读后续写思维方向专练(01)-2024届高三英语一轮起航

Itwasabeautifulsunnydaywhenthemovingvanpulledontothetree-linedstreet.MarkandMindysteppedoutofthevanandlookedattheirnewhomewithpride.Theyhadbothbeensavingforalongtimetopurchasetheirfirsthousetogetherandwereveryexcitedtogoonanewventure.Withinanhourtheyhadunloadedanumberofboxesandwerepleasedwiththeirprogress.Theskyhadbeguntodarkenslightly,buttheweatherwasstillpleasant.ThenMindyheardit–evenfeltit.Therewasalargeclapofthunderandthenaboltoflightning.MindyandMarkimmediatelyfrozeandlookedateachother,thenlookedattheboxesscattered(分散)ontheirlawn.Theyhastilyracedtogettheirbelongingsindoors,butnotbeforegettingcaughtinheavyrain.Thecouplestoodintheirlivingroom,wetfromheadtotoe,surroundedbywhatwerenowverywetboxes.Then,Marknoticedapoolofwaterinthehallway.

Hewenttoinspectandfoundthattherewaswaterdrippingfromtheceiling.“Wecanhavesomeonefixit,”Mindysaid.“I’llgrababuckettocatchthewaterfornow.”AmomentlaterMarkheardascreamandracedintothekitchenjustintimetoseeamouserunningacrossthefloor.Mindywasfrozenwithfright.

“Don’tworry.Wecantakecareofthat!”Marksaid,tryingtosoundasreassuring(安心的)aspossible.“Let’sgounpacksomeoftheboxes.Thatwillmakeusfeelbetter.”MarkandMindymadetheirwaytothelivingroom,butwhentheyopenedaboxholdingtheirkitchenutensils(器皿)anddishes,theyfoundthatalloftheirplates,bowlsandcupswerebroken.Theylookedateachotherindismay(沮丧).“Whatdowedonow?”Mindyasked.Theirfirstdayintheirnewhomewasnotturningouttobethejoyousoccasiontheyhadexpected.Paragraph1:Justthen,therewasaknockatthedoor.Paragraph2:Suddenlytheyheardanoisefromtheattic(阁楼).【参考范文】Paragraph1:Justthen,therewasaknockatthedoor.Openingthedoorwearily,Markfoundanelderlymanstandingontheporchwithsomesavory(可口的)cookies.Grinning,themanintroducedhimselfasTom.Uponseeingthevanparkedoutside,hebroughtcookiestowelcomehisnewneighbors.Tom’swordsandthesmellofthecookiescalmedMarkalot,butwiththeboxesintheroominamess,Markfeltembarrassed.Unexpectedly,Tomcameinandhelpedthehostscleanuptheroomandfinallytheysatdowntogether,enjoyingthecookieshappily.Paragraph2:Suddenlytheyheardanoisefromtheattic.Puzzled,Mindyranupstairs.“It’salovelykitten,”Mindycriedcheerfully.“ItmustbebecauseJames,theformerownerofthehouse,usedtofeedastraycattodriveoutthemice,”smiledTom.“ItwasJameswhohelpedmewhenIwashelpless,justasyouarenow.”Feelingthewarmthfromtheneighbor,MarkandMindywereverygrateful.Therainisstillfalling,butitcouldneverdampentheirhopesforthefuture.【文章概要】通过阅读所给文章可知，马克和明迪搬入新家，突然变天下雨，二人跑进房子，发现天花板上滴水，厨房有老鼠，而且他们的餐具都碎了，二人很沮丧，认为在新家的第一天并不是他们所期望的那种欢乐的日子。【详解】第一段开头是：就在这时，有人敲门。本段应该写马克开门后，发现是一位拿着饼干的老人——邻居汤姆，汤姆是来欢迎二人的，并帮他们打扫卫生，最后大家一起吃饼干，二人很开心。第二段开头是：突然，他们听到阁楼上传来响声。本段应该写明迪上楼去发现是一只猫，汤姆告诉二人猫是前主人詹姆斯养的，詹姆斯也帮过汤姆，所以汤姆帮助二人，马克和明迪很感激，雨并没有打消他们对未来的希望。注意人称变化，老人、两人、猫高级词汇和短语：driveout、helpless、dampen、introduceoneselfassb.等从句使用现在分词短语作状语Unexpectedly,Tomcameinandhelpedthehostscleanuptheroomandfinallytheysatdowntogether,enjoyingthecookieshappily.表语从句ItmustbebecauseJames,theformerownerofthehouse,usedtofeedastraycattodriveoutthemice，强调句型结构ItwasJameswhohelpedmewhenIwashelpless注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Growingup,Iunderstoodonethingaboutmydad:Hekneweverything.Thiswasourrelationship:Iaskedhimquestionsandhetoldmetheanswers.Inmyteenyears,hetaughtmethingsI’dneedtoknowtosurviveintherealworld.WhenImovedoutonmyown,IcalledhimusuallywhensomethingbrokeintomyapartmentandIneededtoknowhowtofixthetoilet,theair-conditionerorthewall.Butthen,eventually,Ineededhimless.Foreverything,IhadGoogle.Idon’tknowwhenithappened,butwhenIcalledourconversationsdevelopedintosixwords.Me:“Hi,Dad”.Him:“Hi,sweets.Here’sMom.”Ilovedmydad,ofcourse,butIwonderedattimesifmaybehehadalreadysharedeverythingIneededtoknow.Then,thispastsummer,Imovedinwithmyparentsforthreeweekswhilemyhousewasbeingrepaired.Theyownalakehouse,andDadaskedmetohelphimrebuildthebulkhead(隔板)attheirdock(船坞).“Howdoyouknowhowtobuildabulkhead?”“IspentasummerincollegebuildingthemontheJerseyshore.”“Youdid?”IthoughtIkneweverythingaboutmydad.Iknewaboutthesummeratthemanufacturingplantthatburnedhishandsraw,andeventhetinylittlekitchen,wherehelearnedhowtomakethebestpancake.ButIneverknewthis.“Yes.Nowcomeuphereandletmeteachyouhowtousethiscircularssaw(圆锯).”Allofasudden,Irealizedthatmaybeit’snotthatthere’snothinglefttosay.Maybeit’sjustthatI’vespentmylifeaskinghimthewrongquestions.Paragraph1:WeendedupourtalkingbutIwaslostinthoughtParagraph2:“Wait,Dad,”Isaid,“Howareyou?【参考范文】Paragraph1:WeendedupourtalkingbutIwaslostinthought.Foryears,IhadtakenitforgrantedthatdadcouldgivemeanswerstoanyofmyquestionsonlyifIasked,butseldomdidItrytounderstandhislifejustlikethesummerwhenhewasbuildingbulkheadandwhathewantedfromme.Maybehewasalsoeagertosharehisstorywithme,orhewouldn’thaveaskedmetohelphimrebuildthebulkhead.Afterall,itwashard,manuallabor.Afewweekslater,afterImovedbackintomyhouse,Icalledmyparents.Dadanswered.“Hi,sweets,”hesaid.“Here’sMom.”Paragraph2:“Wait,Dad,”Isaid.“Howareyou?”Wetalkedalotthatday,fromthelittlequarrelbetweenhimandmymomtothejobhewasworkingon.Nothingimportant.Toanyoneelse,itwouldsoundlikeanormalconversationbetweenadadandhisdaughter.Buttome,itwasnovel,aswella