Module 6 Around town-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期模块话题满分写作（外研版）

2021-2022七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作Module6:Aroundtown单元话题：描述路线范文1观察下面的地图，假如你的朋友Jack在图中的箭头处，他想去机场接他的叔叔，但是他不认识路。请你根据地图用英语给他指出去机场的两条路线。要求思路清晰、表达正确，不少于60词。提示：straight笔直地________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jack,there’retwowaystotheairport.Thefirstoneis:goalongHuayuanRoadandturnleftintoZhongshanStreetwhenyouseeacinema.Gostraightandyou’llseetheairportonyourright.Thesecondoneis:walkalongHuayuanRoadandturnleftintoDaqingStreet.GostraightandthenturnrightintoPing’anRoad.Gopastthelibraryandyoucanseetheairport.这是一篇看图作文，根据地图用英语给杰克指出去机场的两条路线。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Thefirstoneis:……，Gostraightand……，Gopast……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了有两条去往机场的路，接下来介绍第一条路线，最后介绍第二条路线。此处goalong,turnleft,gostraight,onone’sright,turnright,gopast等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。范文22．来自英国的Mike和他的父母来滨江旅游，当他父母在友谊宾馆休息时，Mike独自上街游览，结果在民生街迷路。后来Mike在他父亲短信的指引下安全返回。请根据以下提示内容还原短信，60词左右。提示内容：1.沿民生街走，在第三个路口向右转至东风路；2.沿东风路走，在第二个路口向左转至健康街；3.沿健康街走大约5分钟，就看到在左边的友谊宾馆。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hey,Mike!Nowyou'reonMinshengStreet.Goalongthisstreetandturnrightatthethirdcrossing.ThenyouareonDongfengRoad.WalkalongDongfengRoadandturnleftatthesecondcrossing.AfterthatyouareonJiankangStreet.WalkforaboutfiveminutesalongthisstreetandyouwillseeYouyiHotelonyourleft.Youcan'tmissit.【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你以Mike父亲的身份给在民生街迷路的Mike发一条短信，指引Mike安全返回友谊宾馆。例文点评：本文主要采用第二人称展开叙述，时态以一般现在时为主。因为是指示性的语言，所以多用祈使句。文章按提示内容详细指导了对方该怎么走。文章条理清晰，语言精炼。高分亮点：短语：goalong；walkalong；turnleft/rightatthe+序数词+crossing；onone’sleft/right。句型：①Goalongthisstreetandturnrightatthethirdcrossing.②Youcan'tmissit.范文33．假设你叫李华，下星期六是你的生日。你准备在家开一个生日晚会，并邀请部分同学和朋友参加。晚会7：30开始。你家住在南京路70号，乘1路或34路公共汽车在人民路站下车。你家就在车站的对面。房子是红色的，门是白色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息，给你的好友林莉写一封不少于50字的信。要点：1．邀请她参加晚会；

2．晚会的时间和地点；3．你的地址；

4．如何到达；

5．你很希望她来。注意：信的内容必须包括以上要点，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。（信的格式及句首已给出）70NanjiangRoadJune22,2002DearLinLi,NextSaturdayismybirthday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】0nepossibleversionsDearLinlitNextSaturdayismybirthday.I’mgoingtoholdabirth­daypartyathomeintheevening.Itwillstartat7:30.Wouldyouliketocome?I’vealsoaskedsomeotherclassmatesofoursandsomeofmyfriends.Iliveat70NanjingRoad.YoucantakebusNo.1orNo.34,andgetoffatthestopofRenminRoad.Myhouseisjustontheothersideoftheroad.It’saredhousewithawhitedoor.Youcan’tmissit.Idohopeyouwillcome.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题考查书信的写作格式，属于比较容易的作文类型。文章要点已经给出，可以根据要点展开写作。写作过程中，注意语句要通顺，不要出现拼写错误，正确使用语法知识。范文44．根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。词数60～70左右。1．昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。2．在路上我遇到了一个外国人。3．他向我询问去温泉饭店(theHotSpringHotel)的路。4．我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。5．他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。提示词语：gooutforawalk,ontheroad,thewayto,walkalong,thankfor,behappythat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwentoutforawalkwithmymotheryesterdayevening.Ontheroad,wemetaforeigner.HewantedtogototheHotSpringHotel,buthedidn'tknowtheway.SoheaskedmetotellhimthewaytotheHotSpringHotel.Isaidtohim,“walkalongtheroad,andturnleftatthethirdturning,andyoucanseeit.”Hethankedmeforhelpinghim.IwasveryhappythatIcouldhelpothers.【解析】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，要表达我和妈妈去散步，帮一个外国人指路。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如gooutforawalk,with,asksbtodo,thewayto以及thanksbfor等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。范文55．你的英国好朋友Tony要来你的家乡做客，请你选择一个自己熟悉的景点，向他介绍一下参观路线以及沿途的大体风景。（敲黑板：对Tony来说，任何的公园，城市，甚至你们村都是新鲜的哦）要求：

1.词数在80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

Welcometoourhometown,Tony!Thisis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Welcometoourhometown,Tony!ThisisBeijing.Itisabeautifulplace.Ilikemyhometownbecausepeoplehereareveryfriendly.Andtherearemanyinterestingplaces,suchastheGreatWall,Bird’sNestandWaterCube.WearegoingtotheGreatWallthisafternoon.Ithasalonghistory.WewilltakethebustotheGreatWall.Duringtheway,wemayseemanybuildingsandabigpark.I’msureyouwilllikeBeijingandcomehereagain.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时应承接作文开头。第一段介绍自己的家乡；第二段讲解家乡的风景和游玩计划；第三段总结概述。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态用一般现在时为主，描述游玩计划时用一般将来时；介绍家乡的人和风景时要叙述完整。范文66．假如你是袁建，因你父母参与鄂州花湖机场建设，本学期你跟随其搬迁来鄂州。请你根据以下提示给你的英国笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他你的近况。提示：1.天气和穿着:hot，wet，T-shirt，shorts2.上学的路线：walkalong，turnleft，crossing3.新交的朋友：tall，shorthair，friendly要求：1.包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.内容连贯，逻辑通顺，表达清晰；3.60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearTom,Howareyou?NowletmetellyouaboutmylifeinEzhou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________