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高考英语读后续写语篇练习懂事男孩杰里米的爱与忧1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jeremywasaconsiderateboy.Hisdayswerefilledwithasenseofresponsibility,whetheritwasspendingtimeplayingwithhisbabysisterSuzy,assistingMomwithcookingdinner,ordryingdishesforDadaftersupper.ButJeremy’sfavoritejobwasfeedingFletch.Fletchwasthefamilycat.Withitsbeautifultiger-stripedcoat,Fletchwasmorethanjustapet;itwasaloyalcompanionandprovidedemotionalvalueduringhisstressfuldays.Theirbondwasunbreakable.4续写原文WhenFletchwashungry,ithadauniquewayofconveyingitsneedstoJeremy-bybumping(碰)hisheadonJeremy’slegs.AndJeremywouldimmediatelyattendtohisfriend.Tohim,sharinghouseholdchores(家务活)andcaringforfamilymemberswerenotjusttasks;theywerefilledwithjoy.Oneevening,asthefamilygatheredfordinner,littleSuzyrealizedshehadlostherfavoritedoll.Hertearswereabouttointerruptthepeacefulatmosphereofsupper.Mom,whowasalwayscaring,gentlytaskedJeremywithfindingthedollinthebackyard.Withouthesitation,Jeremysprangintoaction,determinedtobringasmilebacktoSuzy’sface.5续写原文Underthedim(朦胧的)moonlight,hesearchedcarefullyandeventuallyfoundthebrightreddollamongthegrass.Withasmileonhisface,hereturnedhurriedly,bringingasenseofrelieftotheentirefamily.However,Jeremy’sjoywasshort.Ashepreparedforbed,herealizedthatFletchwasmissing.ItwascertainlyarestlesseveningforJeremyasheanxiouslysearchedeverycornerofthehouseforFletch.Startinginthebathroom,hequicklymovedontothehallway,hisheartpoundingwitheachstep.Findingnosignofthecat,herandownthestairs,hiseyesscanningeveryinchofthehouse,andpanicsetinashesearchedeverywhere,onlytodiscoverthebackdoorwideopen.Tearswelledupinhiseyes.ThethoughtthatFletchwasnowheretobefoundhithimcrazily.6段首句Paragraph1:HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Paragraph2:Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairs,andopenedthebackdoor.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了杰里米是个懂事的男孩,他日常会帮忙做家务、照顾家人,最喜欢喂家里的猫弗莱奇。一天晚餐时,妹妹的玩偶丢了,杰里米帮忙找回,可晚上准备睡觉时却发现弗莱奇不见了,后门还开着,他焦急地四处寻找无果。后来他向妈妈求助,两人找遍各处也没找到。第二天黎明,杰里米下楼打开后门,惊喜地发现弗莱奇回来了,原来它只是出去经历了一场小冒险,一家人又恢复了往日的平静,杰里米也明白了不要轻易放弃希望。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.他匆忙跑到厨房,妈妈正安静地喝着茶。杰里米眼眶泛红,声音带着一丝颤抖,向妈妈诉说着弗莱奇不见的事情。妈妈放下茶杯,轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀,安慰他别着急,然后和他一起开始在房子里仔细寻找。他们先是检查了弗莱奇平时爱待的角落,又在家具底下查看,可每一处都没有弗莱奇的踪影。杰里米的心里越来越慌,他担心弗莱奇是不是遭遇了什么危险,妈妈则一直轻声安抚着他,两人在夜色中不放过任何一个可能的地方。11续写思路分析Para2:Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairs,andopenedthebackdoor.当黎明破晓,杰里米飞奔下楼,迫不及待地打开后门。阳光洒在门口,他的眼睛急切地四处搜寻。突然,他看到弗莱奇正安静地坐在台阶上,毛发有些凌乱,看起来像是经历了一番奔波。杰里米激动地冲过去,一把将弗莱奇抱在怀里,嘴里不停地念叨着“你终于回来了”。弗莱奇“喵喵”叫着,用脑袋蹭着杰里米的脸,似乎在诉说着昨晚的经历。杰里米带着弗莱奇回到屋里,一家人都围了过来,看到弗莱奇平安无事,大家都松了一口气,杰里米也暗暗发誓以后一定会更加小心,不让弗莱奇再走丢。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Withhiseyesbrimmingwithtearsandhisvoicequivering,JeremyinformedMomaboutFletch'sdisappearance.Momputdownhercupandgavehimareassuringpatontheshoulder,tellinghimnottoworry.Thentheybegantosearchthehousemeticulously.TheycheckedthecornerswhereFletchusuallylikedtostayandlookedunderthefurniture,buttherewasnosignofFletch.Jeremy'sheartwasfilledwithgrowingpanic,fearingthatsomethingbadhadhappenedtoFletch.Momkeptsoothinghimgentlyastheycontinuedtheirsearchinthedarkness,leavingnostoneunturned.14范文呈现Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairsandflungopenthebackdoor.Thesunlightstreamedin,andhiseyesscannedtheareaeagerly.Suddenly,hespottedFletchsittingquietlyonthedoorstep,itsfurabittousled,lookingasifithadbeenthroughanadventure.Overwhelmedwithjoy,JeremydashedoverandscoopedFletchintohisarms,murmuring"You'rebackatlast."FletchmeowedandrubbeditsheadagainstJeremy'sface,asifrecountingtheeventsofthepreviousnight.JeremycarriedFletchbackinside,andthewholefamilygatheredaround.RelievedtoseeFletchsafeandsound,JeremysilentlyvowedtobemorecarefulinthefuturetopreventFletchfromgettinglostagain.15升级版范文呈现HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Eyesglisteningwithtearsandvoicetrembling,JeremybrokethenewsofFletch'svanishing.Mom,settingasidehercupwithagentleclink,placedasoothinghandonhisshoulder,murmuringwordsofcomfort.Together,theyembarkedonapainstakingsearch.EverynookandcrannythatFletchhadfrequentedwasscrutinized;underthefurniture,behindthecurtains,yetallinvain.Itwasasifthecathadvanishedintothinair,leavingJeremy'sheartpoundingwithdread.16升级版范文呈现Asdawnbroke,Jeremy,likeaboltoflightning,rusheddownstairsandflungopenthebackdoor.Bathedinthegoldenraysofthemorningsun,theresatFletchonthedoorstep.Itsfur,ruffledanddisheveled,borewitnesstoitsnocturnalescapade.Withanexclamationofsheerrelief,Jeremyscoopedupthefeline,holdingitcloseasifitwerethemostprecioustreasure.Fletch,purringcontentedly,rubbedagainsthim,asilentreassuranceofitssaferet
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