基础写作（求助、咨询信）课件-高三英语上学期二轮复习专项

应用文写作突破训练求助/咨询信顾名思义，求助信就是写信请求对方的帮助。写信人求助是处于劣势的一方，应该处处体现恭敬和谦卑。言辞恳切的语言（speechinearnestlanguage）是其最主要的特征。写信过程可以看成是求助人设法让施助者了解、同情自己的过程，以求得到帮助。特别是提供帮助会损害施助者利益的时候，更要小心措辞，要充分体现礼貌原则。晨读晚背一、必背词语1.开头段①寻求帮助/建议_________________②给某人关于……建议

_______________③请您帮个忙__________________④帮我解决这些问题__________________________________________ask/seekforhelp/advice/suggestionsgive/offersbadviceon…askyouafavorhelpmesolvetheseproblemsbegratefultosbforsth2.结尾段①因某事感激某人__________________②提前感谢您

__________________③需要进一步的信息

__________________thankyouinadvanceneedfurtherinformation3.中间段①一次难忘的经历

________________②一份珍贵的礼物

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③学习中心

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anunforgettableexperienceapreciousgiftthelearningcentre④擅长/不擅长

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⑤面临困难

__________________⑥(做)某事有困难

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⑦从事兼职工作

______________⑧拓宽我的视野

______________⑨获得一些工作经验

______________⑩补充一些内容

______________⑪附上一些材料

______________takeupapart-timejobbefacedwithdifficultieshavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sthbegood/poorataddsomecontentsbroadenmyhorizonsgainsomeworkingexperienceattachsomematerials⑫参加一个英语演讲比赛________________________________⑬为它做充分的准备

________________⑭收集有用的材料________________⑮有一个很好的表现_______________⑯给某人留下深刻印象______________⑰到机场去接他

_________________⑱带他去宾馆______________makegood/fullpreparationsforittakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestcollectusefulmaterialshaveaverygoodperformanceleavesbadeepimpressionmeethimattheairporttakehimtothehotel二、必背好句1.开头段常用语①如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。

____________________________________________________________________________________________Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucoulddomeafavour./Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.⑲把它寄回给我______________⑳把它带给你

_____________senditbacktomebringittoyou②不知道我是否可以请您帮个忙？

__________________________________________________________________________________________________③很抱歉打扰你了，但我真的需要你在……方面帮助我。__________________________________________________________________________________________________④面对这么大的困难，我不得不向你寻求一些帮助。__________________________________________________________________________________________________IwonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor./Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIreallyneedyourhelpwith...Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.2.结尾段常用语①我真诚地希望您能就如何学好语法给我建议。____________________________________________________________________________________________②如果您给我建议我将感激不尽。________________

______________________________________________③谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。______________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanoffer/givemesomeadviceonhowtolearngrammar.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIlookforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.④谢谢您的好意。_________________________________________________Thankyouverymuchforallyourkindness.3.中间段常用语①我真不知道怎么办才好，希望你能给我一些建议。__________________________________________________________________________________________________Ireallydon’tknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice.②我感谢你在帮我处理这个问题上所做的任何事情。__________________________________________________________________________________________________③你能否给我一些建议？_________________________________________________Iwouldappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpmewiththismatter.Wouldyouliketogivemesomeusefuladvice?典例示范假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括:1.说明比赛要求；2.请他推荐英文诗；3.请教朗诵技巧。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.George,______________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua步骤一：审题文体求助信写作情境准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛，写信请求外教指导信的作者李华（在校学生）写作对象/读者外教George时态一般现在时为主语气礼貌、谦卑恳切，使用正式的措辞以示尊重步骤二：谋篇布局步骤三：经典范文熟记文中黑体词块及有下画线的功能句型。DearMr.George,I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.OurschoolwillholdanEnglishPoetryReadingContestnextweekend.Iameagertohaveatry.Participantsarerequiredtoreciteadelicately-selectedEnglishpoemwithinatimelimitof3minutes.Winnersareexpectedtowinthreejudges’creditsandtheaudience’sheart.【要点1：比赛要求】However,whattroublesmetonoendisthatIhaven’tfoundamarvelouspoemyet.Iwonderifyoucould

recommendafewEnglishpoemstomethatarepositiveandtothepoint.Moreover,wouldyoubekindenoughto

offermesomeguidanceonmyreadingskillssuchasthetune,theemotionandthegesture?【要点2：请求帮助。推荐诗歌+具体遇到的困难】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply. Yours,LiHua即时训练训练一假设你是李华，最近你和父母相处不是很愉快，因此感到有些苦恼。为此，请向英语报社“知心话栏目”写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.简述情况；3.表达希望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearEditor,I’mLiHua,asenior3student._______________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearEditor,I’mLiHua,asenior3student.Recently,Ihavehadaterribleconflictwithmyparents.IreallyfeelannoyedsoIamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Here’sthewayittookplace.Lastweek,therewasacomprehensiveexamtocheckouracademicachievementinSenior3.Unfortunately,Ididn’thaveagoodperformance.Whenmyparentssawmysharpdeclineingrades,theyattributedittomyplayingcomputergamesatweekends.Ifeelcompletelyinnocentandhelpless.Actually,Ijustspendanhouronthegametorelaxmyselfeveryweekend.IguesstherootofmyproblemisthatIhavebeenundergreatpressure,butIdon’tknowhowtoexplainittomyparents.Couldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestionsonhowtocommunicatewithmyparents?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua

训练二假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：1.阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表达感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearChris,RecentlyourschoolisplanningtoholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeofintroducingChinesetraditionalculture,whichwillbepostedonsomeEnglishwebsites,soI’mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadvice.Asyouknow,Chinaisacountrywitharichcultureandlonghistory.Attractingmoreforeignvisitors