读后续写+困境中的双向奔赴：善良从不缺席+讲义 高一上学期1月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TomYoungwasonhiswayhomefromahardday’sworkataconstructionsite,carryinghisworn-outhammerwhichhadaccompaniedhimthroughthickandthin.Witheachstep,hismindwasfilledwithworryasherackedhisbraintofindmoneyforhisseriouslyillson,Andrew,whowasingreatneedofheartsurgery.Tomhadrunoutofchoicesandtime.Desperationwasbeginningtosetin,butherefusedtolethissonsufferhelplessly.Ashewalked,theweightofhistroublespressedheavilyonhisshoulders.Sodesperatewashethatheevenheardahuminhisears.Thenextmomentthehumwasentirelycoveredbyaloudsound.Heturnedinshock,andwhathesawtookhisbreathaway.Anexpensiveluxurycarwaswrappedaroundabigtreeontheothersideofthestreet,withitsfronttwistedandflamesstartingtospringupfromthecar.Withoutasecondthought,herantotheflamingcar.Henoticedthatalthoughtheyoungladyinthedriver’sseatdidnotseemtohavebeenseverelyinjured-apparentlybecauseoftheopenairbag-shewasunconscious.Tomsawthattheflamesbegantogrowincreasinglyintense.Herealizedthathehadtogetthegirloutofthecarimmediatelybecausetherewasahighriskofthevehicleexplodingatanytime.Hegrabbedthehandleandpulledit,butthedoorwasbentanddidnotopen.Heusedallhisstrengthandtriedagain,butinvain.Itwasasportscar,soithadonlytwodoors,andtheotheronewasblockedbythetree.Hedecidedthathehadtobreaktheglasstotakeheroutasquicklyaspossible.Hestruckitforcefullywithhisfistbutrealizedthattherewasnowayhecouldbreakthethickglasswithbarehands,andtheflamesweregettingbigger.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Tom在建筑工地上辛苦工作一天后回家，满脑子都是为重病儿子凑钱做心脏手术的事。途中，他看到一辆豪车撞到树上起火，车里的年轻女士虽未受重伤，但昏迷不醒。车门因变形打不开，车窗玻璃又太厚，他徒手无法打破，火势却越来越大，情况十分危急。故事山分析开端：Tom结束一天工作回家，满心忧虑为儿子凑手术费，这是他面临的困境，也是故事的背景。发展：Tom看到车祸，决定救人，尝试打开车门和打破车窗玻璃，却都遭遇阻碍，火势加剧，救援陷入僵局。高潮：时间紧迫，Tom急需找到解决办法救出女孩，这是故事的紧张点，也是续写的关键起始点。结局（待续写）：通过Tom成功救出女孩以及女孩得知Tom困境后的回应，展现善良与感恩的主题，构成故事结局。伏笔以及在续写中的回应Tom为儿子凑手术费的困境：为后文女孩得知他的困难并提供帮助埋下伏笔，在续写中，女孩会因感恩Tom的救命之恩，利用自己的资源帮助他解决经济难题。豪车撞到树上起火：引出Tom的救援行动，在续写中，救援成功后，这起事故会成为女孩了解Tom的契机，通过新闻报道等方式得知他的困境。车门变形打不开，车窗玻璃厚：设置救援困难，在续写中，Tom会想出办法克服这些困难，成功救出女孩，凸显他的勇敢和智慧。女孩昏迷：让Tom的救援行动更加紧迫，在续写中，女孩苏醒后会对Tom充满感激，进而关注他的生活状况。火势越来越大：增加救援的紧张感，在续写中，Tom会在火势威胁下成功完成救援，体现他的果断和勇敢，也为女孩的感恩埋下伏笔。续写要点（两段）第一段：着重描写Tom在危急时刻的心理活动，他焦急万分，拼命思考解决办法。最终，他想到用自己的锤子打破车窗玻璃，详细描述他用锤子砸玻璃的过程，如他紧握锤子，用尽全身力气，一下又一下地砸向玻璃，玻璃终于出现裂痕，直至破碎，他成功将女孩救出。第二段：描述女孩从当地新闻得知Tom的困境后的反应，她深受感动，决定帮助Tom。可以写她联系自己的家人或朋友，筹集资金，或者利用自己的社会关系为Tom提供帮助。最后，Tom得到了帮助，儿子顺利进行手术，他对女孩充满感激，两人的故事成为一段佳话。情感线起初，Tom因儿子的病情陷入极度焦虑和绝望，为凑钱而苦恼。看到车祸时，他的担忧转化为救人的急切。救援过程中，他紧张又坚定，一心只想救出女孩。成功救出女孩后，他的心情稍缓。当女孩得知他的困境并提供帮助时，Tom从绝望中看到希望，心中满是感激。女孩则从被救的感恩，转变为主动帮助恩人的热心，两人的情感在善良与感恩中交织升华。故事线Tom工作一天后回家，为儿子的心脏手术费发愁。Tom看到豪车撞树起火，决定救人。Tom尝试打开车门和打破车窗玻璃，都未成功，火势加剧。Tom用锤子打破车窗玻璃，成功救出女孩。女孩从当地新闻得知Tom的困境。女孩帮助Tom，Tom的儿子顺利进行手术。主旨升华句Thisstoryshowsthatinthefaceofdifficulties,ourkindnessandcouragecannotonlysaveothersbutalsobringunexpectedrewards,andthatthebondofgratitudecanbridgethegapsbetweenpeople.（这个故事表明，在困难面前，我们的善良和勇气不仅能拯救他人，还能带来意想不到的回报，感恩的纽带可以弥合人与人之间的差距。）ThroughTom'sactofselflessrescueandthegirl'sreturnofkindness,welearnthatthepowerofcompassionhasnolimits,andthatasimpleactofkindnesscanstartabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.（通过Tom的无私救援和女孩的感恩回报，我们了解到，同情的力量是无限的，一个简单的善举可以开启一个美好的给予与接受的循环。）TheencounterbetweenTomandthegirlprovesthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,hopecanemergefromthemostunexpectedplaces,andthatthekindnessinourheartscanbeaguidinglightforothers.（Tom和女孩的相遇证明，即使在最绝望的情况下，希望也能从最意想不到的地方出现，我们心中的善良可以成为他人的指路明灯。）Thisheartwarmingstoryremindsusthathelpingothersisnotonlyaboutofferingahandintimesofneedbutalsoaboutcreatingacommunitywhereloveandkindnessarepassedonfromonepersontoanother.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，帮助他人不仅是在需要时伸出援手，更是营造一个爱与善良在人与人之间传递的社区。）ThejourneyofTomandthegirlfromalife-threateningaccidenttoaheart-warmingactofmutualhelpdemonstratesthatthetruevalueoflifeliesinourabilitytocareforothersandmakeapositiveimpactontheirlives.（Tom和女孩从一场危及生命的事故到一次暖心的互助行为的历程表明，生命的真正价值在于我们关心他人并对他们的生活产生积极影响的能力。）写作示范一Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Suddenly,herememberedthehammerinhishand.Withouthesitation,heraisedithighandstrucktheglasswithallhismight.Thefirstblowmadeasmallcrack,andwithafewmorepowerfulstrikes,theglassfinallyshattered.Hequicklyreachedinside,unbuckledthegirl'sseatbelt,andcarriedhertoasafedistance.Justastheygotaway,thecarexplodedintoaballoffire.ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews.Sheimmediatelycalledherwealthyfatherandtoldhimthewholestory.HerfatherwasdeeplymovedbyTom'sheroicact.TheydecidedtocoverallthemedicalexpensesforTom'sson.WhenTomreceivedthenews,hewasfilledwithgratitudeandrelief.Hisson'slifewassaved,allthankstohisownkindnessandthegirl'sgenerosity.写作示范二Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Helookedaroundfranticallyforsomethingtobreaktheglass.Thenhespottedalargerocknearby.Herushedtopickitupandranbacktothecar.Withaloudshout,hesmashedtherockagainsttheglass.Afterseveralattempts,theglassfinallygaveway.Hepulledtheunconsciousgirloutofthecarjustastheflamesengulfedtheentirevehicle.ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews.SheusedhersocialmediainfluencetostartafundraisingcampaignforTom.ThousandsofpeopleweretouchedbyTom'sstoryanddonatedmoney.Inashorttime,enoughmoneywasraisedforAndrew'ssurgery.Tomwasoverwhelmedwithjoyandgratitude.Hecouldn'tbelievethathisactofkindnesshadbroughtsuchawonderfuloutcome.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Inamomentofclarity,Tomrememberedtheworn-outhammerinhishand.Ithadbeenareliablecompanionthroughcountlessdaysoflabor,andnowitwashisonlyhope.Withadeterminedswing,hesmashedthehammeragainstthewindow,shatteringtheglasswithaloudcrash.Carefully,hereachedintothevehicle,avoidingthejaggededges,andunbuckledtheunconsciousyounglady.Withallhisstrength,hepulledherout,draggingherasafedistancefromthecarjustastheflamesroaredfiercely,engulfingthevehicleinafierybl