读后续写+花瓶、头发与手足情：意外中的爱+讲义 高二上学期12月冬季联考英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MyyoungerbrotherandIwerehomewatchingcartoonswhilemyfathersleptandmymotherwasoutshopping.Ileftmybrotherinthelivingroomandwenttogetsomethingtodrink.AsIwaspullingsomeorangejuice,Iheardsomethingbreak.FirstsIlookedintoseeifmyfatherhadwokenupandhehadn’t.ThenIquicklyrantoseewhathadhappened.WhenIwentintothelivingroom.Iwasshocked.Mybrotherhadbrokenmymother’sfavoritevase.“Whatdidyoudo?”Iasked.“Ibrokeit!”Mybrotheranswered,“Itwasanaccident.”Knowingthathewasshockedandfrightened,andnotwantinghimtogetintrouble,Ididwhatanyfriendwoulddo.Itriedtohelphim.Iquicklyranandgotsomeglue.Ididn’tknowwhattimemymotherwasgoingtobebackorwhenmyfatherwasgoingtowakeup,soItriedtohurry.Ianxiouslygatheredupallofthebrokenpiecesandstartedtogluethemtogether.IttookmeanhourbutfinallyIfixedthevase.Thencametherealdisaster.“Oh,myGod!Oh,myGod!”Iscreamed.IhadfixedthevasebutIhadaccidentallygluedmyhairtoit!WhilemybrotherlookedatmelikeIwassomekindoffool,Icarriedthevase—withmyhairattachedtoit—intothebathroom.Ilookedinthemirror.“Mybeautifulhair,”Icried.Realizingthattherewasnowaytopullmyhairfromthevase,Igrabbedapairofscissors.Witheverysinglestrand(缕)ofhairthatIcut,Icriedagain.Myhairwasruined,andthevaselookedasifawigwasattachedtoit!AsIwasleavingthebathroomwithmyridiculousnewhairdo,Iheardthekeyturninthefrontdoor.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Mymotherwasback!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意作者和弟弟在家，父母分别在睡觉和外出购物。作者去拿饮料时听到东西破碎的声音，发现弟弟打碎了妈妈最爱的花瓶。出于不想让弟弟受罚的心理，作者用胶水试图修复花瓶，结果却不小心把自己的头发粘在了花瓶上。作者试图把头发从花瓶上弄下来但无果，最后只好用剪刀剪掉头发，这时妈妈回来了。二、故事山分析开场：作者和弟弟在家，父母不在身边，营造了一个相对自由但也容易引发意外的场景。上升：弟弟打碎花瓶，这是事件的开端，引发了后续一系列的动作。高潮：作者用胶水粘花瓶却把头发粘住，然后不得不剪掉头发，情节在此达到紧张的顶点。下降：妈妈回来，紧张的氛围即将得到缓解。结局：未给出，留给续写。三、伏笔及续写回应伏笔：弟弟打碎花瓶时父亲在睡觉，这为作者有时间去处理花瓶事件埋下伏笔。续写回应：在作者处理花瓶问题的过程中，父亲都没有醒来，使得情节得以顺利发展。伏笔：作者不知道妈妈什么时候回来，增加了事件处理的紧张感。续写回应：妈妈突然回来，让作者陷入了更加尴尬的境地。伏笔：作者为了不让弟弟受罚决定帮忙，体现了对弟弟的保护。续写回应：在后续情节中，这种保护弟弟的心理得到了强化，尽管自己遭遇了头发被剪的尴尬，但出发点是对弟弟的爱护。伏笔：作者选择用胶水粘花瓶，暗示可能会出现意外。续写回应：意外发生，头发被粘住，推动情节发展到高潮。伏笔：作者听到钥匙转动的声音，预示着妈妈即将出现，制造紧张氛围。续写回应：妈妈回来看到作者和花瓶的样子，引发后续的情节发展。四、续写要点第一段：妈妈的反应：妈妈看到作者和花瓶先是惊讶，然后可能会因为作者保护弟弟的初衷而感到欣慰，同时也会安慰作者关于头发的事情。作者的感受：作者从紧张和尴尬中逐渐放松，感受到妈妈的理解。第二段：作者对友谊的思考：作者躺在床上，深刻意识到自己对弟弟的保护是出于深厚的情谊，这种情谊超越了物质和外表。未来的行动：作者决定以后在面对类似情况时，依然会选择保护弟弟，并且会更加机智地处理问题。五、情感线文章开始时作者是轻松地在拿饮料，听到花瓶破碎声后变得紧张和担忧，担心弟弟会受罚。在处理花瓶过程中，作者变得焦虑，尤其是头发被粘住时更加慌乱。妈妈回来后，作者感到极度的尴尬和不安。最后躺在床上，作者从对头发被毁的难过转变为对自己保护弟弟行为的欣慰，意识到亲情和友谊的珍贵。六、故事线作者和弟弟在家，父母分别在睡觉和外出。弟弟打碎妈妈最爱的花瓶。作者用胶水试图修复花瓶，却把头发粘住。作者无奈剪掉头发，这时妈妈回来。妈妈看到作者和花瓶的情景。作者躺在床上思考自己的行为，意识到对弟弟的情谊。七、主旨升华句（英文）Truefriendshipisshownnotintimesofease,butinthefaceoftrouble.（真正的友谊不是在安逸时体现，而是在面对麻烦时显现。）Familybondsarethetiesthatbindus,makingusdoselflessacts.（亲情是将我们联系在一起的纽带，让我们做出无私的行为。）Sometimes,sacrificeinthenameoffriendshipisthemostpreciousgift.（有时，以友谊之名做出的牺牲是最珍贵的礼物。）Theloveforourfamilymembersoftendrivesustomakeunexpectedsacrifices.（对家人的爱常常驱使我们做出意想不到的牺牲。）Inthejourneyoflife,actsoffriendshipwithinthefamilyarelikelighthouses,guidingus.（在人生旅途中，家庭中的友谊之举就像灯塔，指引着我们。）八、写作示范第一篇Mymotherwasback!

