2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：森林中老虎与我的生死守护+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习森林中，老虎与我的生死守护1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Myunclewasaforestofficerandthistimehebroughtmethere.Hishousewasintheforest.Whenwearrived,Ericsawusandcamerushingtoopenthegardengate.Hewasanelderlymanwhodidmyuncle’scookingandotherhouseholdwork.“Howareyou?”Icalledout.“I’mallright,”hesaid,“butPapalisn’t.”Myuncle,whowalkedaheadofus,stoppedandasked,“WhyEric,whatiswrongwithourfriend?”“Fromthedayyouwent,shehasnotbeeneatingproperly,”answeredEric.Myunclelookedworried.4续写原文“WhoisPapal?”IaskedEric.“Why!Don’tyouknow?Heresheis.”Iturnedround.Myheartskippedabeat.TherewasPapal,aRoyalBengaltiger,givingmyuncleatremendouswelcomebylicking(舔)hisface.Thenshecaughtsightofmeandcamestillwhileshesniffedmeallover.Butwhenshetriedtolickmyface,Ialwaysrefused.LaterIwastoldthatPapal’smotherwaskilledwhenshewasonlytendaysold.Ifeltsorryforher.Soonmyuncleleftforwork.Iwonderedhowtopassmytime.TherewasasmallpondbehindthehouseandIlikedtositbesideit.Igotup.ImmediatelyPapalmovedhertailtoshowshehadseenmemove.Icouldnolongerbearthefeelingofbeingconstantlywatchedbytwosilenteyes.Iwalkedoffangrilyandsatbesidethepond.“WOOSH!!!”Iheardasplashingsound.Ilookedup.Papalhaddivedintothewaterandwasswimminginthepond.Soonshecameoutofthepondandsatbreathinginfrontofme.ThenPapalgrowled(咆哮).5续写原文Afterawhile,Papalgrowledagain—thistimetherewassomethingurgentinhergrowl.Icouldnothelpturningbackandlookingather.Shewasstaringatsomethinginfrontofme.Ilookedinthesamedirectionandbrokeintoacoldsweat(冒冷汗)!Therewasasnakelessthansixfeetaway!6段首句Paragraph1：Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.Paragraph2：ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了“我”随身为森林官员的叔叔来到森林中的住所，结识了叔叔的帮佣埃里克。得知一只叫帕帕尔的孟加拉虎因叔叔离开而食欲不振。帕帕尔母亲早亡，“我”对它心生怜悯。叔叔去工作后，“我”在屋后池塘边休息，帕帕尔也跟了过来。突然，帕帕尔发出带有紧迫感的咆哮，“我”发现前方不到六英尺处有一条准备攻击“我”的蛇。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.当球朝我飞来时，我脑海中一片空白，身体仿佛被定住了一般。曾经那些在球场上的失败经历如潮水般涌上心头，让我差点放弃。然而，就在这关键时刻，我看到了教练充满期待的眼神，听到了队友们为我加油的呼喊。我心中涌起一股力量，告诉自己不能退缩。我迅速调整状态，全力奔跑，精准判断球的落点，然后用尽全身力气，一脚将球踢向对方球门。足球在空中划过一道漂亮的弧线，直奔球门而去。11续写思路分析Para2：ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.随后我发现自己紧紧抱住了帕帕尔。我心中满是感激与后怕，若不是它，我恐怕早已被蛇咬伤。帕帕尔用头蹭了蹭我，仿佛在安慰我。从那以后，我和帕帕尔的关系变得更加亲密。我会陪它在森林里散步，看它在池塘里欢快地游泳。它也总是像忠诚的卫士一样，时刻守护在我身边，我们成为了彼此信赖的好朋友。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.Inthenickoftime,Papalrushedforwardlikeanarrowleavingthebow.Sheletoutaloudroar,whichmadetheleavesaroundtremble.Thensheleapedhighintotheairandstruckthesnakewithhersharpclaws.Thesnaketwisteditsbodynimblytoavoid,butPapalkeptchasingitandusedherbodytosuppressthesnake.Afterafiercestruggle,Papalfinallymanagedtobitethesnake'svitalpointandsubdueit.Atthismoment,Iwasstillinshock,mylegsweak,andIslumpedtotheground.14范文呈现ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.Myheartwasfilledwithgratitudeandfear.Ifithadn'tbeenforher,Imighthavebeenbittenbythesnake.Papalrubbedherheadagainstme,asiftocomfortme.Fromthenon,therelationshipbetweenPapalandmebecameevencloser.Iwouldaccompanyherforwalksintheforestandwatchherswimhappilyinthepond.Shewasalwayslikealoyalguard,stayingbymysideallthetime,andwebecamegoodfriendswhotrustedeachother.15升级版范文呈现Thesnakecoiled,readytostrike.Inaninstant,Papal,withaspeedrivalingthatofabullet,launchedherselftowardstheserpent.Adeafeningroarescapedherjaws,causingtheveryleavestoquakeinfear.Vaultingintotheair,herrazor-sharpclawsslashedthroughtheair,aimingforthesnake.Thesnake,withremarkableagility,wriggledtoevade,yetPapal,undeterred,relentlesslypursued,usinghermassivebodytopinthesnakedown.Afteraferociousbattle,Papal,withavice-likegrip,sankherteethintothesnake'svulnerablespot,finallysubduingit.Atthatmoment,Iwaslefttrembling,mylegsbucklingbeneathme,andIcollapsedontotheground,stillreelingfromtheshock.16升级版范文呈现Then,almostinstinctively,IfoundmyselfembracingPapal.Overwhelmedbygratitudeandlingeringfear,Irealizedthathaditnotbeenforher,Iwouldhavesurelyfallenvictimtothesnake'svenomousbite.Papal,inturn,nuzzledagainstme,asiftosoothemyfrayednerves.Fromthatdayforward,ourbonddeepenedexponentially.Iaccompaniedheronleisurelystrollsthroughtheforest,delightinginwatchingherfrolicint