2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：走进儿童收容所：心灵的触动之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习走进儿童收容所：心灵的触动之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Growingup,Iwantedtobejustlikemymom.Shewaskindandcaring,andalwaysmadepeoplecomfortableinherpresence.Foryearsshewasavolunteerinourcommunity.IlovegoingtothelocalnursinghometohelpwithherwhenIwasachild.However,onceIbecameateenager,Iwastoocaughtupinmyadolescentworldtoworryabouthelpingothers.OneparticularsummerdaywhenIwas12,Momcameintomyroomandtoldmetogetupandmeetheratthecar.ButIhadplannedtospendthedayatthelakewithfriends.Whydidshehavetoruineverything?Atlast,Imademywayoutsidewithmymother.Angryandannoyed,Iclimbedintothecarandshootthedoorloudly.Isatinsilence,tooupsettotalk.“Tasha,doyouknowwherewearegoing?”Momaskedcalmly.Iremainedsilent.“Sweetheart,we’regoingtothechildren’sshelter.IhavebeentherebeforeandIthinkitwouldbenefityou,”sheexplained.4续写原文Ifeelapainslowlyforminmystomach.HowwasIsupposedtohelpthere?Whenwereachedtheshelter,Iwasrathersurprised.Asweapproachedthefrontdoor,windbellsplayedacalmingtunewhiletreesandflowerswelcomedus.Maybethiswasn’tgoingtobeso.Momrangthedoorbell.Wewereledtothefrontroom,whereallofthechildrenwereplaying.Toyswerespreadoutacrossthefloor.Inoticedababywhosebodywasseriouslywounded.Mostofthechildrenhadnoticeablephysicalscarssuchascuts,burnsandscratches.Whataterriblelifetheymusthadhadbeforetheymovedhere!Myheartsank.AsIwaslookingaround,Ifeltagentlepullonmyshirt.5段首句Paragraph1：Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Paragraph2：Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmumseveraltimes.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了作者小时候常和妈妈去社区做志愿者，长大后却不再热衷。12岁那年夏天，妈妈打断作者和朋友去湖边玩的计划，带她去儿童收容所。作者起初满心不情愿，一路上沉默且生气。到了收容所，作者被其温馨的环境意外到。进入收容所，看到孩子们玩耍，还有很多孩子身上有明显的伤疤，作者心生怜悯。就在这时，一个小女孩拉住了她的衣角。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.我低头一看，发现是一个有着棕色眼睛的小女孩正抬头看着我。她的眼神中透着一丝胆怯，但又带着些许好奇。她的手里紧紧握着一个破旧的玩具小熊，衣角还沾着一些灰尘。她小声地问我：“姐姐，你愿意和我一起玩吗？”看着她那渴望的眼神，我心中的不快瞬间消散了。我笑着点点头，和她一起坐在了地上。她开心地向我展示她的玩具，还跟我讲起了她在这里的生活。在交流中，我了解到她经历了很多困难，但依然保持着乐观。和她相处的过程中，我也渐渐被她的快乐所感染。10续写思路分析Para2：Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmumseveraltimes.从那以后，我和妈妈又多次来到这个收容所。每次来，我都会和孩子们一起玩耍、学习。我教他们画画、唱歌，给他们讲外面世界的故事。孩子们也会和我分享他们的小秘密，把我当成最亲近的人。在这个过程中，我发现自己变得越来越有耐心，也更加懂得珍惜现在的生活。收容所的经历让我明白，帮助他人能给自己带来如此多的快乐和成长。我不再抱怨妈妈的安排，而是期待着每一次和孩子们相聚的时光，希望能给他们带来更多的温暖和关爱。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Therewasahintofshynessinhereyes,yetalsoasparkofcuriosity.Shewasclutchingaworn-outteddybeartightlyinherhand,andthereweresomeduststainsonherclothes.Inasoftvoice,sheaskedme,"Sister,wouldyouliketoplaywithme?"Lookingintohereagereyes,myannoyancevanishedinstantly.Inoddedwithasmileandsatdownonthefloorwithher.Shehappilyshowedmehertoyandbegantotellmeaboutherlifehere.Duringourconversation,Ilearnedthatshehadgonethroughalotofhardships,butstillremainedoptimistic.AsIspenttimewithher,Iwasgraduallyinfluencedbyherhappiness.13范文呈现Afterthat,Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmymomseveraltimes.Eachtimewewentthere,Iwouldplayandstudywiththechildren.Itaughtthemhowtodrawandsing,andtoldthemstoriesabouttheoutsideworld.Thechildrenwouldalsosharetheirlittlesecretswithme,regardingmeastheirclosestfriend.Intheprocess,Ifoundmyselfbecomingmoreandmorepatient,andIalsolearnedtocherishmypresentlifebetter.Theexperienceatthesheltermademeunderstandthathelpingotherscouldbringsomuchhappinessandgrowthtomyself.Inolongercomplainedaboutmymom'sarrangement.Instead,IwaslookingforwardtoeverytimeIcouldmeetthechildren,hopingtobringthemmorewarmthandlove.14升级版范文呈现Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Hereyes,inwhichatraceofshynesscouldbedetected,werealsofilledwithcuriosity.Clutchingashabbyteddybeartightlyinherhand,shehadsomeduststainsonherclothes."Sister,wouldyouliketoplaywithme?"sheaskedinasoftvoice.Meetinghereagereyes,myannoyancedisappearedinaninstant.Withasmile,Inoddedandseatedmyselfonthefloorbesideher.Shethenhappilypresentedhertoytomeandstartedtotalkaboutherlifeintheshelter.Fromourconversation,Ilearnedthatdespitehavingendurednumeroushardships,shestillstayedoptimistic.AsIaccompaniedher,Iwasgraduallyinfectedbyherhappiness.15升级版范文呈现Afterthat,Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmymomonseveraloccasions.Everytimewearrived,Iwouldengageinplayandstudywiththechildren.Itaughtthemdrawingandsingingskillsandtoldthemtalesoftheoutsideworld.Thechildren,inturn,wouldsharetheirlittlesecretswithme,treatingmeastheirdearestfriend.Duringthisprocess,IfoundthatIwasbecomingincreasinglypatientandalsolearnedtotreasuremycurrentlifemore.Theexperienceatthesheltermadeitcleartomethathelpingotherscouldbringanabundanceofhappinessandpersonalgrowth.Nolo