读后续写-遇见苦难点亮卖爆米花男孩的希望讲义-湖北省新高考协作体2024-2025学年高一上学期12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Aftercollegegraduation,Ibecameaneditorofourcityeveningpaperandwaspromotedtothedeputy(副的)editorofthepaperfiveyearslater.Oneday,asIparkedmycarandwalkedtowardstheoffice,Inoticedtwoboyswhoappearedtobearoundeightyearsold,sellingpopcornonthestreetcorner.Curious,Iapproachedthemandrequestedhalfakilogramofpopcorn.Theyprepareditformewithinfiveminutes.“Howmuchisit?”Iasked.“It’s30rupees，sir,”theyreplied.Ithenaskedtheirnames,andtheyanswered,“Sahib,Asib.”IaskedSahibwhytheyweren’tinschoolandweresellingpopcorninstead.Sahibexplainedthattheyweredoingittoearnmoneyfortheirschooling.However,Asibquicklyinterjected(插话),sayingtheyhadnomoneyleftaftercoveringfoodandmedicine,nottomentionschoolingfees.“Medicineforwhat?Youguysarelookingwell,”Isaid.Asibreplied,“Ourmotherhasakidney(肾)disease,soweneedmoneytopurchasemedicineforhertreatment.”WhenIaskedabouttheirfather,Sahibsadlysharedthathehadpassedawayfromcancerfouryearsbefore,leavingtheirmothertosupportthemwithtwojobs.Iwasdeeplymovedandstruggledtofindwords.Beforeleaving,Iaskedwhethertheywouldbetherethenextday,intendingtobuysomethen.Theyassuredmetheywoulde.“Takecare,boys,”IsaidasIleft.Thenextday,IreturnedtothespotwhereIhadmetSahibandAsibthedaybefore,buttheywerenotsellingpopcornasusual,standingtherewithasinglebagofpopcorn.Iaskedwhyandtheyexplainedthattheyhadbeenwaitingformebuthadtoleavebecausetheirmother’shealthhadgotworse.Icouldseeintheireyesthattheirheartsbrokebecauseofsadness,soIdecidedtodosomethingtohelpthetwohonestanddutifulkids.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph1:Itoldthemthattheyweretooyoungtobeartheheavyburdenalone._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthistouchingstoryandmadethedecisiontoshareitwiththepublic.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意大学毕业后成为报社编辑的“我”，某天遇到两个约八岁的男孩Sahib和Asib在街头卖爆米花。交谈后得知，他们卖爆米花是为了攒学费，母亲患肾病需钱买药，父亲四年前因癌去世，家庭重担全落在母亲身上。第二天“我”再去时，他们因母亲病情恶化没像往常一样卖爆米花，“我”决定伸出援手帮助这两个懂事的孩子。二、故事山分析开场：“我”偶遇卖爆米花的男孩，日常场景引出故事，引发读者好奇。上升：与男孩交流，知晓他们凄惨家境，博得读者同情，为“我”情感转变铺垫。转折：次日男孩因母亲病重未正常卖爆米花，情节急转，困境升级，“我”决定介入。高潮：“我”承诺帮助，联系各方给予实际支持，众人爱心汇聚，情绪激昂。下降：故事后续发展暂平缓，着眼于帮助落实，如物资送达、辅导安排。结局：（续写可补充）男孩生活改善，“我”感悟人性美好，温情收尾，升华主题。三、伏笔及续写回应伏笔：男孩卖爆米花称是为挣学费。

