2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：十二岁生日梦想自行车终成真+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习十二岁生日，梦想自行车终成真1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thesunwasalreadybeginningtosink.Theairwassomewhatbitter.ItwasRobert’s12thbirthday.ButRobertwaswalkinghomealonewithhiseyesfocusingonhisworn-outshoes.Kidsafterschoolwereridingbyintwosandthrees,ringingtheirbicyclebellsmerrily.Robertdidn’traiseuphishead,butheknewclearlythatthoseguyswerewearingbigsmilesontheirfaces,andthatthestringsoftheirbikewheelswereshininginthegoldensunlight.“Howluckytheyare!”Robertthoughttohimself.Headmiredeveryonewhohadhisownbike.Hehaddreamedmanytimesthathewasoneofthosewhowereontheirbikestoandfromschool.Hereallywantedabike,especiallyasagiftforhis12thbirthday.However,Robertwasclearthathisfamilycouldn’taffordit.Hisparentsworkedhardonlytomeettheirdailylifeneed.Fortunately,thefamilylivedhappilytogetherregardlessofthepoorcondition.Robertshouldbesatisfiedwithit.Buthejustcouldn’thelpfeelingsadaboutnotbeingabletoownabike.4续写原文Soonthesundisappearedfromnowhereandthestreetlampswereon,castingRobert’sfigureontheground.Lookingdownathismovingshadow,Robertstoppedhisstepssuddenly.Hestretchedout(伸出)bothofhisarmswithhishandsholdingsomethingtightly,andthenraisedhisrightlegandleftleginturntopushhimselfforward.Definitely,thefigureonthegrounddidasRobertdid.Itseemedthathewasridingabike.Abrandnewblackhandsomebike!AbikethatRoberthadbeendreamingof.TheimaginationexcitedanddelightedRobertalot.Hespeduphisimaginarybiketowardshishomehappily.Theairbecamesweetandgentle.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Paragraph2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8在罗伯特12岁生日这天，他独自走在回家路上，看到其他孩子骑着自行车，心生羡慕。他渴望有一辆自行车作为生日礼物，可家庭贫困，父母无力购买。太阳下山，路灯亮起，他想象自己骑着崭新的黑色自行车，沉浸在喜悦中。回到家时，房子里漆黑一片，似乎没人在家。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.当罗伯特到家时，屋里黑漆漆的，好像没人在。他心里一阵失落，原本还期待着回家能看到温馨的生日布置，哪怕只是简单的烛光和父母的笑脸。他缓缓走进屋子，轻声呼唤着爸爸妈妈，回应他的只有自己的回声。就在这时，他注意到桌上有一张纸条，心猛地一紧，赶忙拿起纸条，上面写着：“儿子，去后院看看。”看到这几个字，他的心瞬间被好奇填满，顾不上换鞋，转身就朝着后院飞奔而去，脑海里不断浮现出各种可能的惊喜。10续写思路分析Para2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.罗伯特兴奋地冲进后院，却只看到一辆旧灰色的自行车。他的脚步猛地顿住，脸上的笑容瞬间消失，取而代之的是深深的失望。他呆呆地站在那里，心里五味杂陈。然而，当他走近自行车时，却发现了不一样的地方。车把上挂着一个崭新发亮的铃铛，车筐里装满了他最爱吃的零食，车座上还放着一张精心制作的卡片，上面写着：“亲爱的罗伯特，生日快乐！我们爱你。”就在这时，他的父母从树后走了出来，脸上带着温柔的笑容。罗伯特的眼眶瞬间湿润，泪水夺眶而出。他明白了，这辆承载着父母爱意的自行车，比任何崭新昂贵的车子都要珍贵。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Disappointmentfilledhisheart.Hehadsecretlyhopedforawarmbirthdaysurprisefromhisparents.Hewalkedintothehouseslowly,callingoutforhismomanddad,butonlyhisownvoiceechoedback.Then,henoticedanoteonthetable.Witharacingheart,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Curiosityoverwhelmedhim.Withoutbotheringtochangehisshoes,herushedtowardsthebackyard,hismindfilledwithallkindsofexcitingpossibilities.13范文呈现Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.Hisstepshaltedsuddenly,andthesmileonhisfacedisappeared,replacedbydeepdisappointment.Hestoodthere,feelingamixofemotions.However,ashegotclosertothebike,henoticedsomethingdifferent.Therewasashinynewbellonthehandlebars,abasketfilledwithhisfavoritesnacks,andahand-madecardontheseat,whichread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justthen,hisparentssteppedoutfrombehindatree,wearingwarmsmiles.Robert'seyeswelledupwithtears.Herealizedthatthisbike,fullofhisparents'love,wasmorepreciousthananybrand-newexpensiveone.14升级版范文呈现WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasplungedintodarkness,givingtheimpressionthatnobodywaspresent.Asenseofdisappointmentcreptintohisheart.Secretly,hehadbeenharbouringhopesofaheart-warmingbirthdaysurprisearrangedbyhisparents.Slowly,hemadehiswayintothehouse,callingoutforhismomanddad,yetonlytheechoofhisownvoicereverberatedthroughtheemptyrooms.Itwasthenthatanoteonthetablecaughthiseye.Hisheartpounding,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Overwhelmedbycuriosity,hedashedtowardsthebackyardwithoutevenpausingtochangehisshoes,hismindabuzzwithallsortsofthrillingpossibilities.15升级版范文呈现Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyard,onlytobegreetedbyanoldgraybike.Hisstepscametoanabrupthalt,andthesmilethathadadornedhisfacevanishedinaninstant,replacedbyprofounddisappointment.Standingthere,hewasengulfedbyacomplexmixofemotions.However,asheapproachedthebike,henoticedseveraldistinctivefeatures.Ashinynewbelladornedthehandlebars,abasketbrimmingwithhisfavoritesnackssatonthefront,andahand-craftedcardontheseatread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justatthatmoment,hisparentsemergedfrombehindatree,theirfaceswreathedinwarmsmiles.Robert'sey