Shestaredatmeandthevasewithamixofshockandconfusion.Istoodthere,rootedtothespot,waitingforhertoexplode.Butinstead,sheburstoutlaughing.Shesaid,“Yousillychild,whydidyoudothis?”Itoldherabouttryingtoprotectmybrother.Shethenhuggedmeandsaid,“Yourkindnessismorepreciousthanthevase.”Ifeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.

Ithoughtabouthowmuchmybrothermeanttome.Althoughmyhairwasamessnow,itwasasmallpricetopayforprotectinghim.ImadeavowtomyselfthatIwouldalwaysbethereformybrother,nomatterwhatsillysituationswemightgetinto.Becausethat'swhattruefriendshipandfamilyareallabout.第二篇Mymotherwasback!

Themomentshesawmewiththevaseattachedtomyhair,hereyeswidened.Iquicklyexplainedthewholestory.Tomysurprise,shedidn'tscoldme.Instead,shegentlyremovedthevasefrommyhead,saying,“Yourintentiontoprotectyourbrotherissweet,butnexttime,cometomefirst.”Inodded,feelinggratefulforherunderstanding.WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.

Iunderstoodthatthebondbetweenmybrotherandmewasunbreakable.Myactwasdrivenbyloveandadesiretokeephimoutoftrouble.Irealizedthatsometimes,ouractionsfortheoneswelovemayleadtounexpectedconsequences,buttheloveitselfiswhattrulymatters.Iclosedmyeyes,contentwithmydecisiontoprotectmybrother.【答案】Mymotherwasback!Mybrotherrushedtohisroomandquicklypretendedtobeasleep,leavingmetodealwithMumallbymyself.BeforeIcouldexplain,mymothershoutedangrilyatmeand