回应：后续“我”联系慈善组织，为他们争取到上学资助，让男孩有望重返校园，实现卖爆米花初衷。伏笔：提及母亲肾病需买药，钱不够。

回应：爱心人士捐赠药品、医院提供免费检查，缓解母亲就医难题，使家庭医药负担减轻。伏笔：父亲四年前因癌去世，母亲打两份工养家。

回应：唤起大众同情，促使社区居民纷纷伸出援手，提供生活物资、经济援助，填补家庭经济缺口。伏笔：“我”询问男孩次日是否还在，他们答应会来。

回应：“我”次日前往相遇地点，发现异常后决定帮忙，情节连贯，强化“我”与男孩关联。伏笔：“我”身为报社编辑。

回应：利用职业优势发表文章，引发社会关注，借助舆论力量推动帮扶行动，发挥关键作用。四、续写要点第一段：描述“我”安抚男孩情绪，用温和坚定话语让他们安心，如“Boys,don’tworry.I’llwalkthroughthiswithyou.”。展现“我”陪男孩回家看望母亲，目睹家中艰难环境，触动更深。讲述“我”凭借人脉联系慈善机构、医院、社区等，初步协调救助资源，如食物、药品配送安排。第二段：详细写撰写文章过程，突出故事感人细节，引发读者共鸣，如描述男孩纯真眼神、母亲憔悴面容。说明文章发表后引发社会强烈反响，列举各方援助行动，像企业捐款、志愿者家教服务。结尾体现“我”见证男孩生活改善的欣慰，升华对人性善良、互助力量的赞美。五、情感线开篇“我”好奇、怜悯男孩；了解家境后满心同情、揪心；次日见男孩异常，决心帮扶，态度坚定；帮助过程中急切、热忱；获社会响应后欣慰、感动；最终因男孩生活好转，体悟人性美好，沉浸温暖，情感层层递进升华。六、故事线“我”街边偶遇卖爆米花男孩。交谈得知男孩家庭困境。次日“我”再寻男孩，遇变故。“我”决定帮助，联系各方。“我”写文章披露，引发关注。社会援助至，男孩生活改善。七、主旨升华句Inthefaceofhardship,asmallactofkindnesscanigniteachainreactionoflove,illuminatingthedarkestcorners.面对困境，一个小小的善举能点燃爱的连锁反应，照亮最黑暗的角落。Sometimes,reachingoutahelpinghandisnotonlychangingsomeone’slifebutalsoenrichingourownsouls.有时候，伸出援手不仅改变他人生活，也充实我们自己的灵魂。Thepowerofunityandpassionliesinitsabilitytoturndespairintohope,onesmalldeedatatime.团结与同情的力量在于它能一次次将绝望变为希望，从小事做起。Truekindnessknowsnobounds;ittravelsfromhearttoheart,creatingaworldwherenoonestandsalone.真正的善良无界限，它从心传递到心，创造一个无人孤独的世界。Whenweopenourheartstothemisfortunesofothers,wefindthatthegreatestgiftwereceiveisthewarmthofhumanity.当我们向他人的不幸敞开心扉，我们发现所获最大礼物是人性的温暖。八、写作示范第一篇Paragraph1:

Itoldthemthattheyweretooyoungtobeartheheavyburdenalone.Gentlysqueezingtheirhands,Isaid,“Kids,you’renotaloneanymore.I’llhelpyou.”Theireyeswidenedindisbeliefyetglimmeredwithhope.Wehurriedtotheirshabbyhome.Thesightoftheirfrailmotheronthebed,gaspingforbreath,piercedmyheart.Withouthesitation,IdialedthenumbersofseveralcharitiesI’dworkedwith.Explainingtheurgentsituation,Ipleadedforimmediateassistance.Beforelong,alocalfoodbankpromisedtodelivergroceries,andamedicalteamvolunteeredtovisittheirmother.Paragraph2:

Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthistouchingstoryandmadethedecisiontoshareitwiththepublic.Icraftedeachwordcarefully,paintingavividpictureoftheboys’plightandtheirunwaveringspirit.Thenextday,thearticlehitthefrontpage.Almostinstantly,thephonerangoffthehook.Peoplefromallwalksoflifecalledtoofferhelp.Aretiredteacherofferedfreetutoring,andagroupofbusinessmenpooledfundsforthefamily’slongtermneeds.Watchingtheboys’faceslightupaslifegraduallyimproved,Irealizedthatinhelpingthem,I’dfoundadeepermeaningoflife–thebeautyofgiving.第二篇Paragraph1:

Itoldthemthattheyweretooyoungtobeartheheavyburdenalone.Lookingstraightintotheireyes,Iwhispered,“Boys,thisistoomuchforyou.Letmestepin.”Theynodded,tearswellingup.Werushedtotheirhome,acrampedanddilapidatedplace.Theirmotherlaythere,tooweaktoevensitup.Iimmediatelyreachedouttomynetwork.Anearbyhospitalagreedtoprovidefreemedicaltreatment,andacharityorganizationpledgedtocoverpartoftheirschoolexpenses.Theboysclungtome,theirsobssubsidingastheyfeltaglimmerofhope.Paragraph2:

Atmyoffice,Ipenneddownthistouchingstoryandmadethedecisiontoshareitwiththepublic.Ipouredmyheartintothearticle,highlightingtheboys’innocenceandthefamily’sstruggle.Oncepublished,itwaslikeastonethrownintoapond,causingripplesofkindness.Volunteersflockedtohelpwithhouseholdchores,andschoolsofferedscholarships.Asthedayspassed,seeingtheboysreturntoschoolandtheirmother’shealthstabilize,Iunderstoodthatkindnesswascontagious.Andinspreadingit,wecouldcreateaworldfilledwithloveandcare.参考答案Paragraph1Itoldthemthattheyweretooyoungtobeartheheavyburdenalone.Withthesewords,Itookout2,000rupeesandhandedthemoneytothem.Theyweretooshockedtosayaword.ItoldthemIwouldtrymybesttohelpthemgobacktoschoolandhelptheirmothercureherdisease.Hearingthesewords,theboysweresotouchedthattearspouredouto