Module 10 A holiday journey-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作外研版

2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作Module10:Aholidayjourney单元话题：假期生活范文11．假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“AnExcitingTrip”的英语短文。时间上周末参加者你和……地点北海公园（BeihaiPark）活动划船、爬山、野餐（haveapicnic）、照相、做游戏……感受……要求:1.不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，表达正确；3.60词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文22．上周你和你父母去四川旅游了，你们参观了那儿的一些名胜古迹，如：峨眉山，乐山大等，那儿的食物也很美味。请你把你的这次旅行经历写下来，适当发挥，不低于60词。参考词汇：MountEmei峨眉山；LeshanBuddhists乐山大佛MytriptoSichuan______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文33．假如你和你的家人去年暑假去了桂林旅游，请根据下面表格的内容写一篇短文，介绍你的旅游经历和感受。要求：1.文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等；3.词数70词左右。Howwasyourtrip?Wonderful.HowdidyougotoGuilin?Bytrain.Howlongdidyoustaythere?Forfivedays.Whatdidyouseethere?Greenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.Whatdidyoudo?GoboatinginLijiangRiver.......________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文44．提示：暑假要来了，你有什么旅行计划吗？请以“MyTravelPlan”为题写一篇英语短文。内容可以包括目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等。要求：（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；（2）文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文55．假设你是宋刚，你和父母上周末去北京旅游了。现在请你根据下表的内容提示，给你的笔友Millie写一封不少于60词的英语邮件，介绍你们在北京的所见所闻。邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。TimeActivitiesSaturdayVisittheGreatWallSundayGototheSummerPalace,visitWangfujingStreetDearMillie,Howwasyourvacation?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,SongGang范文66．假如你是张芳，你收到外籍朋友Lily的邮件。在邮件中她讲述了她的一次特殊的旅行经历，请根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件，向她介绍你的一次特殊的旅行经历。70词左右。

写作提示：1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudoduringthetrip?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。DearLily,Itwasgreattohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thetripisveryspecialtome.Iwanttotravelthereagain.Yours,ZhangFang范文77．假设你是李华，去年你和你的好朋友去参观了北京，你的英国笔友Tom想了解这次活动。请你根据以下要点，给他以写一封信介绍这次活动。WheretogoBeijingHowtoarriveByplaneWhentoarriveAt10:00inthemorningWhattodoVisitTian’anmenSquareEatdeliciousfood;watchBeijingOperaGoshoppingonWangfujingDajie补充一个活动谈及自己的感受要求：1.必须包括所给信息，词数70左右；2.紧扣要点，适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．Onepossibleversion:AnExcitingTrip

Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatmyhome.WewenttoBeihaiParkbybus.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedandwesangsongsonthebus.Whenwegotthere,wewentboatingonthelake.Weclimbedmountainsandhadapicniconthemountain.Afterthatwetooksomephotos.Thensomegirlsdancedunderthetreeandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wegothomeat4o'clockintheafternoon.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadagreattime.【解析】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文。要求根据题目所给要点提示写一篇关于郊游的英语短文，文中所给要点必须全部包含，并可以适当加以拓展。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称；时态应用一般过去时；按照要点提示，准确表达，内容条理清楚，无句法错误；可适当运用连词或时间状语从句，使文章内容层次清晰。2．例文MytriptoSichuanTherearemanyinterestingplacesinSichuan.Duringthissummerholiday,IwenttoSichuanwithmyparents.Itwasagreattrip.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterestthere.WevisitedMountEmei,Jiuzhaigou,LeshanBuddhistsandsoon.Theywereverybeautiful.ThefoodinSichuanisveryspicy,butverydelicious.It’sdifferentfromours.Ilikethetripverymuch.【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照提示介绍四川之旅，包括名胜和食物等。注意要点表达无误。写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时。可以一段介绍，采用固定句型Therebe结构，举例时注意短语的使用。3．例文IwenttoGuilinwithmyfamilylastweek.Wehadawonderfultimethere.Wewenttherebytrain.Westayedforfivedays.Wesawbeautifulgreenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.WewentboatingintheLijiangRiver.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.Manypeoplevisitthemeveryday.ThefoodinGuilinisverydelicious.Peoplearealsoveryfriendly.Guilinisaverybeautifulplace.Ihopetogothereagainoneday.【解析】1.题干解析：这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇70字左右的英语短文，介绍去桂林旅游的经历和感受，要做到要点齐全，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：全文主要使用第一人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时。可采用两段式写作，一段介绍去桂林旅游的经历，另一段说明自己的感受，适当使用短语和句型，为文章增加亮点，同时要做到没有单词和语法错误。4．参考范文：MyTravelPlanIwanttogoonatripthissummerholiday.IplantovisitHangzhouwithmyfatherandmother.WeplantogotoHangzhouonJuly10thinthemorning.Wewillgotherebyplane.Wewanttostaythereforthreedays.Theweatherthereisalwayssunny.SoIplantotakeapairofsunglasses.Iwillalsotakeamapandacamera.Onthefirstday,weplantovisittheWestLake.Ihopetotakemanybeautifulpictures.Onthesecondday,wewouldliketogoshopping.Onthethirdday,wewillvisitLeifengTower.Iamsurewewillhaveagoodtime.【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求以“MyTravelPlan”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等内容。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式：第一段：提出自己的旅行计划；第二段：从时间、交通方式、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等阐述自己具体的旅行计划；第三段：表达美好祝福。5．Onepossibleversion:DearMillie,Howwasyourvacation?MyparentsandIwenttoBeijingforavacationlastweekend.Wehadagoodtimethere.OnSaturday,wevisitedtheGreatWall.Weclimbeditandsawbeautifulscenerythere.OnSundaymorning,wewenttotheSummerPalace.Wesawdifferentkindsofflowersandanicelake.Itwassobeautifulanditwasjustlikeanexcellentpainting.OnSundayafternoon,wewenttoWangfujingStreetandboughtsomegiftsformygrandparentsthere.Andthenwecamebackhomebytrain.Yours,SongGang【解析】1.题干解读：本文要求以宋刚的身份给笔友Millie写一封电子邮件，介绍与父母去北京旅游的所见所闻，写作时提示要点要写全。2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时；主要以第一人称为主展开叙述；短文采用二段式：第一段说自己的与谁、去哪儿旅行；第二段叙述旅行的时间，所进行的活动及交通工具等，介绍活动时要详细具体。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。6．例文DearLily,

Itwasgreattohearfromyou.Lastwinterholiday,myfriendZhangMinaskedmetoherho