作文10 2021年黑龙江齐齐哈尔卷（满分作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语满分作文+万能模板+热点素材

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊真题在线作文10黑龙江省齐齐哈尔卷真题在线（黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市2021年中考英语试题）值此毕业之际，学生会主席倡议大家“携手爱校园，为母校献礼”，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。介绍你将如何为母校献礼。要求：1字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥；3.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Howtimeflies!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析考题解析本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍你将如何为母校献礼，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。满分范文满分范文Howtimeflies!It’stimetoleavemyschool.NextMonday,I’llgobacktodosomethingforit.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.First,Iwillpickuptherubbisharoundtheschool.I’llcleanthewindowsanddoors,too.ThenI’llgivetheyoungerschoolmatessomeusefuladvice.Forexample,dothehomeworkbythemselvesorlistentotheteacherscarefully.NextI’llgiveawaymynotes.It’sreallyhardtosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschoolwillhaveabetterfuture.名师点评名师点评2021年齐齐哈尔市中考英语作文跟前几年相比，难度没有太大变化，题干中要点皆有相关提示，写作中必须根据文中要点提示进行写作，要求要点必须全面，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍要做什么；第三段收尾，提出希望。保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。佳句积累1.Howtimeflies!【亮点】感叹句，意为“时光飞逝”。2.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.【亮点】开门见山，表明写该文章的目的。3.First,…Then，…Forexample,…Next…【亮点】文中运用相关衔接词，使文章更流畅。举一反三相似题①马上要初中毕业了，假如你有机会负责组织你们班的“毕业派对”，你将会如何构思设计出一个充满创意、情感和品位的毕业庆祝活动呢？请写一篇80词以上的短文，介绍你的毕业派对计划。内容要求：1.简介大致的构思；2.分点列出活动流程；3.小结活动的主要特色。注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。【参考范文】Ihaveaplanforthepartythatdividesintothreeparts.They’rePictureshow,TalentshowandSeniorhighmessage.Part1.PictureshowWebringsomephotostakenwithourteachersorclassmatesanddescribethephotoswithagoodstoryaboutourschoollives.Part2.TalentshowWecanshareourhobbieswithourclassmates.Wecanshowwhatwecandoinmusic,artorsport.Wecanalsoshowotherspecialabilitieslikeplayingmagicandsoon.Part3.SeniorhighmessageEachofuspreparesabigcard,andthenwritesdownamessageforseniorhighonthecardforeachother.Soeveryonecanexchangethebestwisheswithhisorherclassmates.Inthisparty,allofuscanshareourwonderfulexperienceinthepastthreeyears.Wecanpresentwhatthey’velearntandhowmuchprogresswe’vemade,too.Andfinallywemaylookforwardtothefuturewithlotsofencouragementoradvice.【考题解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你的毕业派对计划。这是一个开放式的作文，可以自己够了派对活动内容。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Wecanshare...，Eachofusprepares...，allofuscan...，Andfinallywemaylookforwardto...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的派对计划分成三部分，接下来介绍分成三段介绍这三部分：图片展示，才艺表演，初中留言，最后期望充满鼓励和建议的未来。此处divideinto,sharewith,writedown,exchangewith,makeprogress,lookforwardto等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。考点：提纲作文。相似题②初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆。回首三年时光,你有哪些收获?即将毕业,你有什么感受?假如你是李华,你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想,内容包括你三年学校生活的收获以及你即将毕业的感受。提示词语:knowledge,friend,memory,happy提示问题:●Whathaveyougotduringthepastthreeyears?●Howdoyoufeelupongraduation?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Duringthepastthreeyears,IhavelearntalotofknowledgefromthebooksandIhaveimprovedmystudyskills.Icangetalongwithmyteachersandclassmates.Welearnfromeachotherandhelpeachother,too.Especially,mymemoryhasimprovedalotandIcanremembermuchdifficultknowledge.Itmakesmeveryhappy.AthomeIcandosomehouseworksothatmyparentscanhavemoretimetorest.Onmywaytoschool,Icanobeythetrafficrules.WhenImeetdifficulty,Icantalktomyfriendsaboutit.NowIfeelstressedinmystudy.IhavetoomuchhomeworktodoeverydayandIhavetostayuplatetofinishit,soIhavenotimeformyhobbies.