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高考英语读后续写语篇练习姐妹守护海滩的环保行动1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MelatiandIsabeldeeplylovetheirhomeontheisland,surroundedbytropicalrainforests,greenfields,andavastocean.Enjoyingaswimattheirlocalbeachwasonceadailypleasureforthem.ButwhenMelatiwasfifteen,andIsabeljustten,thesistersstartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewatersneartheirborne.Moreoftenthannot,plasticbagswouldbearoundthemastheyswamandsomewerescatteredonthebeach.Theygotreallyupsetaboutthat.4续写原文Melatididn’tthinkmuchaboutituntilonedayherteachergavealessononsomeworldheroes.Eachofthosepeoplehadsparkedmovementsofpositivechangesintheworld.Theybelievedintheimpacttheycouldhaveandtheydidinspiremorepeopletodosomethingmeaningful.Afterschool,Melatiwalkedhomeslowlyinsilence,concernedaboutthevastamountofplasticrubbishonthebeach.Theheroescrossedhermind.Iftheycoulddoit,wecoulddoittoo,shethought.Theidealitherup.Shecouldn’twaittosharewhatshethoughtwithIsabelandquickenedherpace.5续写原文“Somanyplasticbagsaround!Thebeachisdirtyandmessy!It’ssoterrible!Wehavelostthecleanandbeautifulbeach.Can’twedosomethingtogetitback?”Melatisaidheartily.Isabelfeltabitpuzzledatwhattodo,butshealsohadastrongdesiretodosomething.Picturingabeachasfascinatingasbeforeinmind,thepairjumpedwithjoy.Theytalkedalot,anxioustoknowhowDadandMomwouldrespondtotheirideas.Thatnightwhenthefamilysatbythedinnertable,thesisterseagerlygottheirideasacross.WhileMomandDadlistenedtothegirlscarefully,theireyesshone.“Howamazingthatwouldbe!Wearesoproudofyou!”Dadexclaimed.Momcameup,gavethemathumbupandhuggedthesisters.6段首句Paragraph1:MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.Paragraph2:Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9拉蒂和伊莎贝尔姐妹热爱家乡岛屿,原本常享受在当地海滩游泳。但随着海滩塑料垃圾增多,她们失去游泳热情。老师讲世界英雄事迹后,梅拉蒂受启发,和伊莎贝尔决定为恢复海滩干净美丽做点事。与父母分享想法后得到支持,为后续姐妹俩采取实际行动奠定基础。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:
MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.梅拉蒂和伊莎贝尔决定立即采取积极行动。她们首先在社区发出倡议,召集邻居和朋友们一起参与海滩清洁活动。活动当天,大家带着垃圾袋、手套等工具来到海滩。姐妹俩以身作则,不怕脏不怕累,认真地捡起每一片垃圾。同时,她们还向人们宣传减少使用塑料制品的重要性,倡导大家养成环保的生活习惯。尽管过程中遇到一些不理解的声音,但她们始终没有放弃,用实际行动感染着身边的每一个人。11续写思路分析Para2:Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.一个月后,梅拉蒂接到了当地报纸的电话。原来,报纸关注到了她们的环保行动,并决定进行报道。这篇报道一经刊发,引起了社会的广泛关注。越来越多的人受到鼓舞,加入到保护海滩的行列中来。海滩的环境得到了明显改善,曾经脏乱的景象逐渐消失,又恢复了往日的美丽。姐妹俩看到自己的努力有了成果,心中充满了成就感,也更加坚定了继续为环保事业贡献力量的决心。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现MelatiandIsabeldecidedtomakeapositiveimpactstraightaway.Theyfirstinitiatedaninitiativeinthecommunity,callingonneighborsandfriendstojointhebeachclean-upactivity.Onthedayoftheevent,everyonearrivedatthebeachequippedwithgarbagebags,gloves,andothertools.Thesistersledbyexample,notafraidofgettingdirtyortired,andcarefullypickedupeverypieceofgarbage.Meanwhile,theyalsopublicizedtheimportanceofreducingtheuseofplasticproducts,advocatingforeveryonetodevelopenvironmentally-friendlylivinghabits.Althoughtheyencounteredsomevoicesofmisunderstandingduringtheprocess,theynevergaveupandinspiredeveryonearoundthemwiththeiractions.14范文呈现Onemonthlater,Melatireceivedacallfromthelocalnewspaper.Itturnedoutthatthenewspaperhadnoticedtheirenvironmentalprotectionactionsanddecidedtoreportonthem.Oncethereportwaspublished,itattractedwidespreadattentionfromsociety.Moreandmorepeoplewereinspiredandjoinedtheranksofprotectingthebeach.Thebeachenvironmenthasbeensignificantlyimproved,andtheoncedirtyandmessyscenehasgraduallydisappeared,restoringitsformerbeauty.Seeingtheresultsoftheirefforts,thesisterswerefilledwithasenseofachievementandbecameevenmoredeterminedtocontinuecontributingtotheenvironmentalprotectioncause.15升级版范文呈现MelatiandIsabel,drivenbyanunwaveringdetermination,resolvedtoeffectanimmediatepositivechange.Launchinganimpassionedappealwithintheircommunity,theysuccessfullyralliedneighborsandfriendstopartakeinthebeachclean-upcampaign.Whenthedayofactionarrived,thevolunteersconvergedontheshore,armedwithgarbagebags,gloves,andasharedsenseofpurpose.Leadingbyexample,thesistersfearlesslyplungedintothetask,meticulouslycollectingeveryfragmentofplasticwaste.Simultaneously,theyengagedinearnestconversationswithonlookers,underscoringtheurgentneedtoreduceplasticconsumptionandespousingtheadoptionofsustainablehabits.Despitefacingoccasionalresistanceandskepticism,theirresolveremainedunshaken,andtheirunwaveringcommitmentservedasapowerfulcatalystforchange.16升级版范文呈现Amonthelapsed,andMelati'sphonerangwithanunexpectedcallfromthelocalnewspaper.Ittranspiredthattheirtirelesseffortshadnotgoneunnoticed,andthenewspaperhaddecidedtofeaturetheirstory.Oncepublished,thearticlereverberatedthroughoutthecommunity,ignitingawaveofpublicint
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