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高考英语读后续写语篇练习生日惊喜中的道德抉择与坚守1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onmytwelfthbirthday,Idesiredashiningnewbicycle.However,consideringourfamily’sfinancialstruggle,Irealizedthatsuchabikewasmerelyanimpossibledream.Then,Idecidedtochooseanightstand(床头柜).Itseemedlikeasensiblechoice,asitwouldprovidemewithasafespacetostoremypersonalthings.Therefore,Irequestedmyparentsforanightstandequippedwithlockabledrawers.Wevisitedthesecond-handfurniturestoreandchanceduponanoldnightstandinadarkbrowncolor.Althoughitsappearancewasn’tattractive,ithaddrawersthatcouldbelocked.Idecidedtorepaintitinordertomakeitlookbetter.4续写原文Afterbringingithome,Ipreparedtopaintthenightstand.However,asIpulledoutthedrawers,Ifoundsomethingstucktothebackofthebottomdrawer.Curiousandeager,Ireacheddeepintothebackandwassurprisedtodiscoverabag.Uponopeningthebag,Idiscoveredseveralofficial-lookingpaperswithin,underwhichtherewasawad(沓)ofdollarbills!ImaginemysurprisewhenIfoundsuchatreasure,especiallyonmybirthday!Eagerly,Ireadthepapers,whichturnedoutawill.Acertainelderlywomanwasleavinghersavingstohersonandgrandchildren.Itmusthavebeenthatafterherpassingnooneknewofthemoney.Herfamilydonatedthenightstandtoasecond-handfurniturestore,andnowithasfounditswayintomyhand.5续写原文Icountedthemoneyandfoundittotaledover1,000dollars.Myheartwasracingwithexcitement.Withsuchalargeamount,Icouldbuythecoolestbicycle.Ievenhadenoughtobuybicyclesformyyoungerbrothers.PerhapsIcouldevensurprisemyparentswithacar.Whatadilemma!ShouldIkeepthemoneyanduseittobuyallkindsofthingsformyselfandmyfamily?OrshouldIreturnitall?“Somebodyhelpsmewiththis!”Ibegged.ButIknewIdidn’ttrulyneedanyonetogivemetheanswer.Ihadaclearsenseofrightandwrong.Idecidednottofailthistest.Itwasatestofmyvirtue.6段首句Paragraph1:IaskedmyfamilytocometomybedroomandshowedthemwhatI’dfound.Paragraph2:Theythreereachedthelinetogether,whowasthecrowdcheering?Theboywasconfused.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9十二岁生日时,因家庭经济困难,“我”放弃新自行车,选择二手床头柜。带回家准备重新粉刷时,在抽屉后发现装有遗嘱和一千多美元的袋子。面对这笔巨款,“我”陷入纠结,是用它满足家人的愿望,还是坚守道德底线归还。最终“我”决定通过家人支持寻找失主,一场归还失物的行动就此展开。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:IaskedmyfamilytocometomybedroomandshowedthemwhatI’dfound.我把家人叫到卧室,向他们展示了我发现的东西。家人们围拢过来,看着桌上的钱和遗嘱,脸上都露出了惊讶的神情。我详细地讲述了发现它们的经过,说完后,大家都陷入了沉默。过了一会儿,爸爸率先开口,他严肃地看着我,眼神中满是欣慰,表扬我做得对,并且强调这钱必须归还。妈妈也在一旁点头表示赞同,她说这是做人的基本准则。在家人的支持下,我们开始四处打听寻找失主的方法。我们先联系了二手家具店,店主帮我们联系到了处理老太太遗产的慈善机构。经过一系列的电话沟通和信息核实,我们离归还这笔失物越来越近。11续写思路分析Para2:Afewdayslater,theoldlady’ssoncametomyhousewithhiswife.几天后,老太太的儿子和儿媳来到了我家。他们一进门,眼中就闪烁着感激的泪光。他们紧紧握着我的手,激动地说这笔钱对他们家庭意义重大,尤其是能帮助孩子们继续学业。为了表达感谢,他们拿出一个红包要给我当作报酬,我连忙婉拒了。我真诚地告诉他们,看到钱能回到真正属于它的地方,我就已经很满足了。这次经历让我更加坚定了自己的道德信念,也让我深刻理解了诚信的价值,它成为我十二岁生日中最难忘的记忆。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Afewdayslater,theoldlady'ssonanddaughter-in-lawcametomyhouse.Assoonastheyenteredthedoor,theireyeswerefilledwithtearsofgratitude.Theyheldmyhandstightlyandsaidexcitedlythatthismoneywasofgreatsignificancetotheirfamily,especiallyfortheirchildren'seducation.Toexpresstheirgratitude,theytookoutaredenvelopeandwantedtogiveittomeasareward,butIdeclineditimmediately.Itoldthemsincerelythatseeingthemoneyreturntoitsrightfulplacemademeverysatisfied.Thisexperiencemadememoredeterminedinmymoralbeliefsandalsomademedeeplyunderstandthevalueofintegrity.Itbecamethemostmemorablememoryofmytwelfth-birthday.14范文呈现Whenhereachedthem,theboygentlytooktheblindman'shandandsaidsoftly,"Sir,letmeguideyou."Thenhesupportedtheoldlady'sarmandsaidwithconcern,"Grandma,don'tworry.We'llgotogetherslowly."Withtheboy'shelp,thethreeofthemmovedforwardstepbysteptowardsthefinishline.Whentheyfinallycrossedittogether,thecrowderuptedintocheersandapplause.Lookingaroundattheapprovingsmilesontheaudience'sfaces,theboyfinallyunderstoodthatrealsuccesswasn'taboutshiningalonebutaboutbringingwarmthtoothers.Fromthenon,theboychangedcompletelyandalwaysadheredtothebeliefofkindnessandhelpingothersinhislaterlife.15升级版范文呈现Isummonedmyfamilytomybedroom,unveilingtheunexpecteddiscoverybeforethem.Theireyeswidenedinastonishmentastheybeheldthestackofmoneyandthewilllyingonthetable.Inmeticulousdetail,Irecountedthesequenceofeventsthatledtothisfind.Post-narration,aprofoundsilenceensued.Momentslater,myfatherbrokethestillness.Hisgaze,firmyetfilledwithpride,fixeduponmeashecommendedmyuprightdecision,emphasizingthatthemoney'srightfulreturnwasnon-negotiable.Mymother,noddinginunison,affirmedthatsuchintegritywasthecornerstoneofourfamilyvalues.Bolsteredbytheirunwaveringsupport,weembarkedonaquesttolocatetherightfulowner.Ourinitialstepwastoreachouttothesecond-handfurniturestore,whoseproprietor,inturn,connecteduswiththecharityoverseeingtheoldlady'sestate.Throughaseriesofarduousphonecallsandpainstakinginformationverifications,weedgedclosertothefulfillmentofourmissiontorestorethelostinheritance.16升级版范文呈现Afewdayshence,theoldlady'ssonanddaughter-in-lawgracedourdoorstep.Theireyes,brimmingwithheartfeltgratitude,metmineastheyentered.Theyclaspedmyhandsfirmly,theirvoicestremulouswithemotionastheyexpressedtheprofoundsignificance
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