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Unit11.（1）beneficial（2）good（3）profitable（4）healthful（5）healthy2.Omitted3.smug:沾沾自喜的，自鸣得意的，表现出对自己或自己的处境令人反感的满意与自以为是的自大。这个词体现出小镇人过度的自我满足，具有很强的讽刺意味。如果用satisfied,content等词就表达不出这个效果来。placid:强调的是安静、不被外界打扰，而且有自满、自足的意思。这个词进一步描写出小镇人自我知足、与世隔绝的状态。bake一词的应用形象地强调了夏日太阳的灼热和干燥。4.cracktownon→crackdownonlakeallowancesfor→makeallowanceforkeepabreastwith→keepabreastoffardryfromperfection→moredrythanperfectionsin→thin5.Nounphrasesrelaxation,entertainment,andeducation;pressure,challenges,orconcentration;CasablancaorSleepless;first-runmovies,rockandclassicalmusicconcerts,andspecializedsportsevents;colors,numbers,andletters;Verbphraseswecanusetelevisiontorelax,tohavefun,andtomakeourselvessmarter;toaccessandlearnfromalltheinformationresourcesontheInternet;buyorrentmoviestoshowontheirtelevisionsetsthroughDVDplayersorVCRs;seeandhear;weliketocriticizeitandsearchforitsflaws;Mixedphrasessoothingandrestful;leavesviewersrefreshedandreadytotakeontheworldagainUnit21)12simplesentences(简单句),4complexsentences(复合句),5compoundsentences(并列句)；如语篇所示，2)Moresimplesentencesthantheotherareusedintheessay.Agoodcompanionisbetterthanafortune,forafortunecannotpurchasethoseelementsofcharacterwhichmakecompanionshipablessing（并列）.Thebestcompanionisonewhoiswiserandbetterthanourselves,forweareinspiredbyhiswisdomandvirtuetonoblerdeeds（并列复合）.Greaterwisdomandgoodnessthanwepossessliftsushighermentallyandmorally.（简单句）“Amanisknownbythecompanionhekeeps.”（简单)Itisalwaystrue.(简单)Companionshipofahighorderispowerfultodevelopcharacter.简单Charactermakescharacterintheassociationsoflifefasterthananythingelse.(简单)Puritybegetspurity,likebegetslike;andthisfactmakesthechoiceofcompanioninearlylifemoreimportanteventhanthatofteachersandguardians(并列)Itistruethatwecannotalwayschooseallofourcompanions,somearethrustuponusbybusinessorthesocialrelationsoflife,wedonotchoosethem,wedonotenjoythem;andyet,wehavetoassociatewiththemmoreorless.(复合)Theexperienceisnotaltogetherwithoutcompensation,iftherebeprincipleenoughinustobearthestrain.(复合)Still,inthemain,choiceofcompanionscanbemade,andmustbemade.(简单)Itisnotbestornecessaryforayoungpersontoassociatewith“Tom,Dick,andHarry”withoutforethoughtorpurpose.(简单)Somefixedrulesaboutthecompanyheorshekeepsmustbeobserved.(简单)Thesubjectshouldbeuttermostinthethoughts,andcanvassedoften.(简单)Companionshipiseducation,goodornot;itdevelopsmanhoodorwomanhood,highorlow;itliftssoulupwardordragsitdownward;itministertovirtueorvice.(并列)Thereisnohalfwayworkaboutitsinfluence.(简单)Ifitennobles,itdoesgrandly,ifitdemoralizes,itdoesn’titdevilishly.(复合)Itsavesordestroyslustily.(简单)Nothingintheworldissurerthanthis.(简单)Sowvirtue,andtheharvestwillbevirtue,Sowvice,andtheharvestwillbevice.(并列)Goodcompanionshiphelpsustosowvirtue;evilcompanionshiphelpsustosowvice.(并列)2.（1）Whensomebodyshowsup,hetellsyoutocomerightin.（2）Thecommunicationisbuiltonahigh-speedtrackforsocietyislinkedbythosesmartsciences.（3）Ifapersonisobese,he/sheshouldconsiderchangingtheirdietandlifestyle,ratherthandoingaliposuction.（4）Peoplecannotavoidmakingunknownmistakes,however,wecanchoosethecorrectattitudetowardsthem.（5）Ifyoualwayshelpothersintrouble,thesocietywillbecomewarmerandmoreharmonious.3.（1）Gradually,thecouplearefedupwitheachother,whichleadstoanextramaritalaffair.（2）Peoplewhoarehavinganaffairshowsnorespectforhisorhermate.（3）Smileisreallymeaningful.Soneverforgettosmile.（4）Blindnessisastatebothphysicallyandmentally.（5）What’sworse,someofthemhavedonesomethingdangerouswhichthreatensoursafetyoflifeandproperty.