯摔倒在地，以及旁边那名满脸焦急的选手，立刻明白发生了什么。没有丝毫犹豫，他迅速跑到路易斯身旁，蹲下身子，一只手穿过路易斯的腋下，用力将他扶起。然后对另一位帮忙的选手说：“我们一起，一定能把他送到终点！”两人分别在路易斯两侧，紧紧搀扶着他，一步一步向前挪动。尽管路易斯身体沉重，脚步踉跄，但他们三人的眼神中都透着坚定，一心朝着终点前进。11续写思路分析Para2：Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.在两名选手的帮助下，路易斯终于抵达了终点线。冲线的那一刻，全场观众爆发出热烈的掌声和欢呼声。路易斯虽疲惫不堪，却满脸感激，他对两位帮助他的选手说道：“没有你们，我不可能完成比赛，太感谢了！”两位选手笑着回应：“这是我们应该做的，大家都是为了完成这场挑战。”这场马拉松比赛，不仅是体力的较量，更是人性善良与互助精神的体现，而这温暖的一幕，也将永远留在人们的记忆中。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.HesawLouislyingonthegroundandthefirstrunnerlookinganxious.Withoutthinkingtwice,herantowardsthemquickly.KneelingdownbesideLouis,heputhisarmaroundLouis'sshoulderandsaid,"Don'tworry.I'mheretohelp."Then,heandthefirstrunnerstoodoneithersideofLouis,firmlysupportinghim.TheyencouragedLouiswithkindwordsandslowlymovedforwardstepbystep.AlthoughLouiswasextremelyweakandcouldbarelymovehislegs,thethreeofthemweredeterminedtoreachthefinishlinetogether.14范文呈现Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.Astheycrossedtheline,thecrowderuptedintoapplauseandcheers.Louis,exhaustedbutgrateful,turnedtothetworunnersandsaid,"Icouldn'thavemadeitwithoutyou.Thankyousomuch!"Thetworunnerssmiledandreplied,"It'swhatweshoulddo.Weareallheretocompletethischallenge."Thismarathonracewasnotonlyatestofphysicalstrengthbutalsoashowcaseofthekindnessandmutualassistanceamongpeople.Thiswarmmomentwouldbeengravedineveryone'smemoryforever.15升级版范文呈现Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.SpottingLouislyinghelplesslyonthegroundandthefirstrunnerindistress,thisnew-comerrushedoverwithouthesitation.KneelingdownbesideLouis,hefirmlyputhisarmaroundLouis'sshoulder,saying,"Holdon!I'mheretogiveyouahand."Then,shoulder-to-shoulderwiththefirsthelper,theyflankedLouis,lendinghimstrongsupport.Withwordsofencouragement,theyinchedforward,stepbystep.DespiteLouis'sextremeweakness,theirdeterminationwasunwavering,astheywereallsetonreachingthefinishlinetogether.16升级版范文呈现Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.Astheycrossedthatsignificantline,theon-lookingcrowderuptedintothunderousapplauseandcheers.Exhaustedyetfilledwithgratitude,Louisturnedtohistwosaviorsandsaid,"Itwasyoutwowhomadethispossible.Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart!"Smiling,thetworunnersreplied,"It'ssimplywhatrunnersdoforeachother.We'reallinthischallengetogether."Thismarathonwasn'tmerelyatestofphys