2021年高考英语二轮精讲精练讲义-专题-书面表达一经典精讲(上)-

书面表达一经典精讲（上）主讲老师：林斌北京八十中学英语高级老师开篇语地点描写题一：假如你叫李华，请你依据以下提示，给你的伴侣Jim写一封E-mail，介绍海淀，并谈谈你在海淀生活的感受。1.海淀区位于北京市西北部；面积约426平方公里；人口有184万。2.海淀特色：是中国高科技中心，有万余家高科技公司；是重要的训练科研基地，有78所高校；是出名的旅游区，有众多名胜古迹，如颐和园、圆明园等；……说明：1.词数不少于60。2.开头和结尾已经给出。DearJim,IamsogladthatyouareinterestedinHaidianDistrict.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards.Yours,LiHua题二：假定你是李华，应英国伴侣Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本状况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。DearBob,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua题三：下面是北京市第八十中学，请介绍下这个学校！__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________题型说明translation1.他的幻想是当一名老师。2.他考入北京高校。3.他总是第一个来最终一个走的同学。4.我是在北极独自旅行的第一位女性。5.有志者事竟成。他的幻想是当一名老师。Hisdreamistobecomeateacher.Hedreamsofbecomingateacher.他从小就幻想当美国总统。HedreamtofbecomingthepresidentoftheUnitedStatesinhischildhood.他考入北京高校。HeenteredPekingHewasadmittedto/intoPeking1988年他考入哈佛法学院。In1988,hewasadmittedintoHavard他总是第一个来最终一个走的同学。Heisalwaysthefirststudenttocomeandthelasttoleave.我是在北极独自旅行的第一位女性。IwasthefirstwomantotravelaloneattheNorthPole.他是美国历史上的第一位黑人美国总统。HeisthefirstAfricanAmericantobethePresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.假如你是Jason,你的网友李华向你询问有关美国新任总统奥巴马的状况。请你依据在网站上收集到的有关信息给她回复一封电子邮件，谈谈奥巴马的状况。留意:1.邮件的开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；2.词数100左右。姓名巴拉克·奥巴马（BarackObama）诞生时间1961诞生地点夏威夷檀香山（Honolulu,Hawaii）家庭状况父亲是肯尼亚黑人，母亲是美国白人小时幻想当总统训练1988年考入哈佛法学院（HarvardLawSchool），1991年获博士学位职业及政治生涯毕业后当律师、高校讲师，后来从政。2008.11.4在美国大选中(thegeneralelection)击败JohnMcCain，成为美国首位黑人总统。成功意义（自拟)Hi,LiHua,YouaskedmeaboutBarackObama.HereissomethingabouthimIgotwhenIsearchedthewebsitesathome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,JasonBeautifythesimplesentences句式美化In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardIn1991,hegothisDoctor’sDegreethere.In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLaw2008年11月4日对于奥巴马来说是一个重要的日子。November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama.在总统大选(thegeneralelection)中他击败约翰.麦凯恩(JohnMcCain)。HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama,______hedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.在总统大选(thegeneralelection)中他击败约翰.麦凯恩(JohnMcCain)。HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.他成为美国历史上第一位黑人总统。HebecamethefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection,__________thefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.成功的意义他的成功绝非偶然。Hissuccessisnoaccident.有幻想，为之努力奋斗，你就会成功。Ifonehasadream,workhardforitandhewillsucceedoneday.有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.付出的越多，得到的就越多。Themoreyoupain,themoreyouwillgain.readthethreesentencesIn1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLawSchool,November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama,whenhedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection,becomingthefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.BasicWriting--CharacterintroductionJustguessthemandescribedinthefollowingsentences！1.他1910年11月2日生于一个富有家庭,2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。(dueto)①HewasbornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910anddiedduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.②BornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910,hepassedawayduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.2.他高校时先从事于医学学习，但后来却转变方法。Whenhewenttocollege,hefirstchosetoworkonmedicinebutthenchangedhismind.3.他1930－1935年于清华高校学习，之后到英国连续深造。(furthereducation)Between1930and1935,hestudiedinTsinghuaUniversityandthenwenttoEnglandforfurthereducation.4.他获得博士学位。Hereceivedhisdoctor’sdegree.5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)争辩，促使(advance)中国农村经济进展。HedevotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChina’sruraleconomy.费孝通是我国出名的社会学家和社会活动家。请依据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。生平1910年11月经受1、高校时先从事于医学学习，但后来却转变方法。2、1930－1935年于清华高校学习，之后到英国连续深造，并获得博士学位。3、1938年后，曾任教于清华高校和北京高校。评价1、致力于社会科学争辩，促使中国农村经济进展。2、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。参考词汇：社会学家sociologist;社会活动家socialactivist【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HowdoyoudotheBasicWriting?Thesuggestedsteps:1.审题:确定文体、人称和时态2.整合信息:把全部内容整合成5句3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构4.连句成篇5.检查生平1910年11月2经受1、高校时先从事于医学学习，但后来却转变方法。②2、1930－1935年于清华高校学习，之后到英国连续深造，并获得博士学位。③3、1938年后，曾任教于清华高校和北京高校。④评价1、致力于社会科学争辩，促使中国农村经济进展。2、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。⑤检查(Howtocorrect?)