（6）Thisisanurgentproblem.（7）Ontheonehand,nomatterhowgoodqualityacigaretteownsorhowexpensiveitis,onethingremainsthatplentyofpoisonoussubstancesareencompassedinitsuchasnicotine,tarandcadmium.（8）Itisbecausethewealthypeoplehavemorepowerandmoneytobereleasedonbailandhavemuchknowledgeoftakingadvantageoftheloopholeinlawwhichleavesthepoorandracialminoritiesinadisadvantageposition.（9）Butwedonotcometoschooljustforstudying.（10）Oneofusneedtohaveanewdimensiontoit.4.（1）and（2）so（3）otherwise（4）and(5)but5.①Thestudentswereprotesting,sothereportwascanceled.②Flyingisrelativelysafebecauseairtrafficiscloselycontrolled.③Tigerswerecommonlong,longtimeago,buttheyarenowincreasinglyrare.④Obviously,judgingapersonisextremelycomplexduetovariousunreliablefactors.⑤Thecommunicationisbuiltonahigh-speedtrackbecausesocietyislinkedbythosesmartsciences.Unit31.(1)Thepresidenthasmadethefollowingannouncement:studentswhoneedfinancialassistancemayapplyattheStudentAffairsOffice.(2)Asthesayinggoes,“Nopain,nogain.”Soifyouprepareinadvance,youwillsucceed.(3)GlancingthroughthepaperentitledWhyNotPlayTruant,Mr.Smithfrownedangrily.(4)Theprofessorsaid,“Confuciussays,‘Donotimposeonotherswhatyoudonotdesireyourself.’Thisisaverygoodprincipleofmoralconduct.”(5)SeventeenyearsagothismonthIquitwork,or,ifyouprefer,Iretiredfrombusiness.(6)MollyHerman,wholivesnextdoor,gotaraise.(7)Iwaitedforhim;moreover,Isavedhimaseat.(8)SheenjoysreadingShakespeare’splaysandhasreadHamlet,RomeoandJuliet,KingLearandTheVerchantofVenice.(9)Theyunlockedthecabinandcarriedinourfurniture:acouch,fourchairs,atable,andtwobeds.(10)Thedungeon(reallythebasement)hauntedus.2.(1)Thisnewcreationwillmakethepeopleabletojailbreaktheirdeviceseasily,andmoreoverthissoftwarewillunlocksomenewfeatures.(2)Nevertheless,weallknowthatperformanceisakeyingredientofprogramming.(3)ThisisyournewmanagerJack.(4)Itisbecauseoursparetimeisverylimited.(5)Forthesourceofpressure,mostoftime,isthatataskshouldbefinishedinshorttime.(6)Aslongasbeingarationalconsumer,thewasteofmoneycanbeavoided,andthenmoneycanbesavedbynormalexpenses.(7)Eventherewillbe,thecontentthathasbeenlearnedinmiddleschoolisprettyenoughforthem.(8)Lifeisabigcontainer;wehavetogetalongwithothersbutalsoourselves.(9)Thedistanceyouridelonger,andthepriceishigher.(10)Myfriendsboughtalotofgiftsforme,suchasbooks,flowers,CDsandtoys.(11)Lauferdoesnotexplicitlypresenteachtypeofknowledgefromtheperspectiveofreceptionversusproduction,insteadshe(1990b,2002)simplycommentsthatthesetypesofwordknowledgecouldbeactiveorpassive.3.Nowadays,itisuniversallyacceptedthattheissueofcrimesisincreasinglyserious.Butatthesametime,controversyhasarisenoverwhetherthemediashouldreportthedetailsofcrimes.Somepeopleassertthatthemediacoverageofcrimesdetailsshouldbebannedwhileothersclaimsthatsuchreportshavetheirownadvantages.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldsidewiththeformergroup.Ontheonehand,weshouldacknowledgethatreportsofcriminaldetailsmaycarrygreatrisks.Inthefirstplace,theyrendermanycitizensafraidofcrimesandworriedabouttheirownsafety.Obviously,alotofcityresidentswillfearthatthesamecrimeswillhappentothem,whichcanevenleadtoseriouspsychologicalproblems.Furthermore,mediareportsofcriminaldetailsareunfairforthevictimsofcrimes.Thevictimswhohavesufferedgreatlyfromthesecrimeswouldfeeltheywereforcedtoexperienceanightmareagain.Aboveall,potentialcriminalscanlearnfromsuchreportsdetailstoavoidmistakes,whichmayaddtothedifficultythepolicehaveincapturingcriminals.Ontheotherhand,mediareportsofcriminaldetailsmaycarrycertainbenefits.Thefundamentalreasonforthisisthatsuchreportskeepthepublicalerttocrimes.Shouldallthesereportsdisappearfromthemedia,itwouldbeveryhardforthepublictoknowaboutthecrimesoccurringinsociety.Evenso,itcanbenotedthatthenewsofcrimesspreadbythemediaisoftenexaggerated.Therefore,thepublicmayhaveahardtimedecidinghowdependableanalarmingcrimereportwouldbe.Toconclude,althoughdetailedreportsofcrimesmayhavetheirownadvantages,Ifirmlybelievethattheybringusgreatrisks.Unit41.Sportscars(requirespecificcareandprecisemaintenanceinordertokeepthemrunningwell).Tonnyprobablyis(themostirresponsiblepersonIhaveeverseen).Expertinchild-rearingagreethatchildren(needbothaffectionanddiscipline).(ibid,P106)Educationinanysocietyis(amirrorofthatsociety).EatingintheStudentCenterCafeteriais（aquitepleasantexperience）.Jazz（reflectstwocontradictoryfacetsofAmericanlife）.Infact,aturtle’sshellis(agreatworkofengineeringanddesign).ButGalileo’sgreatestinventionwas(histelescope,)whichenabledhimtomakesomesignificantcontributionstoastronomy.Wecannotexpecttogothroughlife(dependingonotherstodoourthinkingortosolveourpersonalproblems).Peopleimmigratetoanewcountry(foravarietyofpurposes).2.Keystobeopeninthispart.3.1)C2)D3)A4)C5)BUnit51.(1)a.Georgefeltaswornoutastheelbowsonhisworkshirt.b.Georgefeltaswornoutasanoldphonographrecord.c.Georgefeltwornout,likeanoldpunchingbag.d.GeorgefeltaswornoutastherustedImpalathatcarriedhimtoworkeveryday.e.Georgefeltaswornoutasanoldjokethatwasneververyfunnyinthefirstplace.f.Georgefeltwornoutanduseless--justanotherbrokenfanbelt,aburstradiatorhose,astrippedwingnut,adischargedbattery.(2)Open(3)Open(4)Open(5)Open2.NothingcanbemoreimposingthanthemagnificenceofEnglishparkscenery.Vastlawnsthatextendlikesheetsofvividgreen(simile),withhereandthereclumpsofgigantictrees,heapinguprichpilesoffoliage;thesolemnpompofgrovesandwoodlandglades,withthedeertrooping(personification)insilentherds(personification)crossthem;thehareboundingawaytothecovert;orthepheasant,suddenlyburstinguponthewing:thebrook,taughttowindinnaturalmeanderingorexpandintoaglassylake(metaphor):thesequesteredpool,reflectingthequiveringtrees,withyellowleafsleeping(personification)onitsbosom,andthetroutroamingfearlessly(personification)aboutitslimpidwaters;whilesomerustictempleorsylvanstatue,growngreenanddankwithage,givesanairofclassicsanctitytotheseclusion.Therearebutafewofthefeaturesofparkscenery….(Washington,Irving)3.(1)OntheInternet,wecansende-mailmessages,makephonecalls,readallkindsofcartoonandgotothemoviesbyourselves.(2)OntheInternetwecandoshopping,bookingticketsforthetrainortheplaneandsoon.(3)TheInternetisbotheducationalandrelaxinginourlife.(4)Itwidensstudents'knowledgeandhorizons,andmeanwhilecultivatestheirindependenceandpersonalities,andevenimprovestheirforeignlanguagecompetenceeasilyandreally.(5)Anotherbenefitofstudyingabroadiscultivatingstudents’independenceandbuildingtheircharacters.(6)Inthecontrary,thejudicialinterpretationoftheSupremePeople’sCourtengagednotonlyintheabstractinterpretation,butalsointhelawcontentamendingandinvalidating.(7)Inviewoftheactualsituation,weshouldstrengthenthesupervisionoftheNPCStandingCommitteeonJudicialInterpretation,strengtheningthelegislativeinterpretationanddevelopingLawdrafting,andamendingrevocationwork.(8)Hehastobearapportbuilderandkeeper,anactivelistener,anopenmindedandself-confidentspeaker,andsoon.(9)Sowecouldbemorelikelytomakeexerciseasaregularpartofourlives,ratherthanjusttocollapseinfrontofascreeneveryevening.