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2025年八省联考读后续写动物救援骑行者试题再现01原题再现

①IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary

（纪录片）aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.

②Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestless（坐立不安的）andbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobrave（v.勇敢面对）

it.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.

③Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istopped

inshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers---verybig,tough-lookingbikers.

情节

情感

续写复现词汇原题再现

④I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen---allwearinginsignia（徽章）thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub----standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?

⑤AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.Paragraph1:Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Paragraph2:Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.

试题分析02

梗概

原文讲述了一位热爱动物的女士独自去观看救助动物纪录片的故事。在前往活动的路上，她遇到了一群外形“凶悍”的骑士，这让她感到恐惧和不安。然而，这次经历最终让她感受到人与动物之间的美好联系，并对骑士们有了全新的认识。这个故事的情感转折点在于从“恐惧”到“释然”，再到“感动”。续写时需要抓住以下要点：人物心理：恐惧-犹豫-释然-感动。情节转折：骑士身份反转，从让人害怕到展现他们善良的一面。情感升华：通过骑士的行动传递人性善良、动物保护或不要以貌取人的主题。主旨点题：人与动物和谐共处的重要性或者不要以貌取人。

视角：第一人称

读故事Emotion看到广告决定前往前往途中看到骑手忐忑入场？expected&alittleworriedrestlessboredtobraveshocked;uneasynervous,alarming,struggleexpected;tryingtocalm?故事线&情感线Plot写作思路03读清续写段首句，初步确定两段情节Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.6.情节转折：揭示摩托车手的真实身份，带来情感的转折点。7.环境描写：描写放映厅温暖的氛围，为情感升华铺垫。8.情节描写：描述纪录片的内容。

9.语言描写：主人公和摩托车手的互动10.主题点睛：点明故事主旨，传递动物保护和善良的意义，不要以貌取人。1.情感描写：描写主人公看到摩托车手时的恐惧与紧张。2.细节描写：展现摩托车手的外貌与主人公的观察。3.动作链推进：通过主人公的动作，推动情节向下一步发展。4.冲突铺垫：预示情节转折，暗示摩托车手并非主人公想象的那样。5.情感推进：主人公从恐惧到疑惑，为转折做铺垫。Para.1内心冲突与转折Para.2情感升华与主题点明Plot1:

情感描写：描写主人公看到骑士时的恐惧与紧张。

1.一阵恐惧感传遍全身当我注意到剧院里面满是摩托车手，都戴着徽章。（无灵主语句）AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.Plot2:细节描写：展现骑士们的外貌与主人公的观察。

皮夹克、沉重的靴子以及他们不礼貌的盯看使得我的心跳得更快了。Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.Plot3:

动作链推进：通过主人公的动作，推动情节向下一步发展。

紧紧握住我的钱包，我迅速就坐在剧院的后面的座位，试图不被注意到。(v-ing作状语)Holdingmywallettightly,Iquicklyseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.Plot4:

冲突铺垫：暗示骑士们并非主人公想象的那样。

但是，我一安顿下来，我看到一个摩托车手正在人真地调整投影仪，另外一个摩托车手正在抚摸他旁边的小狗。(themoment...;petv.

抚摸)However,themomentIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingtheprojectorandanothergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.Plot5:情感推进：主人公从恐惧到疑惑，为转折做铺垫。

他们出乎意料的举动在我的思想中种下了一颗疑问的种子-也许我误判了他们。Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.Plot6:情节转折：揭示骑士的真实身份，带来情感的转折点。

纪录片一开始我就意识到这些摩托车手是热情的动物援救者，致力于救助流浪狗。（nosooner...than...;devote/commit/dedicate）NosoonerhadthedocumentarystartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.Plot7:

环境描写：描写放映厅温暖的氛围，为情感升华铺垫。纪录片播放着，剧院里充满了舒缓的音乐，所有的摩托车手专注地看着影片。（with复合结构）Withthedocumentaryon,thetheaterwasfilledwiththesoftmusic,andthebikerswatchedthefilmattentively.Plot8:描述纪录片的内容。

Thedocumentarystartedwithastoryabouthowtheyhadbeentravelingacrossstates,rescuingdogsfromtoughsituations.纪录片以他们如何跨越不同的州，在困难的状况下挽救流浪狗开始。Plot9:

语言描写：主人公和摩托车手的互动Duringthescreening,noticingmyinitialunease,onebikerapproachedandsaid,“Hey,lady,wedon’tbite.We'rejusthereforthepoordogs.”Hiswordsmademefeelawkwardyetwarm.在放映期间，

注意到我最初的不安，一个摩托车手走上前来并说到......Plot10:主题点睛：点明故事主旨，传递动物保护和善良的意义，不要以貌取人。Afterthisexperience,notonlydidIlearnthelessonofnotjudgingapersonbytheirappearance,butalsoIwasluckyenoughtoencounteragroupofpeoplecontributingtomakingtheworldbetterforanimals.范文赏析04

Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.

AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.Holdingmywallettightly,Iquicklyseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.However,nosoonerhadIsettledinthanInoticedabikercarefullyadjustingtheprojectorandanothergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinm