基础写作（短文投稿类应用文）课件-高三英语二轮复习专项

应用文写作突破训练短文投稿类应用文短文类应用文即根据写作情景的要求，写一篇短文，通常为说明文，参与征文活动或报纸、杂志的投稿。典例示范一、写作情景一学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，庆祝它创办10周年。内容包括：1.读报经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期待与祝福。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

一、审题审题要素情景一写作情景庆祝校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年征文话题报刊阅读作者考生本人写作对象

涉及的功能表达全校师生1.表示祝贺2.描述读报经历和喜爱的栏目3.表达期待与祝福Youth

andMeAsaloyalfanofYouth,Iwouldliketoextendmywarmcongratulationsontheoccasionofthe10thanniversaryofitsfounding.【总起段：回应写作情景，表示祝贺】IcanwellrememberhowdeeplyattractedIwasbyitsuniquelayoutdesignandlanguagestylethefirsttimeIreadit.【要点1：读报经历】Sincethen,Ihavehadtoreadeveryissue,inwhichIappreciatethecolumnSchoolCulturebest.【要点2：喜爱的栏目】Becauseitintroducesourschoolculturefrommanyaspects,whichenablesmetohaveadeeperunderstandingoftheconnotationofschool.【要点2的展开，说明原因】ThemoreIread,themoreIloveourschoolandYouth.Duringmyhighschoollife,YouthenrichesmyspiritualworldandwitnessesmyprogressinEnglish.Wordsfailtoconveymyfeelings.MayeachsucceedingyearbringYouthgreaterdevelopment!【要点3：期待与祝福】【经典范文】二、写作情景二你校英语节组织“你最喜爱的卡通电影人物”英语征文评选。你打算推荐“花木兰”，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选。1.简述木兰代父从军的故事；2.你喜欢这一角色的理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。IwishtochooseMulanasmyfavouritecartooncharacter.

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谋篇布局【经典范文】IwishtochooseMulanasmyfavouritecartooncharacter.【总起段：推荐的人物】Livinginancienttimes,（V-ing作状语）Mulanwasayounggirlwhowas

determinedtosacrificeherselfandreplaceherfathertojointhearmywithouthesitation.（定语从句）【主题句】Toavoidbeingseenthrough,Mulandisguisedherselfasamantotrickthearmyofficers.ItwasnotuntilMulanreturnedtoherhometownwithhonorandremovedherdisguisethatherfellowsoldiersrealizedshewasafemale.【展开句；要点1：木兰代父从军的故事】ThereasonwhyIlovethischaracteristhatsheisbothbraveandcaring.【主题句】Shefightedwithcourageanddeterminationandshemadegreatcontributionstohercountry.Sheisalsoawonderfulrolemodel,showingwomenandordinarypeoplethattheyneednotfeellimitedaboutwhattheycanachieve.【展开句；要点2：喜欢木兰的理由】Aboveall,MulanissuchanattractivecharacterthatIadmiremost.【总结段：再次说明木兰的人物特征】三、写作情景三某英文杂志开设“一周一成语”专栏，向外国读者介绍中国成语。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍成语“锲而不舍”。内容包括：1.解释字面意思；2.阐释道理。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。锲而不舍（QieErBuShe）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

变式训练一

根据已给范文内容，为“写作情景三”写一个总起段，和两个主题句。

锲而不舍（QieErBuShe）总起段：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________分段1主题句：________________________________________________“锲(Qie)”means“theactofcarvingonthegoldstone”.Asfor“而(Er)”,itissimilarto“and”inEnglish.Whenitcomesto“不舍(BuShe)”,itsimplymeans“nevergiveup”.Chineseculturevaluesthegreatspiritofpersistence.Lotsofidiomsexpresssuchmeaning,amongwhichistheonewe’llintroducethisweek—锲而不舍(QieErBuShe).Literally,themeaningofthisidiomliesineachcharacter.分段2主题句：_________________________________________It,asawhole,suggestsifwekeepcarving,wewilleventuallyturnametalorstonepieceintoanartworknomatterhowharditis.Takingcarvingmetalorstoneasananalogy,thisidiomhighlightsthemoralthatifwedon’tgiveup,wewillachieveourgoaloneday.总结段：Shortastheidiomis,itdemonstratesthefundamentalprincipleoftheChineseancestorsandhasaprofoundinfluenceontheChinese.Theidiomconveystheimportanceofperseverance.四、写作情景四为迎接一年一度的重阳节，学校英文报举办以“关爱老人”为主题的征文比赛。请写一篇英语短文参赛，包括以下要点：1.重阳节的意义；2.如何关爱老人；3.期望与呼吁。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。LovetheElderly_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

变式训练二

根据已给范文内容，为“写作情景四”的分段要点2.“如何关爱老人”写展开句。

LovetheElderlyTheChongyangFestivalfallsontheninthdayoftheninthmonthofthelunarcalendar.Nine,asthebiggestsinglenumber,representslonglifeandhappiness.That’swhyChinacelebratesSeniorCitizen’sDayontheninthoftheninthmonth.Itsymbolizesrespectandlovefortheold.Asourpopulationages,it’smoreimportantthaneverthattheelderlyarewelltakencareof.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopefully,byworkingtogetherwecanimprovethelatteryearsofourseniorcitizens.Aftertheirlifetimeofhardwork,it’stheleasttheydeserve.Youngpeopleshouldkeeptheirparentsorgrandparentscompanyregularly.Asasociety,weshouldbuildmorenursinghomeswheretheelderlycanbesafeandenjoytheirretirementtogether.五、写作情景五你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。

变式训练三

参考所给语块，完成“写作情景五”写作任务。1.提高人们对海洋保护的认识raisepeople’sawarenessofoceanconservation2.提供我们食物的主要来源provideamajorsourceofourfood3.在调节气候方面发挥着重要作用playasignificantroleinregulatingtheclimate4.……是世界大部分经济的基础…serveasthefoundationformuchoftheworld’seconomy5.肩负起保护……的责任shouldertheresponsibilitytoprotect…6.从小开始startwithsmallactions7.是时候……itishightimeto…OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Itwaslaunchedtoraisepeople’sawarenessofoceanconservation.ItiscommonlyacknowledgedthatoceansaresignificanttoourplanetEarth.Withabundantfishandotherseafood,theyprovideamajorsourceofourfood.Besides,itplaysasignificantroleinregulatingtheclimateanditabsorbstheheatandgeneratestheoxygenwebreathe.Lastbutnotleast,theyalsoserveasthefoundationformuchoftheworld’seconomy,supportingsectorsfromtourismtofisheriestointernationalshipping.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Asoceansbringsomanybenefits,undoubtedlyitiscrucialforustoshoulderourresponsibilitytoprotectthem.Firstofall,let’sstartwithsmallactionslikenotthrowinggarbageintotheoceanstoprotectmarinehabitats.Secondly,itishightimetoappealtopolicymakerstotakemeasurestohandletheissuesofoverfishingandwaterpollution.Allinall,toprotecttheoceanistoprotectourselves.变式训练四

完成写作任务。

你校英文报“TeenageLife”本期专栏的主题为“SportsandHealth”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.运动的重要性；2.你的运动建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。SportsandHealth________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Itiscommonlyacknowledgedthatsportsaresignificanttoourhealth.Thisisespeciallytrueforusteenagers.Aswearestillinthecriticalstageofgrowingup,doingsportscanbuildupourbodies,thushelpingusstayenerg