(10)Butthisgoalhasbeentoodifficulttoachievetoday;theexistinglawsprioritizeeconomicgrowthratherthanprotecttheenvironment.4.(1)Iamscaredofdeath.(hyperbole)(2)LastyearOxfordUniversityfoundmeavisitingscholar.(personification)(3)Hissnoringisloudenoughtoawakethedeath.(hyperbole)(4)Thespringbreezeiskissingmyfacegently.(personification)(5)Thetreacherousseahasruinedmanyasteamer.(personification)5.(1)TheGreatWallismadeofthefleshandbloodofnumerousmeninthehistoryofChina.(synecdoche)(2)Helikestochaseskirts.(metonymy)(3)Wesixsharethesameroofinthestudents’dormitory.(synecdoche)(4)Hehadtoearnhisdailybreadbydoingoddjobs.(metonymy)(5)Thefarmswereshortofhandsduringtheharvestseason.(metonymy)6.(1)Struggleandsuccessstoriesarealwaysencouraging,inspiringandinstructing.(alliteration)(2)MaoZedongpassedawayin1976.(euphemism)(3)Optimistsfacelifebravelyinallcases:forrainorforshine,insicknessorinhealth,indifficultiesorinsmoothness.(antithesis)(4)Wehavecometodedicateaportionofthatfieldasafinalrestingplaceforthosewhoheregavetheirlivesthatthatnationmightlive.(AbrahamLincoln:GettysburgAddress)(euphemism)(5)Itwasthebestoftimes,itwastheworstoftimes,itwastheageofwisdom,itwastheageoffoolishness,itwastheepochofbelief,itwastheepochofincredulity,itwastheseasonoflight,itwastheseasonofDarkness,itwasthespringofhope,itwasthewinterofdespair,wehadeverythingbeforeus,wehadnothingbeforeus,wewereallgoingdirectofHeaven,wewereallgoingtheotherway…(CharlesDickens:ATaleofTwoCities)(antithesis)Unit61.PartⅠSeveralfriendsandIwenttoclimbasteepmountainatnight.PartⅡWithcliffyroadandlittlelight,weriskedthedangeroffallingdownthecliff.PartⅢWeweretooscaredtogoon.PartⅣWewaiteduntildaybreakandthenclimbeddown.2-4Omitted5.Itisaboutaterriblestoryofperson-killing.Yes,itis.Thenarratoristheheroofthestory,i.e.“I”.Itistoldintheorderofflashback.Theclimaxiswhentheoldmanwaskilled.Unit71-4Omitted5.EDABCFUnit81.[Note:thereareotherpossibleanswers–yoursshouldbesimilartothese,butmaynotbeexactlythesame.]Inthepast,mostwomenstayedathometotakecareofhouseworksuchascookingorcleaning.Women’sliberationhasmeantthatthissituationhasbeenchanged,andinmodernsocietywomenareplayinganalmostequalroletomeninemployment.Thishashadsignificanteffects,bothintermsofthefamily,forexamplebyimprovingqualityoflifeandincreasingchildren’ssenseofindependence,andalsoforsocietyitselfwithgreaterequalityforthesexes.Thesalaryofawomaninherlifetimeisgenerallymuchlessthanthatofaman.Shecanneverthelessmakeabigadditiontothefamilyincome.Themostimportantresultofthisisanimprovedqualityoflife.Byhelpingtokeepastablesalaryforthefamily,thepressureonthehusbandismuchreduced,henceimprovingboththehusband’sandthewife’sgoodfeeling.Additionally,thethingsthatcanbeboughtbythefamilywillalsoberaised.Thismeansthatthefamilycanhaveenoughmoneytobuymoreluxuriessuchasforeigntravelandafamilycar.Afurthereffectonthefamilyisthepromotionofindependenceinthechildren.Somemightarguethathavingbothparentsworkingmightbeharmfultothechildrenbecauseofalackofcarebyparents.However,suchchildrenhavetolearntolookafterthemselvesatanearlierage,andtheirparentsoftendependonthemtohelpwiththehousework.Asaresult,thisteachesthemimportantlifeskills.Asregardssociety,themostsignificantimpactofwomengoingtoworkisgreatersexequality.Thereareanincreasingnumberofwomenwhoarebecomingpoliticians,lawyers,andevenCEOsandcompanymanagers.Thisinturnhasledtogreaterequalityforwomeninallareasoflife,notjustemployment.Womenarenowallowedbylawtovote,theycanbeinthearmedforces,andtheyhavelegalrightstoprotectthemselvesagainsthomeviolenceorsexbotheringorunfairtreatmentatwork.Inconclusion,theincreasingnumberofwomenatworkhasbroughtaboutsomeimportantchangestofamilylife,includingimprovedqualityoflifeandincreasedindependenceforchildren,aswellasaffectingsocietyitself.Itisclearthatthesexesarestillalongwayfrombeingequalinallareasoflife,however,andperhapsthechallengeforthepresentcenturyistoensurethatthistakesplace.2.