1、是否恰好五句话？２、是否每句都含必要信息？３、可否自由发挥？４、pants纠错原则：1)pattern2)agreement3)number4)tense5)spelling上半讲到此结束欢迎连续学习下半讲书面表达一经典精讲（上）讲义参考答案地点描写题一：DearJim,IamsogladthatyouareinterestedinHaidianDistrict.HaidianDistrictliesinthenorthwesternpartofBeijing.Itcoversanareaof426squarekilometersandhasapopulationof1.84million.Itisthecountry’scenterforhightechnology,withmorethantenthousandhi-techcompanieslikeLenovo.Itisalsohometo78famousuniversitiesandinstitutes,includingPekingUniversityandTsinghuaUniversity.Atthesametime,itiswell-knownformanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchastheSummerPalaceandInaword,it’saniceplaceforpeopletostudy,workandlive.IamreallyproudofbeingacitizenofHaidian.Ihopeyoucancomeandseeitforyourselfsomeday.Bestregards.Yours,LiHua题二：DearBob,Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingaboutourlibrary.Ourlibraryisinthecentreoftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitandourclassroombuildingisrightbehindit.Thelibraryisbig.Whenyougetinside,youwillseemanyshelvesfullofbooksondifferentsubjects.Therearealsolotsofnewspapersandmagazines.Weborrowbooksanddosomereadinginthelibrary.Accordingtotherule,everystudentcanborrowupto5bookseachtimeandkeepthemfor10days.Itisopenfrom9a.m.to7p.m.fromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.Wealllikeourlibraryverymuch.Yours,LiHua题三：Foundedin1956,No.80HighSchoolisnowoneofthemostdistinguishedschoolsinBeijing.Currentlywehavemorethan3000students,rangingfromYear7toYear12,alongwith400staffmembers.Thewholeschoolisdividedintotwosections,withjuniorsectionlocatedneardowntownwhileseniorsectionfurtherawayatoutskirts.Ourschoolhaswonthefameasa“garden-likeschool”duetoitsimpressivelandscapingandfacilities.Themomentyouenterthecampus,youwillsee“thewaytosuccess”.Theroadstartsfromtheeastgate.Attheendoftheroadistheauditoriumwheregraduationceremonyisheldeverysummer.Theauditoriumisshapedlikeahatofadoctorate,whichsymbolizesacademicsuccess.That’swhythisroadhasgotsuchaname.OnthelefthandsideisourclassroombuildingwhileontherightistheComplexwheremostlaboratoriesarelocated.Eastoftheschoolstandsthelibrary,rightbehindwhichistheastrodome,whereweobservestarsandtheuniverse.Southoftheschoolliesthegardenwherestudentsspendtimereadingorstudyingplantsinbiologylessons.Nexttothegardenisstudents’dormitory.Fourstudentssharearoomandeachroomisair-conditioned.Westoftheschoolliestheplaygroundintheopenair.StudentsdomorningexercisesandhavePElessonshere.Rightinthemiddleisthefootballfield.Whentheweatherisbad,wehavePElessonsinthegymnasium.Schoolbasketballteamtrainshereatthebasketballcourt.No.80HighSchool,Beijing,opensherarms,readytoembracefriendscomingfromeverypartoftheworld.SuchisBeijingNo.80,whereweliveandstud