【考题解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，在写作时应结合提示词语和提示问题开展论述；主要讲述三年来的收获。2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，重点讲述自己的收获。叙述时避免汉语式英语，句意完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：getalongwithsb；learnfromeachother；improvealot；makemehappy；obeythetrafficrules；talktomyfriends；stayuplate句型：AthomeIcandosomehouseworksothatmyparentscanhavemoretimetorest.相似题③作为一名即将毕业的初三学生，回想过去三年学习生活，一定会有让你难忘的人和事。请你为学校英语校刊写一篇毕业感言。提示要点：1.难忘的人和事；2.你的感想和收获；3.……要求：1.80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.包含以上要点，可以适当扩充。3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Howtimeflies!SoonIwillgraduate(毕业)fromjuniorhighschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Howtimeflies!SoonIwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears.Iremembermanythings.Iremembermyfirstbirthdaypartyatschoolwhichwasheldbymyheadteacher,sincethenIhaven’tfeltlonelyanymore.IremembermyEnglishteacher,whowasalwayssopatientwhenIaskedhimquestions.Iremembermymathteacher,wholistenedtomecarefullyandexplainedeverythingsoclearly.ThereisnodoubtthatIhaveachievedlotsofknowledgeandskillsduringthethreeyears,whicharegoodformyfuturestudy.I’llneverforgetmydearteachersandclassmates.Iwillcherishmystudyexperiencesatschool.Becauseitistheschoollifethatcolorsmywholelife.【考题解析】1.题干解读：本文为材料作文，要求就初中三年难忘的人和事写一篇文章。时态可用现在时和过去时，人称用第一人称。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一段用于引出“难忘的人”这一主题；第二段则详细描述了初中三年有哪些老师令作者难忘；第三段收尾，表示自己将永远记得这三年时光。例文层次分明，思路清晰，包含了题目所给全部要点，并进行了适当拓展，单词拼写语法无误，使用了一些复杂复合句型，为本文增加了一些亮点。3.高分亮点：短语：graduatefrom，lookback，not…anymore，listento，lotsof，begoodfor。句型：（1）IremembermyEnglishteacher,whowasalwayssopatientwhenIaskedhimquestions.（定语从句）（2）ThereisnodoubtthatIhaveachievedlotsofknowledgeandskillsduringthethreeyears,whicharegoodformyfuturestudy.（Thereisnodoubtthat…固定句型）相似题④假如你是Eric，即将初中毕业，作为一名优秀学生代表，你将在毕业典礼上发言。请你根据内容提示写一篇发言稿吧！内容提示：1.毕业前的感受；2.对未来的展望。要求：1.要求要点齐全，语意连贯，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。3.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,dearteachers,parentsandfriends.Threeyearswillsoonpass.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodlucktoallofyouandthanksforyourattention.【参考范文】Goodmorning,dearteachers,parentsandfriends.Threeyearswillsoonpass.Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears’life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI’mgoodatit.Iwanttothankher.Atthesametime,IhopethatallthestudentshaveagoodfutureandIamlookingforwardtoamuchhappierhighschoollife.Goodlucktoallofyouandthanksforyourattention.【考题解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。围绕“毕业前的感受”及“对未来的展望”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般将来时。分为三段式：第一段描述自己毕业前的感受；第二段描述令自己印象最深的一件事，并展望未来；最后一段表达祝愿和感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。相似题⑤初中毕业之际,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业典礼活动计划。假定你是李华,请根据要点写一封信,提出你的建议。写作要点:毕业典礼时间、地点7月1日,学校报告厅三项活动1.校长讲话送祝福2.学生发言谈感恩3.……写作要求:1.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.不能出现真实的校名和人名,否则不得分;3.写作要点都必须用上,紧扣主题,适当发挥。参考词汇:毕业典礼graduationceremony;前进中学QianjinMiddleSchool;学校报告厅theschoolhall。Deareditor,I'mveryhappytohavethechancetoshowyoumyplanforthegraduationceremony.