（1）Studentswhoneedextramoneycanholddownafulltimetemporaryjobduringtheirsummervacation.（2）Apersoncanalsomeetotherpeoplebygoingtoparties.（3）Inmyopinion,peopleshouldwriteclearly.3.Thisisdefinitionessay.Introduction–Yourdefinitionoffriendship.Trytobeginyouressaywithacatchyopening,brieflyintroducewhatyourpaperwillbeabout.Youwillfocusonthreeseparatequalitiesthatmakeupagoodfriend.2ndparagraph–Describethefirstqualitythatmakesupagoodfriend.Youcanprovidespecificexamplesfromyourownlife.Mymostimportantqualityinagoodfriendwouldbeagoodlistener,whoisalwayswillingtogivemeadviceandhelpmeoutwheneverIaminneed.Thinkaboutwhatmattersmostwhenyouarechoosingyourfriends.3rdparagraph–Describethesecondqualitythatmakesupagoodfriend.MysecondqualityinanyofmyfriendswouldbethattheymakemelaughandcancheermeupifIamfeelingdown.Onceagain,elaboratewhenyouarewriting.IwouldgiveyouaspecificexampleofwhenIwasdown,and‘how’myfriendshelpedmefeelbetterbymakingmelaugh.4thparagraphorconclusion–Describethethirdqualityofagoodfriend.Mythirdqualitywouldbeanyfriendofminehastohavesimilarvaluesandbeliefsasme,andenjoythesamepastimesasme,suchasphysicalactivitiessuchasrunningorvolleyball,andsimilarmusictastes,etc.Ifyoudon’twriteaboutathirdquality,summarizewhatyouhavewrittensofar.Yourconclusionissimilartoyourintroduction,justrestatewhatyouhavealreadywrittenandtrytocloseorfinishyourpaperwithastrongstatementsuchas:Idon’tknowhowIwouldgoonifitweren’tformyfriends.MybestfriendslistentomewhenIaminneed,makemelaughwhenI’msad,andallowmetoenjoyallofmyfavoritepastimes!4.Reasonswhytheyouthdropout:Didn’tlikeschoolingeneralortheschooltheywereattending.Werefailing,gettingpoorgrades,orcouldn’tkeepupwithschoolwork.Didn’tgetalongwithteachersand/orstudents.Haddisciplinaryproblems,weresuspended,orexpelled.Didn’tfeelsafeinschoolGotajob,hadafamilytosupport,orhadtroublemanagingbothschoolandwork.Gotmarried,gotpregnant,orbecameaparent.HadadrugoralcoholproblemConcludingparagraph:One-thirdofthenation’syoungpeopleisaveryconsiderableproportion,”saysBarton.“Almost45yearsago,JamesConant,formerpresidentofHarvard,saidthatthedropoutproblemwas‘socialdynamite.’Theexplosionhasoccurred,andwillcontinuetooccur.Thisisseeningrowingprisonpopulationsandincreasingwelfarecosts;ineverlowerwages;inalimitedlaborsupplyfor,aswearetold,aneconomywithanincreasingappetiteforeducatedworkers;andinthelikelihoodofraisinganewgenerationwithdimprospectsofdoingbetter-andperhapsworst.5.BlockArrangement(fourparagraphs)I.IntroductioninwhichyoustateyourpurposewhichistodiscussthedifferencesbetweenvacationinginthemountainsoratthebeachII. MountainA.ClimateB.TypesofActivitiesC.LocationIII. BeachA.ClimateB.TypesofActivitiesC.LocationIV. ConclusionPoint-by-PointorAlternatingArrangement(fiveparagraphs)I. IntroductioninwhichyoustateyourpurposewhichistodiscussdifferencesbetweenvacationinginthemountainsoratthebeachII. FirstdifferencebetweenmountainsandbeachesisclimateA.MountainsB.BeachIII. SeconddifferencebetweenmountainsandbeachesaretypesofactivitiesA.MountainsB.BeachIV. ThirddifferencebetweenmountainsandbeachesisthelocationA.MountainsB.BeachV. ConclusionUnit91. df