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SummaryWriting

ByJanetAsummaryisa

shortstatement(陈述)thatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsomething,notthedetails.（细节）

Whatisasummary?concise简洁的Howtowriteagoodsummary5DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?Step1Readfortheoutline.What’sthetopicofthispassage？DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?What’sthewritingstyleofthepassage?NarrationArgumentationExpositionABC①②③④①②③④①②③④A B CWhat’sthestructureofthepassage?

Topic:DoSportsStarsDeserveHighPay?Reason1Reason2Reason3ThestructureofthepassageConclusionStep2Findthekeypointsandunderlinethem.Para1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Para1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.FactPara1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.

Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.ExamplePara1

Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollars.Somepeopleholdtheviewthat

thesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributionstosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,ect.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Opinions

ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Somepeoplearguethatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpay.Tip1:Omitdetails&specificexamples.（删除细节和具体例子）Tip2:Keepgeneralwordsratherthanspecificones.（保留概括性词语）Tip3:Payattentiontosignalwords（信号词）:however,but,infact,therefore,thus,inshort,inmyopinion

TipsforfindingkeyinformationPara2

Whilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople'slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames?Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.ReasonPara2

Whilesportsareforentertainment,itdoesnotmeanthattheyarenotimportanttopeople'slife.WhydosomanypeoplegotoseefootballmatchesandNBAgames?Itisbecausetheyenjoythegames,andtheyarewillingtopaytowatchtheperformances.Becauseofthesportsstars,ourlifebecomesmoreexciting.Somesportsstarsgainhonorfortheircountry,andtheircountrymenareproudofthem.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.ReasonPara3

What'smore,sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara3

What'smore,

sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalentsbutalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara3

What'smore,

sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.Inthisworld,youhavetopayifyouwantthebest.Itisthesamewithsports.Skillsinsportsareliketheskillsinworksofart.PeoplewillnotsaythatDavinci'spaintingMonaLisawasboughtfortoomuchmoney.Moststarsareskilledintheirownfieldnotonlybecauseoftheirtalents

butalsobecauseoftheirhardtraining.Theyhavetokeepperformingattheirpeaktoearnthatgoodincome.ReasonPara4

Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknowntotheworld,theyattractmanypeople'sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesofproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.ReasonPara4

Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.TakeNBAinAmericaforexample,thestarshelptosupportnotonlythebasketballindustry,butalsootherrelatedindustrieslikesportswearandsportequipment.Sportsstarsalsomakeconstantappearanceinadvertisements.Sincetheyarewellknowntotheworld,theyattractmanypeople'sattention,whichoftenleadstoanimmediateboominthesalesofproductsthatareadvertisedbythem.ReasonStep3Paraphrase

(改写)thekeypoints.Para.1

Icanneveragreewiththeviewthatsportsstarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.

neveragreewith=___________________donotdeservethehighpay=____________（反义替换）（同义替换）oppose/objectto/beagainstshouldn'tearnsomuchmoneyPara.1

Icanneveragreewiththeviewthatsportsstarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.__________holdtheviewthatsportsstarsshouldn'tearnsomuchmoney,but________

thinkstheydodeservetheirhighpay.（改变句式）__________somepeople’sviews,thewriterbelievessportsstars’payisnottoohighbut________.（合理的）（改变句式）Manypeople

thewriterDifferentfromreasonable1.Usesynonymsorantonyms(运用同义词或反义词)2.changesentencepatterns（改变句式）3.changethevoice（改变语态）Hiscontributionsshouldberecognized

bypeople.People

shouldrecognizehiscontributions.Howtoparaphrasethekeypoints？Haveatry!Reason1Reason2Reason3Conclusion

Theyareimportanttopeople'slife.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.Sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.

talents,hardwork,Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.keysentences

Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.同义替换、句型转换语态转换、同义替换语态转换、同义替换同义替换、句型转换Reason1

Theyareimportanttopeople'slife.Theycontributetothespiritualwell-beingoftheirpeople.Theyareofgreatimportancetopeople'slifeby__________（提高，促进）people'sspiritualhappiness.promoting同义替换、句型转换Sportsstarsusuallyareatthetopoflevelintheirfields.talentsandhardworkTheyobtaintheir__________（成就）throughtheirtalentsandhardwork,sothey________________（应该）toearnalot.achievementdeserve/arequalifiedReason2

同义替换、句型转换Theirinfluenceonthenationaleconomycannotbeoverlooked.They_________________（促进提高）thenationaleconomybyexertingtheirreputationandinfluence.boom/promoteReason3

语态转换、同义替换Ihopeonedaytheiraccomplishmentswillbefullyrecognized.Peopleshouldfully_______________（意识到）theirvalue.Conlusion

realize/beawareof语态转换、同义替换Step4Addpropertransitionalwords.(过渡词)Differentfromsomepeople'sviews,thewriterbelievessport